The Wedding Jade Candy Challenge

by Mizzy4Navan, Meath, Ireland

Sep 2014 836 Views 16 comments

"The Wedding" (Jade/Candy Challenge).

Fabulously, frilly, fabrics found
fit fullest feminine figures,
Finnicky, fancy facials for
fairest faces, flaunting,
Frizzled follicles flowing
from flamboyant ,
flirtatious females,

Fancy footwear,
Flowers....fuchsia, freesia,
Finest feathered feast,
for family friends,
Failing financial flareup,
frustrated father faints,
Fanatical fairytale fantasy
finally fulfilled.

~ ~ ~ ~ ~

Posted: Sep 2014

About this poem:

Every word starts with "F".
Each verse has 22 words.
Each verse has 47 syllables.
There is another F word I could
have used.....this was a tough one.
Thank you Jade and Christian,
for the challenge.

I'm just wondering though.......
Is this poetry ??

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Comments (16)

diana_1San fernando, San Fernando Trinidad and TobagoSep 3, 2014

Love your poem Mick.... inspired me... well put I like the completeness painted here.

wayne34liverpool, Merseyside, England UKSep 3, 2014

Good write mizzy

Odette67Penrith, Cumbria, England UKSep 3, 2014

Who's a clever boy then?

candykidAshburn, Virginia USASep 3, 2014

Hey Mick.....I really didn't expect anyone to accept such a challenge. The fact that you matched syllable count to word count in each section is difficult enough, let alone starting each word with the same letter. To answer your question, "is this poetry?" Absolutely not. Not in any sense of the word. It can barely even qualify as wordplay. It is just an exercise in writing with strict and unnecessary rules. I do commend you for accepting and succeeding in your effort. Thanks for this interesting entry brother Mick.

gnj4uBoston, Massachusetts USASep 3, 2014

Hi, Mizzy4,
Freshly fabricated, fanciful, fabulous feast found! Felicitations for feat's fruition!

ImagineLoveVenus, Montana USASep 3, 2014

(gravely English accent): "Is it madness or sheer genius!" (sophisticated English accent): "Well done my boy, well done!"

Jade

Mizzy4OPNavan, Meath IrelandSep 4, 2014

Thank you Diana,
Glad you got some inspiration
from this.............Mick.

Mizzy4OPNavan, Meath IrelandSep 4, 2014

Cheers Wayne !

Mizzy4OPNavan, Meath IrelandSep 4, 2014

Definitely not me Christina

Just your average Joe !

MonaLisaSmile71yokohama, Kanto JapanSep 5, 2014

fatum-->fatare-->faer-->fe'erie-->fairy

Mizzy4OPNavan, Meath IrelandSep 5, 2014

My pleasure Christian,
Thanks again !!

Mizzy4OPNavan, Meath IrelandSep 5, 2014

Gosh ! Gnj,
Gracious genial gesture,

Genuinely grateful !

Mizzy4OPNavan, Meath IrelandSep 5, 2014

Thanks again Jade,
My pleasure !

Mizzy4OPNavan, Meath IrelandSep 5, 2014

Fancy felicitations,
fairy friend !

angel2

beautifulyouNew York, USASep 26, 2014

very good Mick !
nice job!

and, how funny.. 'frustrated father faints,' !

fugitive432Toronto, Ontario CanadaSep 26, 2014

I disagree with the comment above that says this is not a poem. Only one person could have written it and it's someone that appreciates femininity in all its forms both simple and exaggerated. The play with words and sounds demonstrates the author's submission to fate in a world where language is precrafted by our ancestors