Oh! Sweet Entrophy

Stepping over the woes of wretched days
i felled my head in silence

this hurts,
what is this?

the grated path that lay beneath me
now arose to hurt me

my feet are sore
My mind so weary,

my heart's not lonely
so I say

grappling my soul
so twisted and dark

when will the daylight
cradle me
caress me
and leave its mark

at times
all is so sore
could see
did not watch
so needed more

My world of so bitter despair?
head in hands I needed to care

i swam with the current of sadness
and took solace within the tide of madness

to my wilderness I wandered

then the dreams came upon me of tomorrow

All shall be well

X
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Posted: Jul 2010
About this poem:
just a little bit of creative kaos,

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Comments (16)

agoodguy2have
kaos maybe, poetry definitely! sophia, you have come up with a creation full of image and feeling that is hard to describe. Feels deeply alone, yet in the end, "All shall be well". well done!
Blizza801
Amazing work...I loved it !!
DaleMan
I like it too!-It has a warmth and declares humanity.
Ladybee42
hi sophia, lovely words
chaos isn't my favourite
state of affairs, but you
managed it..applause bouquet
MonaLisaSmile4U
applauseWonderfully Written from the heart . . . Great Job.angel
caroljoyce
Beautiful; truly fine piece of writing.
sophiasummer
thank you all,
one of my momentary lapses of madness.
bouquet
angel
jazzy75
Your words wrap around me like a warm blanket....thank you for sharingteddybear
freeatlast64847
Nice write Sophia! From the depths of chaos to the "All shall be well." Quite a ride!
hedistuff
very nice...seems as little disorder in your system, but then again, how could I know...
paloma66
You have the ability to turn chaos into a,"All shall be well" situation,its great.Well written,thank you.hug bouquet
trurorob
The road of life is sometimes long and bumpy!, very good! SS
rob
serpico12
a really great piece of open soul penned to poetry..enjoyed reading..hope your dreams arrive.
Gashly
love this! chaos reigns!
sophiasummer
Thank you all for your deep, very cool, and brightening comments, to my heart they all, were felt.

I smile

SS
xx
Redex
And from the chaos gathers order loved the optimisn for the tomorrowteddybear
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