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ManicCC

Make Me Burn

Don't want just for now,
I 'm looking for forever.
I wanna burn Lady burn,
in the way you make me shiver.
Just being held in your arms,
Is where I wanna be.
make me burn Lady, burn.
Dont ever set me free.

I don't just want your body,
I wanna have it all.
I wanna burn Lady, burn,
I know you wont let me fall.
Im your's and you are mine,
is what my future wants to be.
Make me burn Lady burn.
dont ever set me free.

I want to find it's true this time,
Oh Lady,
and it always will be
Wake up and say, hello each day,
Oh Lady,
with you lying next to me.
You make me burn Lady, burn Lady,
with an inner fire.
You make me burn Lady, burn,
you are my heart's desire.
Just being held in your arms,
Is where I wanna be.
Make me burn Lady, burn,
don't ever set me free.
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Posted: Aug 2023
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Tiger_Moth

Daydreams

Jumping, jumping ,over the style
Wasting time just for a while
Dark clouds forming filled with rain
Will my rainbow return again
I miss those days of childhood charms
Held by my parents in loving arms
My adult days approach too fast
As plaits and uniforms, I cast.
Into this world of wonderment
I step with awe and calm content
Will I survive and make my mark
Is life just a stroll in the park
I'll do my best through thick and thin
To reach the goalpost that say's win.
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Posted: Aug 2023
About this poem:
A look back at youth.
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SimplyJoe

Making A Stand

It's not wishful thinking
That I offer you my hand.
Let the sound of our hearts beating,
Provoke love to stand.
I hear your love calling,
I hear destiny calling too.
With my arms wide open,
I am here to welcome you.
Your kiss is the key
That leads straight to my heart.
It opens it wide
And lets your love impart.
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Posted: Aug 2023
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ManicCC

Dreamscape

In this golden haze, where dreams come alive,
A world unseen, where fantasies reside.
Thoughts and visions converge in harmony,
An ethereal landscape, where desire sets us free.

We're exploring the realm of our dreams tonight,
Hope and passion entwined, shining so bright.
Unveiling mysteries, breaking through our old shells
In our dreams, we'll find our truest selves,

As we traverse this endless sea of dreams,
Our hopes soar on the wings of infinite gleams
Unfolding paths of destiny untold,
from this dream world, will our future unfold?

Dreamscape, oh dream are you within my grasp?
Will our hearts find solace from all that has past?
With every breath, shall we embark on this flight,
Into the unfolding journey of life?

Thoughts like stars, floating in the night,
Whispers of love, dancing just out of sight.
Can this dream world become reality,
with hearts entwined in synchronicity?

A long road ahead, but we'll face it with grace,
Guided by truth, we'll leave no trace.
With every step, will we forge a new way,
Will we move past the dream, into a new day?
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Posted: Aug 2023
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rusticbink

LIFE MOVES

Life moves at a faster pace,
In these days of violence;
So many with anger face,
A mind in raging silence.

But you can have a change
By taking a peaceful break.
Let your mind move upwards,
To God who can give escape!

He is rich in wisdom great,
And wants to share with you;
A peace that will help your state,
Just ask and you will find it true!


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Speech flows so rude
From lips so crude;
Make a message to inflame,
Calling words of shame.

Why embarrass me so,
Telling me where to go.
Am I trying to hurt you
Or make you blue!

Happy with your game
To cause others pain,
Upset the apple cart,
Your life`s falling apart.

Frustration runs wild,
No place to be mild
Things at a fast pace,
I see it on your face.

Maybe you can be cool,
Stop being a fool.
Here`s a good rule,
Don't be so cruel .

Something wrong in the heart
When you blow your top.
Get a better kindly start
When you purpose to stop.

Take a two step`s, back ,
Give the rope some slack,
No more fighting back,
Find out what you lack.

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A question to ask:::::
"What's wrong with me ?" ,
Calmly sit down
With a big frown.

Let's have a long talk,
Even have a long walk;
Check the real state
What's on your plate.

Be calm for a while,
Get into a good style.
"What's the right way."
To have a good day?

Get a right answer
For every bad problem.
By being all aware
Of what makes a calm.
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Posted: Jul 2023
About this poem:
will add additions later
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ManicCC

Deep in the Mines ( Dwarven Drinking Song)

Deep in the mines where the ale flows free
Our tankards raised, let the revelry be
Dwarven drinking songs and cheers all round
For we're the finest miners in the underground

Our work is rough, but our spirits high
For we're the ore extractors 'til we die
With pick-axes and hammers at our side
We'll drink to our health and mining pride

The sweat on our brows, a badge of honor
As we celebrate our toil, our highness we garner
The caverns ring with the dwarven sound
As we sing and toast our stouts all 'round

So raise your tankards and sing along
To the mining life, our drinking song
For deep in the mines where the ale flows free
We'll raise our voices in grand jubilee.
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Posted: Jul 2023
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ManicCC

