Enlightenment

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A romantic thought of death is to believe their the ones alive
Although we embrace the living perhaps we are the ones with covered eyes
I pondered on this notion during my peaceful walks through hell
Aligned with rusting treasures thrown from foolish wishing wells
Considerately it comforts me with a temporary escape
Deep within meditation I elevate my mind beyond my grave
Giving a life unto the ghost inside of this hollow shell
While the living say to cast the dead to rot amongst themselves
But I believe death has the potential to become one with perfect light
Slowly removing darkness until we ascend into new heights
Although at times it may be difficult and sometimes filled with pain
Those who have endured will prevail eternally inside of grace
So as life is like dirty water and within the depth of all its murk
I am the lotus flower reborn, cleansed, and free of dirt
While the world around me is muddy, dismal, harsh, and filled with gloom
I will achieve enlightenment and beneath the sun my soul shall forever bloom

~ JJF ~
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Posted: Jun 2014
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You must be a lotus, unfolding its petals when the sun rises in the sky, unaffected by the slush where it is born or even the water which sustains it
~ Sai Baba ~

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Spartacus2012
Good spiritual write Jesse..Sometimes we have to look within..

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Girlygirl196349
wave Picture is so beautiful! I love the poem the positive ending warms my heart you are greatly missed joy cartwheel hug cheering angel : flower
jonE2tone
But I believe death has the potential to become one with perfect light
Slowly removing darkness until we ascend into new heights


Good stuff , I see you know much about religions or beliefs and their relation to the Lotus flower. White is a good choicethumbs up
fjamesj9701
Thank you Mr Ken for reading. Always a pleasure my friend …Jessehandshake
Joseph1112
Excellent write Jesse my brother, u leave me with much to think on and strive for REBIRTH, "while the world around me is..." J be blessed friend. handshake
gnj4u
Hi, fjamesj9701,
As defined, enlightenment is "the state of being enlightened: to live in spiritual enlightenment". So, it would follow, it is through living, that one becomes so. Oh, to open ourselves into beauty and float above that which both nourishes and challenges us. Thanks for sharing your poetic contemplations on Enlightenment, Slowly removing darkness until we ascend into new heights...
morgen90210
Jesse James this is enlightening as it gets....good stuff ...like reading it .
123whisper
Spiritual enlightenment often comes while facing lot's of challenges of darkness and most probably thanks to thous darkness time experiences you bloosom with beautiful soul flower that enriches all of us to enjoy in it's essence.Thank you for sharing hug teddybear
Poetnumber1
Great stuff Skywalker and I liked the quotation to. cheers
branksome
"Enlightenment is the 4th Freedom of "The Nine Freedoms", a lasting condition after many lives of love and service.

A really good poem.
Redex
I do not know about life or if their is any life after death except in someones memories but your poem was beautiful all the same.teddybear
candykid
There is certainly life after death. Alternately some people are dead inside while living.....good thoughts Jes.
Mizzy4
Jesse,
You have painted a dark subject
in bright colours.......
Enjoyed much !
Mick


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candykid
Super comment OK. .....very savvy reading between the lines. Jesse has a definite skill in expressing his thoughts in written form, and I love it because we come from almost the same place.
SnowCoveredMuse
okay i loved this so much
i had to re-read it several times
Extremely enlightening,

I was thinking
I could see us all
gathering after this
life to share poetry.

Great job!!!!

~SAS

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fjamesj9701
Thank you Mr The Ken always so glad to see you stopping by, much love and Cheers … Jessehandshake
fjamesj9701
Aww Miss LGG always a pleasure and miss everyone including you as well.. Cheers my dear and thank you much wine
fjamesj9701
Thank you Mr 2Tones always a pleasure my friend. Cheers …Jesseconversing
fjamesj9701
Blessings to you Brother J . I think most of us will achieve even if victory is only in the effort than find comfort is trying. Thank you much my friend … Jessehandshake
fjamesj9701
Always love your insight Miss GNJ it shows a lot and always a pleasure to see you around … Much love …Jessewine
fjamesj9701
Always good to see you Mr Morgen and thank you old friend. Much love and cheers … Jesse Jamescheers
fjamesj9701
Thank you Mis ASG and a lovely photo. Always a pleasure My Alien Sister. Much love …Jessewine transport
fjamesj9701
Although I try to not let the muddy water steal my joys I surely can say I have much darkness that surrounds me and therefore I will be the light . Thank you my Lovely Whisper always a pleasure … Jessewine
fjamesj9701
Mr MMPNUnOB1 Ive missed you brother much and am pleased to have read this from you. Thank you always my friend much love and cheers … Jessecheers
fjamesj9701
Ah Mr Branksome glad to read from you my friend and enthused by your knowledge. Always a pleasure and thank youhandshake
fjamesj9701
Always a pleasure My Lovely REd and thank you . Missed you while you were away. Much love and cheers … Jessewine
fjamesj9701
Mr CK so true and that is the saddest truth to life and that is being dead inside before its physically time to go and surely there is something after for the universe waste nothing I believe. Much love my friend … Jessecheers
Diamondl1
Very deep! Very nice..thumbs up
diana_1
unbelievable, enervating..... lotus flower...... incredible write....wine
trurorob
Enjoyed this Jesse, sometimes I wish I wasn't such an Atheist especially as I get older.
Rob
fjamesj9701
Thank you Sir Mick very much for your time and encouragement. Much love and cheers my friend .. Jessehandshake
fjamesj9701
Aww why thank you Miss OK so glad that my words can reach people and I always appreciate your time and comments. Thank you always … Jessewine
fjamesj9701
Thank you so much Miss SC I m honored that it reached a part of you as well. Always a pleasure and thank you much . Cheers and Much Love … Jessewine
fjamesj9701
Thank you always my Lady C and always a pleasure to hear from you. Warmest regards and thank you … Much love and cheers … Jesse purple heart
fjamesj9701
Thank you much Diamond for your time and thoughts, also its nice to meet another poet. Cheers…Jessewine
fjamesj9701
Thank you much Diane and always so glad to see you. Much love my dear … Jessewine
fjamesj9701
Hey Rob , thank you much my friend and I won't hold it against youlaugh Truly though I always respect your visits, time, and words. Always a pleasure my friend … Jessehandshake
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