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---Soul nieghbour---
sleep easy my soul nieghbour
im here to take you to the death chamber,
be free when you meet me
it wont be long till you become me,
get ready for your final step
im here for you last and only breath,
i wont take it from your heart
i was just here from the start,
be ready with your light shade
im here for the death raid,
come out when i call your name
im ready for your final shame,
see me in the lightning
im here with the death king,
im sorry now its time to go
get ready for the final show...
im here to take you to the death chamber,
be free when you meet me
it wont be long till you become me,
get ready for your final step
im here for you last and only breath,
i wont take it from your heart
i was just here from the start,
be ready with your light shade
im here for the death raid,
come out when i call your name
im ready for your final shame,
see me in the lightning
im here with the death king,
im sorry now its time to go
get ready for the final show...
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Apr 2012
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The Delirious, The Betrayed (song)
*verse1*
Boom Boom Boom
There goes the chaos swarming again.
Boom Boom Boom
The longer it’s held in, it gets stronger.
Boom Boom Boom
You wanna let it all out in the open,
But no!
Freedom’s hard to gain
And!
It’s never easy
To!
Come clean and say it loud!
*chorus*
Boom Boom Boom!
The emotions are wellin’ up
Moving closer to the breaking point!
Boom Boom Boom!
How sickening the feeling
Of drowning your true self in the shadows of your fear!
Boom Boom Boom!
But it’s never that easy
To get all the words out there
To get all your heart out there
I am trapped in the limbo
Of confusion and conflict!
Boom Boom Boom!!
*verse2*
Boom Boom Boom
The feeling consumes without mercy.
Boom Boom Boom
The longer it’s held back, it grows more dangerous.
Boom Boom Boom
I wanna let it all out in the open,
But no!
Freedom’s hard to gain
And!
It’s never easy
To!
Come clean and free yourself!
*chorus*
Boom Boom Boom!
The emotions are wellin’ up
Moving closer to the breaking point!
Boom Boom Boom!
How sickening the feeling
Of drowning your true self in the shadows of your fear!
Boom Boom Boom!
But it’s never that easy
To get all the words out there
To get all your heart out there
I am trapped in the limbo
Of confusion and conflict!
Boom Boom Boom!!
*bridge*
(LET IT OUT)
This heart of mine
(FREE YOURSELF)
I can’t help but wonder
(SAY IT NOW)
If it has just been
(SAVE YOURSELF)
Lying all this time
(LET IT OUT)
This heart of mine
(FREE YOURSELF)
I can’t help but wonder
(SAY IT NOW)
If it’s really just been
(SAVE YOURSELF)
Lying all this time…
Come out and declare yourself!
*chorus*
Boom Boom Boom!
The emotions are wellin’ up
Moving closer to the breaking point!
Boom Boom Boom!
How sickening the feeling
Of drowning your true self in the shadows of your fear!
Boom Boom Boom!
But it’s never that easy
To get all the words out there
To get all your heart out there
I am trapped in the limbo
Of confusion and conflict!
Boom Boom Boom!!
Come out, there’s nothin’ to fear!
Boom Boom Boom
There goes the chaos swarming again.
Boom Boom Boom
The longer it’s held in, it gets stronger.
Boom Boom Boom
You wanna let it all out in the open,
But no!
Freedom’s hard to gain
And!
It’s never easy
To!
Come clean and say it loud!
*chorus*
Boom Boom Boom!
The emotions are wellin’ up
Moving closer to the breaking point!
Boom Boom Boom!
How sickening the feeling
Of drowning your true self in the shadows of your fear!
Boom Boom Boom!
But it’s never that easy
To get all the words out there
To get all your heart out there
I am trapped in the limbo
Of confusion and conflict!
Boom Boom Boom!!
*verse2*
Boom Boom Boom
The feeling consumes without mercy.
Boom Boom Boom
The longer it’s held back, it grows more dangerous.
Boom Boom Boom
I wanna let it all out in the open,
But no!
Freedom’s hard to gain
And!
It’s never easy
To!
Come clean and free yourself!
*chorus*
Boom Boom Boom!
