When we broke up My life came crashing down My head felt like It was spinning around
I lost control Hit her with my iron fist Heard the painful screams When I clutched my wrist
Felt so bad As she fell to the floor With blood all over I could'nt look anymore
A sinking feeling That I felt from within I dropped to my knees Did'nt know where to begin
I felt her pulse What have I just did Her wrist soaked with sweat As my hand just slid
My baby's gone But this can't be true It's the worst feeling That I ever knew
I broke her nose I ended her life I was going to make her My loving wife
My tears are falling Like a stinging rain No amount of pills Can take away this pain
I lifted her head For this eternal kiss My emotions rule me It's always been like this
Her face is wet As my tears fall down I kissed her lips But there was no sound
Hours went by I felt her lips grow cold This scene I created More than I can behold
Can you hear me baby I don't want you to go You're the best there is I just wanted you to know
Bring her back! Please god!don't let this end I'd do anything To see her smile at me again
I watched in horror Her family all around I lost control I came completly unwound
Don't close that lid! I can't let her go I yelled so loud Oh! please god no!
I love you so much I hope you understand Please don't remember me As a hurtful man
I saw a tear Streaming down from her eye Then with the most beautiful voice She asked me WHY!?
I love you so much But I lose total control It's something down deep Within my soul
Please take me with you I don't want to stay I took your own life Please take mine away!!!
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Posted: Jul 2010
About this poem:
this is a very emotional poem,it should bring tears to your eyes,i'll never understand why this happens to so many couples,the idea came from a pearl-jam song.
D.W. A scary vision that is known by too many women today, in all countries of this world. A man's anger is his own undoing, this write clearly shows that. Great write of bad actions!
Hi, dreamwolf5264, Clearly, with My emotions rule me It's always been like this, it's not something new for him. Too bad he didn't seek help before someone else had to pay. Hopefully, he will recognize himself as a hurtful man. Thank you for sharing.
dreamwolf5264OPfrancestown, New Hampshire USAJul 11, 2010
thanks for your comments g.g. and gnj4,this happens all to often,it seems like you can never write enough about it,maybe a woman in trouble,can give this write to her abusive boyfriend,or husband....just maybe,it could prevent another disaster.
dreamwolf5264OPfrancestown, New Hampshire USAJul 14, 2010
okay carol! message recieved...i'll write about that mysterious wolf that looks over my shoulder in my pic...others want to know if he's real...i can't say,but he's always watching,..yikes!
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Clearly, with My emotions rule me It's always been like this, it's not something new for him. Too bad he didn't seek help before someone else had to pay. Hopefully, he will recognize himself as a hurtful man. Thank you for sharing.