Ancient Cure 5 7 5 challenge

by Mizzy4Navan, Meath, Ireland

Aug 2014 950 Views 29 comments

Ancient Cure. ( 5-7-5 challenge)

Author: Mizzy4

My heart yearns for bliss,
So love-sick I reminisc,
Cure me with your kiss.

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Posted: Aug 2014

About this poem:

Thanks Liam for the challenge.

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Comments (29)

mcradloffPlatteville, Wisconsin USAAug 30, 2014

Kissing does seem to cure loneliness, if only I could do it more often.

beautifulyouNew York, USAAug 30, 2014

Nice one Mick :)

darkhorse555donegal, Donegal IrelandAug 30, 2014

really excellent i tip my hat to you mick

JEANIEMACLETTERKENNY, Donegal IrelandAug 30, 2014

Know nothing about 5-7-5.
Only know I love this story in three lines.

Mizzy4OPNavan, Meath IrelandAug 30, 2014

Cheers for your nice comment
Mac..........regards Mick.

paloma66Manukau, Auckland New ZealandAug 30, 2014

Summed it all up in three lines Mick good one.I know they cure kids.

123whisperMelbourne, Victoria AustraliaAug 30, 2014

For all love- sick which heart yearns for bliss could it be more healing in lonliest time than to kiss yourself in mirror

Lovely cute poem !

ImagineLoveVenus, Montana USAAug 31, 2014

Mizzy this is very nice. Bliss and Kiss...like them both1!

Odette67Penrith, Cumbria, England UKAug 31, 2014

My heart yearns for bliss,
So love-sick I reminisc,
Cure me with your kiss.

A kiss and a hug are what we humans crave from the cradle to the grave.
Lovely Haiku Mick.

Mizzy4OPNavan, Meath IrelandAug 31, 2014

Good to see you back
Beautiful you.......
Thank you for your comment !
Hope you've been writing
in your absence !

Regards Mick.

Mizzy4OPNavan, Meath IrelandAug 31, 2014

Thanks again Liam,
Great challenge .......
Mick.

Mizzy4OPNavan, Meath IrelandAug 31, 2014

Thanks Jeanie,
For the nice comment.
Mick.

Mizzy4OPNavan, Meath IrelandAug 31, 2014

Thank you for your nice
review Paloma.
Regards Mick.

angel2

Mizzy4OPNavan, Meath IrelandAug 31, 2014

I really appreciate your
suggestion Thea,
But I would dread to
Kiss myself

Best wishes......
Mick.

FellsmanLake District, Cumbria, England UKAug 31, 2014

Hi Mick

I keep apologising for my lack of knowledge of the haiku form - but there is no mistaking the message here (I do a fair bit of reminiscing myself) - I hope this plaintive plea is soon answered.

Best wishes

Bill

RAVENGYPSY42USA, Tennessee USAAug 31, 2014

Amazing... in 3 lines Mick... I'm learning...

Mizzy4OPNavan, Meath IrelandAug 31, 2014

Thank you Jade for your
nice comment.....
Me too,

Mizzy4OPNavan, Meath IrelandAug 31, 2014

Thank you Christina,
For your kind review.....
You're quite right dear,
I live in hope

Mizzy4OPNavan, Meath IrelandAug 31, 2014

Bill, I'm not exactly an
Authority on haiku's myself,
I chance my arm

Thanks for your kind wishes.

Regards Mick.

candykidAshburn, Virginia USAAug 31, 2014

Nice entry Mick. It's not easy to rhyme every line in such a restricted format.....

Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoSep 1, 2014

Nicely done Mick. Loved your entry.

Mizzy4OPNavan, Meath IrelandSep 1, 2014

Cheers Raven,
I think I'm more a pupil
than a teacher ,
Regards Mick.

gnj4uBoston, Massachusetts USASep 1, 2014

Hi, Mizzy4,
This Ancient Cure has survived the test of time. Definitely, much can be cured with a kiss — especially when from that special someone. Thank you for sharing.

Mizzy4OPNavan, Meath IrelandSep 1, 2014

Cheers Christian,
For your kind review.

Regards Mick.