The emotions are wellin’ up
Moving closer to the breaking point!
Boom Boom Boom!
How sickening the feeling
Of drowning your true self in the shadows of your fear!
Boom Boom Boom!
But it’s never that easy
To get all the words out there
To get all your heart out there
I am trapped in the limbo
Of confusion and conflict!
Boom Boom Boom!!
*bridge*
(LET IT OUT)
This heart of mine
(FREE YOURSELF)
I can’t help but wonder
(SAY IT NOW)
If it has just been
(SAVE YOURSELF)
Lying all this time
(LET IT OUT)
This heart of mine
(FREE YOURSELF)
I can’t help but wonder
(SAY IT NOW)
If it’s really just been
(SAVE YOURSELF)
Lying all this time…
Come out and declare yourself!
*chorus*
Boom Boom Boom!
The emotions are wellin’ up
Moving closer to the breaking point!
Boom Boom Boom!
How sickening the feeling
Of drowning your true self in the shadows of your fear!
Boom Boom Boom!
But it’s never that easy
To get all the words out there
To get all your heart out there
I am trapped in the limbo
Of confusion and conflict!
Boom Boom Boom!!
Come out, there’s nothin’ to fear!
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Apr 2012
About this poem:
Questioning one's sexuality is a painful, confusing experience, especially if you realize you aren't what you thought you'd be. Every time I thought "could I be a lesbian?", I'd get this tightness in my chest and feel like I might pass out due to the stress of it. (the "boom boom boom" parts kinda represent the quickening of a heartbeat during an anxiety attack) But I finally came out about all this, and it was liberating (hence the last line). That "sick" feeling almost completely went away, and for the first time in months, I felt at peace with myself.This is the most recent song of mine. Hope you guys like! (I'll post a link to a MIDI of the melody soon)
Falsebound Fairytale (completed)
we were meant to be together and never fall apart
we were so good together we knew right from the start
we were the perfect match we gave eachother our hearts
we were the ones that would make it through it all
no matter what came our way we would always stand so tall
above the towers above all of the walls
above the opinions, and things we were called
never thought the day would come when our love came to a halt
and never did i ever imagine it would be all my fault
or so you had me believe.
(chorus)why did i say goodbye when she never meant hello
why was i so nice why did i sell my soul
i treated her like a princess in her kingdom made of lies
she treated me like a slaveboy no matter how i tried
it started like a fairy tail but we ended up in hell
but now that its all over i can finally breathe...and i can finally be myself
We were never meant to stay together it was all lies from the start
i was a fool and should have realized i wasted the space in my heart
you treated me like a piece of garbage and you ripped my soul apart
you always told me we would stay together and nothing could get in our way
you said if we ever had troubles that everything would be ok
then you cheated on me and i forgave you and i took all the blame
you said you were sorry and that you can really change
the second time i wanted to but inside it drove me insane
i lost all my trust in you and you said it was causing you pain
i said its hard but its ok and you said you are sorry again
why am i so easily decieved?
(chorus)why did i say goodbye when she never meant hello
why was i so nice why did i sell my soul
i treated her like a princess in her kingdom made of lies
she treated me like a slaveboy no matter how i tried
it started like a fairy tail but we ended up in hell
but now that its all over i can finally breathe...and i can finally be myself
things got better, we were bonding together and we almost got engaged
i loved you with everything i had but some things never change
the third time was the very last time my mind would be ok
i almost forgave you because you looked so hurt inside
but i got wise and started to thinking why do this to my mind
i got mad so i packed up my s**t and left it all behind
you begged and begged and you came crawling back with those shitty tears you cried
i said go away i dont want to see you i dont want to see your eyes
she said im sorry and i said im sorry and i felt so bad inside
but you need to go now and dont come back you need to answer your crimes
but i wish you the best
(chorus)why did i say goodbye when she never meant hello
why was i so nice why did i sell my soul
i treated her like a princess in her kingdom made of lies
she treated me like a slaveboy no matter how i tried
it started like a fairy tail but we ended up in hell
but now that its all over i can finally breathe...and i can finally be myself
we were so good together we knew right from the start
we were the perfect match we gave eachother our hearts
we were the ones that would make it through it all
no matter what came our way we would always stand so tall
above the towers above all of the walls
above the opinions, and things we were called
never thought the day would come when our love came to a halt
and never did i ever imagine it would be all my fault
or so you had me believe.
