Moonbeams. (Sonnet) Paloma Challenge.

If we were stars in cosmogyral space,
Lost apart in nacreous endless blue,
To seek, I would like gossamer embrace,
Upon a moonbeam, destination....you.

In reminiscence of your twinkling light,
I'd fall for your aeolian warm rays,
Our fusion to ignite the lonesome night,
As showers of stardust calm our fiery blaze.

Together we could disappear through time,
To float in ataraxial deep love,
Like poets entwined in pure celestial rhyme,
In Heavens reverence 'mid stars above.

Drifting through soft moonlight psiturism,
Forever lost in dazzling starry prism.
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Posted: Sep 2014
About this poem:
A Cosmic challenge Paloma.
Hope you like it !

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ImagineLove
Where do I begin..the words here are so cerebral! This is one awesome write and very breathtakingly beautiful! angel
candykid
Powerfully crafted Mick. A great mix of cosmic expression. Well done brother.thumbs up cheers
darkhorse555
really delightfully beautiful painted piece love the visions drew mick excellent penangel grin
Odette67
Together we could disappear through time,
To float in ataraxial deep love,


Dearest Mick,
I swear that men make better romantic poets than woman, just look at all the great poets throughout history, my emotions are all over the place reading these poems. Your poetry transports me to another plane. Beautiful.

Thank you Paloma for this challenge, it's made my day. purple heart hug
Odette67
Ps, like Bill said, I did notice you had to be a clever clogs and use more words. Just joking darlin hehehe, your poems are always AWESOME! And a word to Bill- Shut up about cricket hehehelaugh rolling on the floor laughing I'm in one of my funny moods, despite the dark poetry I write. Cheers cheers I don't even drink beer.
paloma66
I knew you would come out with something exceptional,adding more words to further enchance the theme.This is awesome Mick thank you so much,hihgly commended.You are a talented poet.I am overwhelmed by the response this time.applause cheering thumbs up purple heart purple heart bouquet
Mizzy4
Thank you Jade for your
Super review.......
Much appreciated !

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Mizzy4
Cheers Christian,
You're always welcome......

wine thumbs up
Mizzy4
Thanks so much Liam,
For your special comment !

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Mizzy4
. "Your poetry transports me to another plane. Beautiful."
Dearest Christina,
Your beautiful comment pleased
me so much....
I'm so glad that you liked this poem.
Thank you so much !!

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Mizzy4
"Most excellent and worthy of all praise! "
Hi Bill,
What a lovely statement,
Thanks so much for
your more than generous review.

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Odette67
Reading these again Mick, I think you guy's all did good. hug purple heart
paloma66
I just dont only like it but loved this beautiful poem,you gents can really write soft poems too.bouquet bouquet
soulgoddess
teddybear Dear friend Mick,

Simply sparkling all the way. Interesting creation of vocabularies too.

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123whisper
Dear friend Mike,this is uperb poem -just as I was expecting from Superb writerthumbs up hug
Mizzy4
I'm smiling broadly at your
Lovely comment Paloma,
It was an exciting challenge
and a pleasure to join in !
Thank you.......

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Mizzy4
Thank you once more Christina,
for your kindness......
I agree.......all entries were
really good !

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beautifulyou
Hi there Mick.
I enjoyed. ty rose

and how very nice!
'Upon a moonbeam, destination....you.'
Mizzy4
Thanks again Paloma,
We're such a romantic
bunch really laugh
Appreciated............

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Mizzy4
Thank you Angeline.....
Glad you liked it !!

cheering angel wine
Mizzy4
Dear Thea,
Thank you for your ever so special
reviews.

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Mizzy4
Thank you so much B/you,
Much appreciated.......

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Poetnumber1
Exceptional stuff Mick. Sorry for the late reply. Your poems are such a joy to read and the imagery is just gorgeous.

cheers
Mizzy4
Thank you M,
For such a generous review.

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rapturecapture
Hi Mick


To seek, I would like gossamer embrace,
Upon a moonbeam, destination....you.

Pure Class..Masterpiece in my eyes!..Excellent read.

Thank you for sharing

Martina xxxteddybearhug angel bouquet
orientalkoru
"Drifting through soft moonlight psiturism,
Forever lost in dazzling starry prism"

Such an awesome entry Mick... Your words kinda picked me up and took me
away with it to a Cosmogyral adventure! Much enjoyed mate! thumbs up angel wine
soulgoddess
teddybear bouquet hug angel

Reading this wonderful poem again... so beautifully written!

godsprincessonline today!
Reading for the first time. Thank you SoulGoddess for sending to the top of the pile. I don't have time to go back to read the others. Barely manage to read the top ones time wise. Very complex intricate beautiful poem. I can only dream of writing something to complex. heart wings

Kathy teddybear
godsprincessonline today!
Remembering the older poets in C.S. poetry section this week for Valentines and their beautiful writes. This was written by you and Paloma - wonderful write.

Kathy teddybear
AutumnChild
Mick,hello!

You are so gifted for romantic writing.
Beautiful verses with so lovely rhymes which gave to the entire construction true insight of rich simplicity.

Nice greetings and wishes!

B.

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Mizzy4
Thank you Kathy and Autumn for your very kind reviews.

Regards Mick.

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Yankee4you
Mick....... I learned some words....... lol...... Brilliant little example of a sonnet......
salamuna
Hi Mick. What a wonderful sonnet. I see it was written long time ago. I really enjoyed reading this romantic lines. Many thanks Mick and everyone who pulled this out of the depths of the poetry page . Lily
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Mizzy4
Thanks Yankee,
Regards Mick.

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Mizzy4
Thank you Lily for your kind review,

I had forgotten about this one.

Regards Mick.

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