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rumuz138

The Art of You

Let me listen to violin sound which is come from your heart.
It's so sad, it's sound of broken.
But how a beatiful heart you have.
Even its broke it sounds a wonderful art.
Let me be an audience of your theater which is playing on your face.
It's a drama like life.
But how beatiful you are, your face was playing a tragedy i saw a real art.
Your words dancing like a ballet
Let me deeply understand them.
I want to deeply understand them because i believe the power of words.
Only beatiful words can change the world!
Only a beauty art can change a human,like me...
Now, I lose myself in the art of you..
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Posted: Sep 2017
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Ummka

Thank you that you exist

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To you thank you that you nearby,
Even if nearby you are absent,
You virtual look
You grant to my soul light.
Thank you that has kissed,
But only it is a pity not in reality,
And that at the nights I embraced
It is a pity for a smile, not in reality.
You have presented me hope
And me not to spit any more,
What to me to wear clothes,
And what it isn't necessary to put on.
As it is good what is just possible
With you to speak about much.
And I didn't know, how difficult
Not to be darling, but to love.
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Posted: Sep 2017
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Petros2017

MIRROR

The mirror of the mind
like life's wheel of Time
of day's and night's breath
of tears moment shines..
You never know what is the next
you never know what is the best.
You always guess,you always try
you always mind if worths the try..
And light up the next to you
and mind the step in front of you....
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Posted: Oct 2017
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Petros2017

FREEDOM

Freedom Slows down.. the beats of sorrow
Dawn on Earth immune the Space
Day dreaming loves the rhyme
As nights of mine go insane
And sound s of breezes are the blinks of your eyes
Like the morning light which strikes the Time
I need to recall,all my wasting time,to sing and unlock
my invisible life
My freedom is it on my way?
Is it real is it my Fate?
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Posted: Oct 2017
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AnoniAmos

NO MORE FREEBIRD (Listen to Freebird as you sing along)

I won’t be here tomorrow and you probably won’t remember me.
We’re just here to entertain you. But Lynard Skynard we’ll never be
So I’ll sing you our version and it won’t be the same
‘Cause we’re tired of this song now. So this bird we had to change

Oooooooo Yes this bird we had to change
And the words were rearranged
Lord knows it had to change

~interlude~

Bye bye free birds keep on flying yeah
This is a song we had to change
But please don’t take it so badly
‘Cause you only have yourself to blame
Everyone keeps asking for Freebird
I couldn’t keep singing it the same
If I had to sing Freebird now
I just know I’d go insane

Ooooooooo oh I swear I’d go insane
Got Freebird on the brain
Lord knows I’d go insane
Lord help I’d go insaaaaaaaaaaaane

Lord I’d lose my brain
Please don’t ask me to sing freeeeebiiiird no

~Guitar and drum outro~

ANONI
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Posted: Nov 2017
About this poem:
There was a discussion on a band page about how entertainers are tired of being asked to sing Freebird while they are setting up. So I wrote... "Freebird is very popular and it brings back a lot of good memories for some people. I suggest that bands modify the song to make it fun for you. The most popular part is the outro ending. So if your band has a sax or 2 play it with the sax. If you have a very ambitious drummer, play it with the drums. Play just the last verse and ending. Be creative and change the words."

After posting that to the website, my friend dared me to rewrite Freebird to express the sentiment. So, I did.
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yuri29

(Mean Things) this is not a poem but how about a song what do you think

12/4/2017


Verse 1

if I could change what the world said to you

If words were true you would have left me

You deserved what happen

Love was just a door that opened and left

And I’m still here cause its just right

Do me right and listen couldn’t be so true


Verse 2

Please listen for us (just one second)

If the words were real (I’ve bean thinking for you)

Its how you say it don’t let it out but care for me




Pre-Chorus

Attraction, sees, feather, whats, there, (ON THE OTHER SIDE)

Have me and let me go but make it the same (TODAY)

What you did wrong in my head was the (END)

You make the heart beat ITS JUST HOW YOU ARE

I felt like you were by my side (could it be the same)