(chorus)why did i say goodbye when she never meant hello
why was i so nice why did i sell my soul
i treated her like a princess in her kingdom made of lies
she treated me like a slaveboy no matter how i tried
it started like a fairy tail but we ended up in hell
but now that its all over i can finally breathe...and i can finally be myself
We were never meant to stay together it was all lies from the start
i was a fool and should have realized i wasted the space in my heart
you treated me like a piece of garbage and you ripped my soul apart
you always told me we would stay together and nothing could get in our way
you said if we ever had troubles that everything would be ok
then you cheated on me and i forgave you and i took all the blame
you said you were sorry and that you can really change
the second time i wanted to but inside it drove me insane
i lost all my trust in you and you said it was causing you pain
i said its hard but its ok and you said you are sorry again
why am i so easily decieved?
(chorus)why did i say goodbye when she never meant hello
why was i so nice why did i sell my soul
i treated her like a princess in her kingdom made of lies
she treated me like a slaveboy no matter how i tried
it started like a fairy tail but we ended up in hell
but now that its all over i can finally breathe...and i can finally be myself
things got better, we were bonding together and we almost got engaged
i loved you with everything i had but some things never change
the third time was the very last time my mind would be ok
i almost forgave you because you looked so hurt inside
but i got wise and started to thinking why do this to my mind
i got mad so i packed up my s**t and left it all behind
you begged and begged and you came crawling back with those shitty tears you cried
i said go away i dont want to see you i dont want to see your eyes
she said im sorry and i said im sorry and i felt so bad inside
but you need to go now and dont come back you need to answer your crimes
but i wish you the best
(chorus)why did i say goodbye when she never meant hello
why was i so nice why did i sell my soul
i treated her like a princess in her kingdom made of lies
she treated me like a slaveboy no matter how i tried
it started like a fairy tail but we ended up in hell
but now that its all over i can finally breathe...and i can finally be myself
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Jun 2012
About this poem:
i wrote this song because at first i was upset and guilty that we broke up but then after a few days looking back i realized how she treated me and i actually felt good about the breakup...this is pretty much the story of my last relationship.
'simple'
it's a simple...thing to...wake up dreaming
things happen. but what's really going on?
nothing but simple...things you...follow a routine
shit happens. and before too long
you find yourself...watching years fly away
if you find yourself...maybe you'll decide to stay
beside yourself. beside yourself.
it's a simple thing for me to watch the time and wonder why
some things happen for some people, some things pass me by.
everything that happens has a reason so they say
maybe in the end it'll make some sense. till then I'll have to wait.
I'll find myself in good company
as long as you are here with me
beside myself. I'm beside myself.
things happen. but what's really going on?
nothing but simple...things you...follow a routine
shit happens. and before too long
you find yourself...watching years fly away
if you find yourself...maybe you'll decide to stay
beside yourself. beside yourself.
it's a simple thing for me to watch the time and wonder why
some things happen for some people, some things pass me by.
everything that happens has a reason so they say
maybe in the end it'll make some sense. till then I'll have to wait.
I'll find myself in good company
as long as you are here with me
beside myself. I'm beside myself.