Ashen Dreams

An evil man stands before me,
with eyes dark as midnight sky
A life of pain and sorrow,
soul so lost, it made me cry

But there's a glimmer of hope,
deep within his ashen dreams
A chance at his redemption,
or so to me it seems

His world cruel and heartless,
So his heart it did turn cold
But deep down I can see,
his weary soul longs to unfold

In this fleeting moment,
all his pain fades away
he embraces the light,
and let his darkness slip sway

So let us dance like fireflies,
in this ephemeral delight
And find our way back home,
in the heart of the night

For redemption is a journey,
filled with twists and turns
But with love by our side,
our spirits forever yearn

Ashen Dreams, we break the chains,
and rise up to the sky
With each step we take,
we become heroes with wings to fly.
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Posted: Jul 2023
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ManicCC

Death of Innocence

In a land of magic and wonder,
There lived a child with pure innocence,
She roamed the fields with laughter and splendor,
Blissfully unaware of the world's malevolence.

But one day a darkness descended,
The air grew cold, and the sky turned grey,
The child was frightened and apprehended,
Her innocence slowly withered away.

The creatures of the land ran and hid,
As the shadows crept towards her,
The child cried out, "I want to be a kid!",
But her plea was swallowed by the sinister murmur.

The darkness took over, and the child's spirit broke,
Her vivid fantasies became a distant memory,
The land was still, and the silence spoke,
As the death of innocence became a tragedy.

Her world now tainted, with corruption and greed,
Forced to grow up too soon, the child could no longer dream,
No longer could the child embrace their pure creed,
The death of innocence, a melancholy theme.
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Posted: Jul 2023
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DiggableHippy49online today!

Fearless

Waiting for the sunshine,
Someday it came but didn't shine,
Is it just you?,
Are you losing your mind?, -
You carelessly wonder,
In an abyss being the last climb,
What matters now?,
Make it the last time?, --

A townhouse in town,
The middle of the city of dead,
Life moves on,
As if you are not there, -
You go outside,
They cower,
They hide and they're scared, -
Perhaps they should be?, --

Fearless,
Maybe the scars you bear?,
Fearless,
Maybe the long hair?, --

You go out to eat,
They serve you right away,
Although others were there before you,
They still have to wait, -
You're a kind hearted man,
But not everyday,
Suppose they may know that?,
From the games that you play?, --

Waiting for the moon,
Someday it came but hid behind the clouds,
Is it just you?,
Are you feeling that down?, -
You ignore weather, pain, food,
Closest to the best they would call,
The best way to feel,
Is to feel nothing at all, --

Fearless,
Maybe your dream was born?
Fearless,
Maybe now all is gone?
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Posted: Jun 2023
About this poem:
I wrote this 6-22-2023. I suppose in this write that you've done about everything (and gone everywhere), and now what? I'd say improvise, adapt, overcome, and write a madcap song like this! lol Until then
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TravelLover2023

It Takes Two to Tango

It Takes Two to Tango

In the dance of the roses, red as wine,
Passion burning, entwined in a divine sign,
A duet of hearts, beating in time,
Telling a tale, of your love and mine.

Under the gaze of daisies, so pure,
Where love is innocent, untouched and sure,
Two souls collide, no walls endure,
In this dance of life, sweet and demure.

The whispering lilies in the night,
Echo our promises, our pledge to hold tight,
In the tango we dance, under the moonlight,
Finding our rhythm, in love's sacred rite.

In the field of sunflowers, bright and gay,
Our spirits twirl, lost in ballet,
With each swaying step, in this merry play,
Our love blossoms, in the light of the day.

The tulips hum the melodies, so sweet,
A harmony perfect, when two hearts meet,
In the dance of love, where joy and sorrow greet,
The music of life, in time, we beat.

Past the orchids, mysterious and wild,
Lies the tango of love, untamed, beguiled,
In this dance of ours, through trials we've smiled,
For in every step, love has been reconciled.

Amidst the violets, shy and soft,
We found a rhythm, aloft,
In this dance of ours, gentle and oft,
We found a love, that held us aloft.

The marigolds glow, with fervor so bright,
As we sway in the twilight, under the starlight,
In our tango, we find love's eternal light,
Two hearts, one rhythm, in the silent night.

In the garden of our tango, love unfurls,
Each petal, a step, as the dance whirls,
In the dance of the flowers, where passion swirls,
It takes two for a tango, in love's own world.
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Posted: Jun 2023
About this poem:
This poem, titled "It Takes Two for a Tango," is a beautiful exploration of love and partnership through the metaphor of a tango dance, taking place in the natural backdrop of a blooming garden. Each flower represents a unique aspect of love, making the poem rich in imagery and symbolism. The poetry flows rhythmically, much like the dance it describes, and uses the flowers as a progression through different stages of love, from passion (roses) to purity (daisies), commitment (lilies), joy (sunflowers), harmony (tulips), mystery (orchids), gentleness (violets), brightness (marigolds), and finally the culmination of love's journey (garden).(To Maharlika)
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