by Unknown
Apr 2010 694 Views 20 comments
Let Me In
Let me in, I am knocking your door,
Tired, weathered.
Let me sleep in your arms till the morning
I need you like an air
Let me speak, I will mean every word
I will be with you, I will care
I'll spoil you and never stop
I'll gently inhale you
Tired, weathered.
Let me sleep in your arms till the morning
I need you like an air
Let me speak, I will mean every word
I will be with you, I will care
I'll spoil you and never stop
I'll gently inhale you
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Posted: Apr 2010
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Comments (20)
thanks for stopping by
rob
do you really find it romntic?
not aggressive?
well, thank you for that
regarding the wording, I was trying an expression "i need you like an air...i will gently inhale you"
this expression never came in my mind before, nor in my feelings
thanks for comment, glad you liked it
Lovely, romantic, gifted words. I love your expression in this poem. Thanks for sharing.
Thanks for reading!
Thank you very much!
PHYLLIS