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Aug 2012
About this poem:
title track from the c.d 'simple' recorded in tx in 2008.lifetime
I was born such a long time ago
I've had many dreams
and I've got a long way to go
farther than it seems
no matter how hard I try
I can't get you out of my mind
even though we said goodbye
the love you gave to me
will last a lifetime
I wear my old soul on my sleeve
I'm walkin in these shoes
I'm tryin hard to believe
I'll get over these blues
no matter how much time goes by
I'm just not satisfied
no need to have another try
I've loved and I've died
through many lifetimes
my family wants to know I'm fine
I tell them I'm okay
I'm earning my wings, I'll fly
don't know how to say
I want some things not meant for me
I wasted what I had
must learn to let your memory
make me feel glad
for the rest
of my lifetime
I've had many dreams
and I've got a long way to go
farther than it seems
no matter how hard I try
I can't get you out of my mind
even though we said goodbye
the love you gave to me
will last a lifetime
I wear my old soul on my sleeve
I'm walkin in these shoes
I'm tryin hard to believe
I'll get over these blues
no matter how much time goes by
I'm just not satisfied
no need to have another try
I've loved and I've died
through many lifetimes
my family wants to know I'm fine
I tell them I'm okay
I'm earning my wings, I'll fly
don't know how to say
I want some things not meant for me
I wasted what I had
must learn to let your memory
make me feel glad
for the rest
of my lifetime
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Sep 2012
About this poem:
written 2005. kind've based on the temporay 'disposable' way people have gotten of casting others away when bored with them. ends up feeling like many.. well you get it.'smile'! a song
welcome to my world, come in there's room for you.
leave your troubles on the doorstep.
the fire is burnin bright, I'm glad to be alive.
tell me something about yourself.
and if we find some common ground
I think we might just hang around
for a while
so smile for me
the snow has gone away, the sun is comin our way
days of never ending
not goin to waste my time, every minute is just fine.
surrounded by such beauty.
and if we find some common ground I think we might just hang around
for a while
so smile for me
here at the end of the song I'm thinking what went wrong
with the world around me
the truth is evident - old ways are nearly spent
at least that's what I see
and if we find some common ground
I think we might just hang around
take a walk with me and what we'll see
will make us smile for a little while
leave your troubles on the doorstep.
the fire is burnin bright, I'm glad to be alive.
tell me something about yourself.
and if we find some common ground
I think we might just hang around
for a while
so smile for me
the snow has gone away, the sun is comin our way
days of never ending
not goin to waste my time, every minute is just fine.
surrounded by such beauty.
and if we find some common ground I think we might just hang around
for a while
so smile for me
here at the end of the song I'm thinking what went wrong
with the world around me
the truth is evident - old ways are nearly spent
at least that's what I see
and if we find some common ground
I think we might just hang around
take a walk with me and what we'll see
will make us smile for a little while
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Sep 2012
About this poem:
I wrote this just this spring. I have yet to get into a studio to record it, but that'll be soon.
Superman Rap Song
Well, now, Superman is a real cool dude.
He's not even the least bit rude.
He helps old ladies across the street,
And says, "Howdy, maam," whenever they meet.
He's mean and nasty when bad dudes try
To do a bad number on the little guy.
He helps the police to do a good job,
And gives bad dudes a thump on the noggin'.
Well, now, just for a little change of pace,
He flew through the air at a rapid pace.
Too bad he didn't see the storm a'brewing,
'Cause when lightning struck, he turned blue.
Ten million volts did Superman get,
And ten thousand amps 'cause the sky was wet.
He got these volts, and he got these amps,
Right square in the seat of his pants.
Well, now, Superman was a real cool dude.
He wasn't even the least bit rude.
The old ladies help him across the street,
And say, "Howdy, sir", whenever they meet.
He was mean and nasty when the bad dudes tried
To do a bad number on the little guy.
The police help him to do a good job,
And give bad dudes a thump on the noggin'.
Well, now, just for a little change of pace,
He hobbled down the street at a very slow pace.
Too bad he didn't see the manhole open,
'Cause when he hit water, he turned blue.
Ten million volts did Superman get,
And ten thousand amps 'cause the water was wet.
He got these volts, and he got these amps,
Right square in the seat of his pants.
(C) Copyright 1994 Faith Times Ministry
He's not even the least bit rude.
He helps old ladies across the street,
And says, "Howdy, maam," whenever they meet.
He's mean and nasty when bad dudes try
To do a bad number on the little guy.
He helps the police to do a good job,
And gives bad dudes a thump on the noggin'.
Well, now, just for a little change of pace,
He flew through the air at a rapid pace.
Too bad he didn't see the storm a'brewing,
'Cause when lightning struck, he turned blue.
Ten million volts did Superman get,
And ten thousand amps 'cause the sky was wet.
He got these volts, and he got these amps,
Right square in the seat of his pants.
