If we were stars in cosmogyral space, Lost apart in nacreous endless blue, To seek, I would like gossamer embrace, Upon a moonbeam, destination....you.
In reminiscence of your twinkling light, I'd fall for your aeolian warm rays, Our fusion to ignite the lonesome night, As showers of stardust calm our fiery blaze.
Together we could disappear through time, To float in ataraxial deep love, Like poets entwined in pure celestial rhyme, In Heavens reverence 'mid stars above.
Drifting through soft moonlight psiturism, Forever lost in dazzling starry prism.
really delightfully beautiful painted piece love the visions drew mick excellent pen
Odette67Penrith, Cumbria, England UKSep 5, 2014
Together we could disappear through time, To float in ataraxial deep love,
Dearest Mick, I swear that men make better romantic poets than woman, just look at all the great poets throughout history, my emotions are all over the place reading these poems. Your poetry transports me to another plane. Beautiful.
Thank you Paloma for this challenge, it's made my day.
Odette67Penrith, Cumbria, England UKSep 5, 2014
Ps, like Bill said, I did notice you had to be a clever clogs and use more words. Just joking darlin hehehe, your poems are always AWESOME! And a word to Bill- Shut up about cricket hehehe I'm in one of my funny moods, despite the dark poetry I write. Cheers I don't even drink beer.
paloma66Manukau, Auckland New ZealandSep 5, 2014
I knew you would come out with something exceptional,adding more words to further enchance the theme.This is awesome Mick thank you so much,hihgly commended.You are a talented poet.I am overwhelmed by the response this time.
. "Your poetry transports me to another plane. Beautiful." Dearest Christina, Your beautiful comment pleased me so much.... I'm so glad that you liked this poem. Thank you so much !!
Reading for the first time. Thank you SoulGoddess for sending to the top of the pile. I don't have time to go back to read the others. Barely manage to read the top ones time wise. Very complex intricate beautiful poem. I can only dream of writing something to complex.
Remembering the older poets in C.S. poetry section this week for Valentines and their beautiful writes. This was written by you and Paloma - wonderful write.
Kathy
AutumnChildUnknown, Central Serbia SerbiaAug 12, 2021
Mick,hello!
You are so gifted for romantic writing. Beautiful verses with so lovely rhymes which gave to the entire construction true insight of rich simplicity.
Hi Mick. What a wonderful sonnet. I see it was written long time ago. I really enjoyed reading this romantic lines. Many thanks Mick and everyone who pulled this out of the depths of the poetry page . Lily
Comments (35)
To float in ataraxial deep love,
Dearest Mick,
I swear that men make better romantic poets than woman, just look at all the great poets throughout history, my emotions are all over the place reading these poems. Your poetry transports me to another plane. Beautiful.
Thank you Paloma for this challenge, it's made my day.
Super review.......
Much appreciated !
You're always welcome......
For your special comment !
Dearest Christina,
Your beautiful comment pleased
me so much....
I'm so glad that you liked this poem.
Thank you so much !!
Hi Bill,
What a lovely statement,
Thanks so much for
your more than generous review.
Simply sparkling all the way. Interesting creation of vocabularies too.
Lovely comment Paloma,
It was an exciting challenge
and a pleasure to join in !
Thank you.......
for your kindness......
I agree.......all entries were
really good !
I enjoyed. ty
and how very nice!
'Upon a moonbeam, destination....you.'
We're such a romantic
bunch really
Appreciated............
Glad you liked it !!
Thank you for your ever so special
reviews.
Much appreciated.......
For such a generous review.
To seek, I would like gossamer embrace,
Upon a moonbeam, destination....you.
Pure Class..Masterpiece in my eyes!..Excellent read.
Thank you for sharing
Martina xxx
Forever lost in dazzling starry prism"
Such an awesome entry Mick... Your words kinda picked me up and took me
away with it to a Cosmogyral adventure! Much enjoyed mate!
Reading this wonderful poem again... so beautifully written!
Kathy
Kathy
You are so gifted for romantic writing.
Beautiful verses with so lovely rhymes which gave to the entire construction true insight of rich simplicity.
Nice greetings and wishes!
B.
Regards Mick.
Regards Mick.
I had forgotten about this one.
Regards Mick.