Smitten

It jus' ain't no use, all my tireless efforts,
Everything I do to maintain cool is never,
Ever gon' work, might as well jus' quit,
Cuz truth is, I love her more than myself,
And I don't give a damn 'bout nuttin' else.
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Jun 2014
About this poem:
Love, oh what a feeling!

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Comments (16)

Mizzy4
I feel you Joseph !
Great love write.....
Kind regards Mick.

wow thumbs up
Spartacus2012
Refreshing write brother Joseph!

Kentip hat
Joseph1112
Hello brother Mick, thx for your comment, isn't love a wonderful thing? J handshake
Joseph1112
Hey brother Ken thank u sir, you have a great evening, J handshake
Girlygirl196349
MR J what can I say? Yay!! I'm so happy for you !! You deserve much happiness I love the poem !hug cheering angel wave
Joseph1112
Hi Laura, thanks I'm not in love right now but I know the feeling and it's great! Jbouquet
darkhorse555
takes you over blind dear friend beautifully penned pieceangel grin
candykid
I know the feeling too brother Joseph. ...I couldn't have said it better....straight up....thumbs up
diana_1
simple, straight up from the heart, beautiful and refreshing, applause
Poetnumber1
Heartfelt piece Joseph. Enjoyed the read.cheers
Joseph1112
Hey Liam, Christian, Diana, MM, thank u guys for stopping by and for your comments, u all be blessed! Jhandshake handshake bouquet handshake
fjamesj9701
Short and direct Brother J, follow your gut. Good stuff my friend and much Love … Jessecheers
Joseph1112
Hey bro. James, glad to see u friend, thank u be blessed Jhandshake
Bajanshay
@Joseph,
that is the way love goes!hug nicely done!cheers
Joseph1112
Hello dear friend Shay, nice to see u again, have u written anything new? I will check as I always look forward to reading u, be blessed sister, Jhug bouquet
123whisper
Wowowo...so beautifuly direct.
"I love her more than myself" wine
It's deeply touching thoughtteddybear
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