Well, now, Superman was a real cool dude.
He wasn't even the least bit rude.
The old ladies help him across the street,
And say, "Howdy, sir", whenever they meet.
He was mean and nasty when the bad dudes tried
To do a bad number on the little guy.
The police help him to do a good job,
And give bad dudes a thump on the noggin'.
Well, now, just for a little change of pace,
He hobbled down the street at a very slow pace.
Too bad he didn't see the manhole open,
'Cause when he hit water, he turned blue.
Ten million volts did Superman get,
And ten thousand amps 'cause the water was wet.
He got these volts, and he got these amps,
Right square in the seat of his pants.
(C) Copyright 1994 Faith Times Ministry
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Oct 2012
About this poem:
This is a silly rap song I wrote a long time ago. It was the first song I ever wrote, and my only rap song. The song is about what happens to us as we travel through life. I just used Superman as a metaphor for what happens to us in life. We're going along just great, maybe not paying full attention, and we have a head on collision with reality. Then, just as we're starting to recover from that, maybe we get hit again. That's the way life works sometimes.
my broken heart
I wish I knew how to show you how I feel
But I understand that I broke your heart
Baby all I wanna do is fix what I did
Please just hear me out
My heart is broken in two
Please help me mend it
I’ll always help u mend yours
No matter how long it takes
Or how hard it is
I’ll always love you in some way
I wish I knew how to make it up to you
Wish I knew how to take back what I did
I’m crying here because all I want is you
Baby please let me know what to do
I’ve run out of ideas
My heart is broken in two
Please help me mend it
I’ll always help u mend yours
No matter how long it takes
Or how hard it is
I’ll always love you in some way
Baby I wish I could see you but I know you don’t wanna see me
Please allow me to mend your heart
As I wish I could take back what I did and said
I’ll mend your heart for as long as it takes
I just wish I knew how
My heart is broken in two
Please help me mend it
I’ll always help u mend yours
No matter how long it takes
Or how hard it is
I’ll always love you in some way
My heart is broken in two
Please help me mend it
I’ll always help u mend yours
No matter how long it takes
Or how hard it is
I’ll always love you in some way
But I understand that I broke your heart
Baby all I wanna do is fix what I did
Please just hear me out
My heart is broken in two
Please help me mend it
I’ll always help u mend yours
No matter how long it takes
Or how hard it is
I’ll always love you in some way
I wish I knew how to make it up to you
Wish I knew how to take back what I did
I’m crying here because all I want is you
Baby please let me know what to do
I’ve run out of ideas
My heart is broken in two
Please help me mend it
I’ll always help u mend yours
No matter how long it takes
Or how hard it is
I’ll always love you in some way
Baby I wish I could see you but I know you don’t wanna see me
Please allow me to mend your heart
As I wish I could take back what I did and said
I’ll mend your heart for as long as it takes
I just wish I knew how
My heart is broken in two
Please help me mend it
I’ll always help u mend yours
No matter how long it takes
Or how hard it is
I’ll always love you in some way
My heart is broken in two
Please help me mend it
I’ll always help u mend yours
No matter how long it takes
Or how hard it is
I’ll always love you in some way
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Oct 2012
Post Commentasking for forgiveness
She stole my heart away from me
Then gave it back in a hurry
I’ll do anything to have that back
Baby I’m sorry I hurt you so please just hear me out
She will always be on my mind
Never ever going away
Wish I could take back what I did
All I want is to love you baby
All I know is that I hurt you and
I wish I knew how
I wish I could take it back because
All I want is you baby so
Please just hear me out
She will always be on my mind
Never ever going away
Wish I could take back what I did
All I want is to love you baby
Baby I understand that you don’t wanna hear from me
So I write this song asking you for forgiveness
I just wanna show you that I’m sorry
I understand that you wanna just be friends
So I will accept your decision
But I’ll always love you and you will always be on my mind
She will always be on my mind
Never ever going away
Wish I could take back what I did
All I want is to love you baby
She will always be on my mind
Never ever going away
Wish I could take back what I did
All I want is to love you baby
All I want is to love you baby
All I want is to love you baby
Then gave it back in a hurry
I’ll do anything to have that back
Baby I’m sorry I hurt you so please just hear me out
She will always be on my mind
Never ever going away
Wish I could take back what I did
All I want is to love you baby
All I know is that I hurt you and
I wish I knew how
I wish I could take it back because
All I want is you baby so
Please just hear me out
She will always be on my mind
Never ever going away
Wish I could take back what I did
All I want is to love you baby
Baby I understand that you don’t wanna hear from me
So I write this song asking you for forgiveness
I just wanna show you that I’m sorry
I understand that you wanna just be friends
So I will accept your decision
But I’ll always love you and you will always be on my mind
She will always be on my mind
Never ever going away
Wish I could take back what I did
All I want is to love you baby
She will always be on my mind
Never ever going away
Wish I could take back what I did
All I want is to love you baby
All I want is to love you baby
All I want is to love you baby
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Oct 2012
Post Comment
The pit has been dark.
