Something besides looks Irresistible style maybe - The grace of self-awareness The frames of eyelashes Around drowning eyes The delicate Fragrance of fluffy hair.. Ambiguity of unspoken words Brings music To the quiet of the room Sends shivers through space Flashes back Forgotten memories Of how it first happened before And pulls you Into the spiderweb of affection To get lost and not care About ever getting out
I guess it is all combined my friend, wonderful feeling is being in love....Enjoyed your write.
Happychatty1unknown, Lancashire, England UKDec 4, 2018
Enjoyed reading this poem has a great twist and depth to it..and the title alone speaks volumes..thanks for sharing it
yasparkOPWilliamsville, New York USADec 4, 2018
Thank you southmiami4321! Came up with a better line “The grace of self-awareness” Instead of “The yoga posture of self-awareness”, seems like it suits the poem better. New to the site, it looks like it is not possible to edit after posting. Appreciate you taking time to comment.
yasparkOPWilliamsville, New York USADec 5, 2018
Thank you Happychatty1, was able to edit the poem with Rob’s help, like it better now.
Happychatty1unknown, Lancashire, England UKDec 5, 2018
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Rob
Instead of “The yoga posture of self-awareness”, seems like it suits the poem better.
New to the site, it looks like it is not possible to edit after posting. Appreciate you taking time to comment.