THE LAST STRIKE

When we broke up
My life came crashing down
My head felt like
It was spinning around

I lost control
Hit her with my iron fist
Heard the painful screams
When I clutched my wrist

Felt so bad
As she fell to the floor
With blood all over
I could'nt look anymore

A sinking feeling
That I felt from within
I dropped to my knees
Did'nt know where to begin

I felt her pulse
What have I just did
Her wrist soaked with sweat
As my hand just slid

My baby's gone
But this can't be true
It's the worst feeling
That I ever knew

I broke her nose
I ended her life
I was going to make her
My loving wife

My tears are falling
Like a stinging rain
No amount of pills
Can take away this pain

I lifted her head
For this eternal kiss
My emotions rule me
It's always been like this

Her face is wet
As my tears fall down
I kissed her lips
But there was no sound

Hours went by
I felt her lips grow cold
This scene I created
More than I can behold

Can you hear me baby
I don't want you to go
You're the best there is
I just wanted you to know

Bring her back!
Please god!don't let this end
I'd do anything
To see her smile at me again

I watched in horror
Her family all around
I lost control
I came completly unwound

Don't close that lid!
I can't let her go
I yelled so loud
Oh! please god no!

I love you so much
I hope you understand
Please don't remember me
As a hurtful man

I saw a tear
Streaming down from her eye
Then with the most beautiful voice
She asked me WHY!?

I love you so much
But I lose total control
It's something down deep
Within my soul

Please take me with you
I don't want to stay
I took your own life
Please take mine away!!!
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Jul 2010
About this poem:
this is a very emotional poem,it should bring tears to your eyes,i'll never understand why this happens to so many couples,the idea came from a pearl-jam song.

Poems entered on these pages are copyrighted by the authors who entered them. They cannot be reproduced without the author's written consent. © Copyright 2001-2024. All rights reserved.

Post Comment

Comments (5)

agoodguy2have
D.W. A scary vision that is known by too many women today, in all countries of this world. A man's anger is his own undoing, this write clearly shows that. Great write of bad actions!
gnj4u
Hi, dreamwolf5264,
Clearly, with My emotions rule me It's always been like this, it's not something new for him. Too bad he didn't seek help before someone else had to pay. Hopefully, he will recognize himself as a hurtful man. Thank you for sharing.
dreamwolf5264
thanks for your comments g.g. and gnj4,this happens all to often,it seems like you can never write enough about it,maybe a woman in trouble,can give this write to her abusive boyfriend,or husband....just maybe,it could prevent another disaster.teddybear thumbs up
dreamwolf5264
okay carol! message recieved...i'll write about that mysterious wolf that looks over my shoulder in my pic...others want to know if he's real...i can't say,but he's always watching,..yikes!teddybear rolling on the floor laughing
jazzy75
Emotional and raw write! wow
Post Comment - Let others know what you think about this Poem
Report Abuse for this page, if inappropiate
We use cookies to ensure that you have the best experience possible on our website. Read Our Privacy Policy Here