Don’t let your feet touch the ground,
while spirits of malevolence drift around,
the only thing you know for certain,
what lays behind the ghostly curtain.
(Chorus) The night has been long,
the wound has been deep,
the pit has been dark,
and the walls have been steep.
Dark circles under your eyes,
a vacant look that's no surprise,
crimson thorns that tightly bind,
unanswered questions in your mind.
(Chorus)
Shifting seasons steals your breath,
while the reaper doles out death,
in the shadows of misty 'morrow,
angels weep with heartfelt sorrow.
(Chorus)
Spirits wax and often wane,
the wailing wind feels no pain,
souls that’s stolen in the night,
now turn black no longer bright.
(Chorus)
Blood that once flowed so free,
in hell denied its liberty,
dust prevails to mark the spot,
where bleached white bones begin to rot.
(Chorus)
Lightening thrusts like blades of flame,
thunder grabs the heart to claim,
love unfettered strikes a pose,
thorns of guilt fall from the rose.
(Chorus)
Candles flicker distort the white,
the breeze unbound whips to flight,
smoke that churns seems to jeer,
hides the torment in their tear.
(Chorus)
To walk this life we must be brave,
dusty footprints become your grave,
a smile to keep never to borrow,
a faded memory greets tomorrow.
(Chorus)
Tombstones topple turning green,
the faded epitaph no longer seen,
chilling shrouds shriek and moan,
an untamed spirit all alone.
(Chorus)
while spirits of malevolence drift around,
the only thing you know for certain,
what lays behind the ghostly curtain.
(Chorus) The night has been long,
the wound has been deep,
the pit has been dark,
and the walls have been steep.
Dark circles under your eyes,
a vacant look that's no surprise,
crimson thorns that tightly bind,
unanswered questions in your mind.
(Chorus)
Shifting seasons steals your breath,
while the reaper doles out death,
in the shadows of misty 'morrow,
angels weep with heartfelt sorrow.
(Chorus)
Spirits wax and often wane,
the wailing wind feels no pain,
souls that’s stolen in the night,
now turn black no longer bright.
(Chorus)
Blood that once flowed so free,
in hell denied its liberty,
dust prevails to mark the spot,
where bleached white bones begin to rot.
(Chorus)
Lightening thrusts like blades of flame,
thunder grabs the heart to claim,
love unfettered strikes a pose,
thorns of guilt fall from the rose.
(Chorus)
Candles flicker distort the white,
the breeze unbound whips to flight,
smoke that churns seems to jeer,
hides the torment in their tear.
(Chorus)
To walk this life we must be brave,
dusty footprints become your grave,
a smile to keep never to borrow,
a faded memory greets tomorrow.
(Chorus)
Tombstones topple turning green,
the faded epitaph no longer seen,
chilling shrouds shriek and moan,
an untamed spirit all alone.
(Chorus)
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Feb 2013
About this poem:
This is a song written by me just wish someone would put it to music, the music required for this song needs to be rock or blues if you have a guitar pick it up and thrash it out to these lyrics.Poems entered on these pages are copyrighted by the authors who entered them. They cannot be reproduced without the author's written consent. © Copyright 2001-2024. All rights reserved.
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