Glow In The Dark Horse Liams 5 7 5 Challenge

by candykidAshburn, Virginia, USA

Aug 2014 1,112 Views 15 comments

Glow-In-The-Dark Horse * Liam's 5-7-5 Challenge *

Author: candykid

Liam's horse is dark...
And yet the light that he brings...
Is a gorgeous thing....

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Posted: Aug 2014

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Comments (15)

darkhorse555donegal, Donegal IrelandAug 29, 2014

really touching deep beautiful piece christian speechless you have me lost for words god bless you

Girlygirl196349Fullerton, California USAAug 29, 2014

This is so beautiful ! Liam is a wonderful kind hearted man

weemick1960Fife, Scotland UKAug 29, 2014

Hi Christian, well the words In your Haiku say It all. A fine dedication for one Loved by so many here, our Liam. Your vision I like a lot and I totally agree with.
Have a nice night. Catch you later. Your Friend always....MIKE.

Mizzy4Navan, Meath IrelandAug 30, 2014

Lovely haiku Christian,
Great message and
very smart title.......

Cheers buddy !
Regards Mick.

Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoAug 30, 2014

Lovely structured haiku Christian.

Odette67Penrith, Cumbria, England UKSep 1, 2014

Liam's horse is dark...
And yet the light that he brings...
Is a gorgeous thing....

So true, nice one Christian.

gnj4uBoston, Massachusetts USASep 1, 2014

Hi, candykid,
Though the horse is dark, Liam's light brings haiku to Poet's Corner. And, yes, it Is a gorgeous thing.... Thanks for sharing yours.

orientalkoruGlenella, Queensland AustraliaSep 1, 2014

That's a lovely Haiku
and a lovely thing to say to a
fellow poet CK!

FellsmanLake District, Cumbria, England UKSep 1, 2014

Hi Christian

Liam's sure a leading light in this neck of the woods - he must be tickled at this tribute in haiku style. I don't quite get the horse connection, but there again, I never was the sharpest knife in the drawer.