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I'm looking for more
Come in and close the damn door
Let's start the loving
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Posted: Sep 2014
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Just "whatever" for today!

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Fellsman
You must stop being so shy and reticent Jade roll eyes Just let a fellow know what's on your mind... wink

Perfect syllable count.

Bill wine wine
candykid
Agreed....my favorite from you thus far....
SCatlyn
rolling on the floor laughing rolling on the floor laughing No beatin' around the bush, just get to it!!!! Go, Jade, go!!

Great write!!!

Love it, Jadite!!! yay

Cat rose in teeth

p.s.(I think I oughta get Cafe over here if he doesn't find it - he just wrote 'baby I need your lovin'.... so maybe we can see if he's all talk and no action...)
darkhorse555
beautifully crafted brought a smile excellent hakiu angel grin
Spartacus2012
Nicely done Jade! :)

Ken
fugitive432
i wanted to write earlier to say how amazing your recent longer poems were, but this one is the boiiing that sends my fling into motion head banger
Girlygirl196349
Awesome I love it teddybear I just know the man of your dreams is coming to you soon. Much love to you jade teddybear teddybear rose rose
Poetnumber1
Loved it Jade. Nice job.

hug
trurorob
Succinctly to the point.
Rob
JEANIEMAC
That's the Irish coming out in you again.....you imp!!
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