Chorus

I don’t want to believe how you acted and how

(mean things are

I felt it but do you want to feel it again its how

(mean you are

I never wanted to step in its mean

I love what love is its so stuck in the middle its mean



Verse 3


What was said is stronger then what was (DONE)

Why you still here was still in the back of my mind

I was still talking and kissing asking thinking whats wrong

Its always whats set in stone never leaves why you here

Ask me the truth so its over (THIS MOMENT



Pre-Chorus

Attraction, sees, feather, whats, there, (ON THE OTHER SIDE)

Have me and let me go but make it the same (TODAY)

What you did wrong in my head was the (END)

You make the heart beat ITS JUST HOW YOU ARE

I felt like you were by my side (could it be the same)




Chorus

I don’t want to believe how you acted and how

(mean things are

I felt it but do you want to feel it again its how

(mean you are to me

I never wanted to step in its mean

I love what love is its so stuck in the middle its mean



Outro

Ooh ooh ooh

Why you sooo mean to me

Ooh ooh ooh

Why you sooo mean to me

I dont want you to be so mean to me
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Posted: Dec 2017
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YOV49

___Make It One Day____

Everyday is the same
There's no change, there's no joy
I feel weak, I feel tired
I'm depressed, I'm alone
All these thoughts in my head
f*ck, it's all a big mess
Let's move on and forget
All I need is some rest

I feel lost, I feel trapped
Nothing's real, all is fake
When your mind's playing tricks
And it's all just a game
I will never give up
I will not run away
I'll be strong, I will stay
I will make it one day

I will make it one day
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Posted: Dec 2017
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Adam43

The Entwined Luck

How delightful it is to see you around
Wake up next to you,
To hear your melodious sound

Nor a single second without you, I would stay
Maketh me complete
You really made my day

All alone
Truly all alone
I am wandering in the lonely streets
And even nobody ever noticed yet
My en-masse torn looking fleets

Nigh uncatchable
Nigh unforgettable
All that has happened
Is truly worse

No matter what are the circumstances
I admit
I’ve lost the golden chances
To be with you
To be with you

Now sitting over these dusty rugs
Am trying to keep away the bugs
I need you by my side, every time
Am missing your enchanted hugs


I know those days won’t come back
Cause I’ve lost those golden chances
To be with you
To be with you
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Posted: Dec 2017
About this poem:
Pure Love & Romantic Piece of Poetry
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Adam43

"Soul Art"

I will fight
I won't quit
Because am right
While others are wrong

I don't care
I have dare
With no fear
I'll keep singing my song

They lied
They tried
To divide
But to my love I still belong

My love is like ocean
And an ocean never bifurcates
She says eres mi vida
And feel pleasure to tell her mates

The way she entered my heart
And the way comforting herself she settled in
Really got an amazing smile
Restored me taking out from the recycle bin

Now I know
How to grow
Grass in the snow
Maintaining all it's features along

I've made my tricks
All from bricks
Your tiny little pricks
I tell you aren't that much strong

I will fight
I won't quit
Because I'm right
And I won't stop singing my song

Forgetting all the other duties
I will die writting her beauties
So much she loved me
That distilling myself from impurities

You can't break us apart
We've swapped our hearts
To understand love, one need years
Because it is a heavenly embodied soul art
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Posted: Dec 2017
About this poem:
Pure Love Poem
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mcradloff

I Saw Santa Eating Children

Wow!
Santa's eating children
I saw Santa eating children
Underneath the mistletoe last night
He didn't see me creep
Down the stairs to have a peep
He thought that I was tucked up in my bedroom fast asleep
Then I saw Santa whipping children
With the birch branches so snowy white
Oh, what a laugh it would have been
If Daddy had only seen Santa eating children last night
I did!
I really did see Santa eating children and I'm gonna tell my Dad
Well much to my suprise
I couldn't believe my eyes
It wasn't Santa after all but Krampus in disguise
But I saw Santa eating children underneath the mistletoe last night
Oh, what a laugh it would have been
If I had really seen Santa eating children last night
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Posted: Dec 2017
About this poem:
Krampus is Christmas figure from German folklore that comes to whip bad children and eat really bad children. He takes the really bad ones and puts them in the basket he wears on his back.
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