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Ancient Cure. ( 5-7-5 challenge)

My heart yearns for bliss,
So love-sick I reminisc,
Cure me with your kiss.
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Posted: Aug 2014
About this poem:
Thanks Liam for the challenge.

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Comments (29)

mcradloff
Kissing does seem to cure loneliness, if only I could do it more often.doh
beautifulyou
Nice one Mick :)
darkhorse555
really excellent i tip my hat to you mickangel grin
JEANIEMAC
Know nothing about 5-7-5.
Only know I love this story in three lines.
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Cheers for your nice comment
Mac..........regards Mick.


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paloma66
Summed it all up in three lines Mick good one.I know they cure kids.applause
123whisper
For all love- sick which heart yearns for bliss could it be more healing in lonliest time than to kiss yourself in mirror wink laugh Lovely cute poem !teddybear
ImagineLove
Mizzy this is very nice. Bliss and Kiss...like them both1!lips purple heart
Odette67
My heart yearns for bliss,
So love-sick I reminisc,
Cure me with your kiss.


A kiss and a hug are what we humans crave from the cradle to the grave.
Lovely Haiku Mick. lips hug
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Good to see you back
Beautiful you.......
Thank you for your comment !
Hope you've been writing
in your absence !

Regards Mick.

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Thanks again Liam,
Great challenge .......
Mick.

peace
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Thanks Jeanie,
For the nice comment.
Mick.

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Thank you for your nice
review Paloma.
Regards Mick.

angel2
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I really appreciate your
suggestion Thea,
But I would dread to
Kiss myself scold laugh

Best wishes......
Mick.

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Fellsman
Hi Mick

I keep apologising for my lack of knowledge of the haiku form - but there is no mistaking the message here (I do a fair bit of reminiscing myself) - I hope this plaintive plea is soon answered. wink

Best wishes

Bill cheers
RAVENGYPSY42
Amazing... in 3 lines Mick... I'm learning...
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Thank you Jade for your
nice comment.....
Me too,

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Thank you Christina,
For your kind review.....
You're quite right dear,
I live in hope sigh

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Bill, I'm not exactly an
Authority on haiku's myself,
I chance my arm giggle
Thanks for your kind wishes.

Regards Mick.

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candykid
Nice entry Mick. It's not easy to rhyme every line in such a restricted format.....thumbs up cheers
Poetnumber1
Nicely done Mick. Loved your entry.
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Cheers Raven,
I think I'm more a pupil
than a teacher ,
Regards Mick.

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gnj4u
Hi, Mizzy4,
This Ancient Cure has survived the test of time. Definitely, much can be cured with a kiss — especially when from that special someone. Thank you for sharing.
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Cheers Christian,
For your kind review.

Regards Mick.
buddies
orientalkoru
What's more ancient that love and kisses?
Awesome Haiku Mick!
Happygolucky4u
Very nice.....but I can't cure you my lips are not long enough to reach over the big pond. I am sure someone closer will help blues
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Thanks M, for your
favourable comment.

Mick.
buddies
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I appreciate your lovely
review on this one Joy.
Regards Mick.

teddybear
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Thank you so much Kathy,
Appreciated.........Mick.

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