Sometimes I think I love you.. But sometimes I'm not so sure.. If it's me that you really love, Or the way that all heads turn.. When we walk in to some place together.. Because we make such a pretty pair, When we are out and about together.. hand in hand, And I can tell by the gleam in your eyes.. You are enjoying all of the attention.. And milking it. for all that you can.. Sometimes, I think that I'm only important to you, When it makes you look good.. Sometimes I really feel so foolish.. And you know I probably should.
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Posted: Mar 2010
About this poem:
opening my eyes..through the eyes of a captive dolphin or killer whale.. captivity.. it's not what was meant to be..
I like the way your poem is in the shape of a pawn in a chess game.
PinkpoetressClarksburg, West Virginia USAMar 2, 2010
Intense and deep meaning in this poem. I can feel your emotions. Lovely piece of work, as usual.
EarlgreyteaLimassol, CyprusMar 2, 2010
Wow, Storm, touching, soooo touching..., sorry for your pain, often I feel that there are very few 'real men' left on the planet... Very astute of you to fathom the male psyche the way you have... Being the Father of six daughters, I often despair at the way women are being so under-appreciated... it takes a mature soul to realize the value of and give thanks for the blessing of a good woman...
paloma66Manukau, Auckland New ZealandMar 2, 2010
Its an eye-opener for men to realize that women cannot be used to boost their ego or suit their whims & fancies.I agree with Earlgreytea, He understands,having six daughters'.God bless you Earlgreytea.As I have written in my profile if a man respects his mother & sisters,then he should respect other women. Thank you for airing your feelings,QuietStormF:
Thank-you for your comments Earlgreytea.. I was married to such a man and go figure.. happend uppn the same type of relationship after that ended.. Live and learn and then move on.. right ..
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shape of a pawn in a chess game.
Thank you for airing your feelings,QuietStormF: