Follow me, and dare to take a look within where it is that I go ,.. Stay with me bear with me and walk for a mile in my shoes.. Take my hand and stand beside me as I weep.. Listen carefully as I bare my soul, and promise my secrets to keep.. If I somehow go the whole day through, and you never see me smile.. PLease don't think it's something that you have done.. And that you're not worthwhile..
My life has taken many a turn, and recently most of them downhill.. But I am determined, and I am trying so hard to be positve.. So please stay with me if you will . I want to learn to love again.. and if you can just have patience with me.. I think that you will see.. Slowly but surely .. More and more of the old me.
And I'm trying.. so hard.. And I want to thank-you... For standing by me through these dark days, And cutting me some slack.. I want for you to know that I hold you in the highest regard, For your seemingly endless patience with me,
I never want for you to feel unimportant, Because you are everything to me.. And though I may not always show it.. It's important for me that you know that.. You are someone so very special, And.. that you are special to me.
purpledragonflyLeeds, West Yorkshire, England UKMar 7, 2010
Sometimes it takes time to gather yourself together when you've been through alot. It will be ok!! Thanks for the words.
EarlgreyteaLimassol, CyprusMar 7, 2010
He's a very blessed man, beautiful baring of your soul Storm...
PinkpoetressClarksburg, West Virginia USAMar 7, 2010
Wonderful poem, QuietStorm. You share so deeply. I can always feel your poems. They move me to tears. This one is beautiful, just as you are. Thank you.
While the quiet storm rages in the heart of the poet, it is a gift to find Patience as a virtue of that special someone who may well be rewarded by the treasure buried within. Such honest and powerful words! May the poet be blessed with someone with staying power.
through bumps and grinds, we need that assurance from our lover, and we need to give it too. we need to recognize that we must never lose sense of what is import. you've written in words that which every relation has experienced. thank you.
Thanks Rob.. yes trying to be strong.. getting easier with time too !
paloma66Manukau, Auckland New ZealandMar 24, 2010
In the heart of the storm lies a calm,a beautiful you,well written.
BallPythonSun valley, ca, California USAMar 24, 2010
THIS IS SOMETHING THAT I WOULD LOVE TO HEAR IN TRUTH AND MAYBE ONE I WILL. WHERE THERE IS A WILL A WAY WILL BE FOUND. THOSE OF US WHO WRITE POETRY ARE INSPIRED BY DEEP EMOTION; THE SEEDS OF OUR WIT. DON'T STOP NOW FOR THOSE OF US WHO HAVE EARS THAT TRULY ARE LISTENING.
SINCERELY, JOSEPH AKA:BALLPYTHON
BallPythonSun valley, ca, California USAMar 24, 2010
THIS IS SOMETHING THAT I WOULD LOVE TO HEAR IN TRUTH AND MAYBE ONE I WILL. WHERE THERE IS A WILL A WAY WILL BE FOUND. THOSE OF US WHO WRITE POETRY ARE INSPIRED BY DEEP EMOTION; THE SEEDS OF OUR WIT. DON'T STOP NOW FOR THOSE OF US WHO HAVE EARS THAT TRULY ARE LISTENING.
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While the quiet storm rages in the heart of the poet, it is a gift to find Patience as a virtue of that special someone who may well be rewarded by the treasure buried within. Such honest and powerful words! May the poet be blessed with someone with staying power.
rob
It shows the measure of your patience
and understanding. Well worded.
OF OUR WIT. DON'T STOP NOW FOR THOSE OF US WHO HAVE EARS THAT TRULY ARE LISTENING.
SINCERELY, JOSEPH AKA:BALLPYTHON
OF OUR WIT. DON'T STOP NOW FOR THOSE OF US WHO HAVE EARS THAT TRULY ARE LISTENING.
SINCERELY, JOSEPH AKA:BALLPYTHON