Deception

by candykidAshburn, Virginia, USA

Jun 2014 1,174 Views 29 comments

Deception

Unless there are certain changes that completely rearranges...
Strangeness that's contagious that can change with simple plainness...
Confessions of your shapeless shapes are no means simply painless...
I hate to see, what they might bring, the pain you bring is shameless...

I used to wonder why it was I felt the way I feel...
I used to love the pain you give, it made me feel so real...
Now I know your true intent, you've finally revealed...
Intense intentions, in wrong dimensions, no longer are concealed....

~ ~ ~ ~ ~

Posted: Jun 2014

About this poem:

A simple poem for all of you that have been deceived by a loved one.

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Comments (29)

Spartacus2012Biloxi, Mississippi USAJun 27, 2014

Good write Christian..Very expressive!

Ken

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lindsyjonesunknown, California USAJun 27, 2014

CK, part of love is hate and hurt and yes, welcome to my world of unending view of misguided emotions.

Take care..

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Mizzy4Navan, Meath IrelandJun 27, 2014

The only thing simple about this
poem Christian is the title.
It carries all the harsh sentiments
despite very intence rhyme,
As only you can........
Mick.

Girlygirl196349Fullerton, California USAJun 27, 2014

Awesome poem I feel you!! !,, I myself tried to make a concession for all the deception only to realize it caused me much depression now my impression is life is filled with much deception!,

darkhorse555donegal, Donegal IrelandJun 27, 2014

i would say most people could relate to this piece christian beautifully penned dear friend

SnowCoveredMusefarmington, Maine USAJun 27, 2014

C~

Great meter and rhyme
wonderful as usyal!

~SAS~

cafetwo2010Harford county, Maryland USAJun 28, 2014

You've expressed a sad truth with great style my
friend.
Cafe

123whisperMelbourne, Victoria AustraliaJun 28, 2014

Awaysome poem dear friend

I think Deception is all around but if I made wrong choice I often consider 'what have I miss to notice' to missguide myself,have I really listen and follow all my senses ?

Thank yuo for sharing

RedexNorthumberland, England UKJun 28, 2014

This one so good on open mike night for sure the rhythm great with a few beers I,d say

candykidOPAshburn, Virginia USAJun 28, 2014

Thanks very much Ken......

candykidOPAshburn, Virginia USAJun 28, 2014

Phyllis, my world is not so different from yours. ....thank you sister......

candykidOPAshburn, Virginia USAJun 28, 2014

Thanks brother Mick....there is definitely wordplay hidden in this one. Thank you so much.

candykidOPAshburn, Virginia USAJun 28, 2014

Laura....receptive reflections cause certain deceptions reflected in false perceptions without exceptions...
I hope I will soon be attending your reception.

I always love your clever comments. ..thank you so much girl.....

Girlygirl196349Fullerton, California USAJun 28, 2014

Yes I made a connection
Still looking for direction
I believe you have false perception
Under no exception
Where there ever be a reception!

It's POERTY don't believe everything you read ::teddybear:

candykidOPAshburn, Virginia USAJun 28, 2014

Haha.....the only thing I don't believe is that you have given up on your reception....don't forget to send me an invitation. ...

candykidOPAshburn, Virginia USAJun 28, 2014

Since hell is where I eternally dwell, I control the weather there very well. Ice crystals are forming at my command and it is freezing as we speak......don't feel bad about my lack of a response to your email. ...
You are not exclusive. .....

Girlygirl196349Fullerton, California USAJun 28, 2014

Whatever candy kid!,,

Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoJul 1, 2014

Maybe the worst pain of all is being deceived by someone who you truly trust. Nicely crafted my friend.

Joseph1112Brampton, Ontario CanadaJul 1, 2014

Fantastic write brother Christian. I loved the flow as well, J 2

Odette67Penrith, Cumbria, England UKJul 1, 2014

First class writing Christian.

candykidOPAshburn, Virginia USAJul 2, 2014

Liam, I know you can certainly relate dear friend. Thanks for your comment...best wishes for you....

candykidOPAshburn, Virginia USAJul 2, 2014

Thank you snow. ..

candykidOPAshburn, Virginia USAJul 2, 2014

Thanks cafe....I think we've all had a taste of it on one level or another. Thanks again....

candykidOPAshburn, Virginia USAJul 2, 2014

Interesting comment whisper. Accidentally making a wrong choice is innocent, but intentionally using deception as a tool for ones own selfish reasons is entirely different. Thank you for taking the time to read and comment sweetheart.

candykidOPAshburn, Virginia USAJul 2, 2014

Thank you redex. ...a few beers and sloe-gin fizzes for sure.

candykidOPAshburn, Virginia USAApr 7, 2015

Girlygirl. ..I was reminiscing about your fun comments....thanks dear.