The Greatest Wall (Orientalkoru challenge)

Of all of the greatest monuments ever created by man...
One still stands in a land so grand...
Gods hands created fine DNA strands...
He had his best day ever when he wove you...

Sequentially perfected patterns golden...
Words not yet discovered spoken...
Stone blocks chosen mysteriously stacked...
And yet this marvelous creation is nothing compared to your flawless epicanthic folds....
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Posted: Apr 2014
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China is my obsession.

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darkhorse555
excellently crafted piece christian dear friend beautifully pennedangel
Mizzy4
Great entry Ck,
Well constructed........Mick.

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benidorm
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Candykid remember been told this when I
was a kid cool.
Spartacus2012
Awesome write C.K. about a constructive wonder of the world..

Kentip hat
orientalkoru
Hi Ck...thank you for taking your time to respond to my challenge...very much appreciated! One of the few places in the world on top of my bucket list. Probably my greatest regret is not going there before I left the aviation industry.
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Very clever how you have woven and compared God's tapestry against human (made) tapestry...when you talk about DNA strands...I am reminded about "laminins"... with or without Louie Giglio popularizing it...it sure makes one wonder...is it or is it just a mere coincidence? I'm not saying No to Giglio but I also am not saying yes. Faith, trust in His Word alone should suffice angel thumbs up

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And yes totally agree marvelous as it is...the great wall is nothing compared to God's flawless creation... The eyes alone...a perfect machine ...

Amazing facts about the human eye
*The eye has more than 2 million working parts.
*The human eye is capable of seeing at a resolution of 576 megapixels.
*Corneas are the only tissues that don’t require blood.
*The eye can process 36,000 bits of information an hour.
*The eye blinks 10,000 times a day.
*Under the right conditions, the human eye can see the light of a candle at a distance of 14 miles.
*The eye can see 2.7 million different colors.
*The eye has about 12 million photo receptors (light-sensitive cells).
*The retina contains 130 million rods for night vision and 7 million color-sensitive cones for day vision.


I got the above information in the link below about an atheist doctor Ph.D in Chemistry who studies the eye...and because of that is now no longer an atheist...

Thank you so very much and I hope you had a great Easter celebration! Sorry i got a bit carried away...I hope you don't mind thumbs up
orientalkoru
Complexity of the human eye points scientist to Master Creator

Sorry I forgot the link:

candykid
Thank you Liam. .....such a kind friend you are....cheers
candykid
I'm on the late freight Mick, but thank you so much...cheers
candykid
Ken my dearest friend. .....thank you pal. Orientalkoru made this possible....cheers
candykid
I am so longing for another challenge from you OK.....this was an awesome concept and challenge. I apologize for such a lengthy delay in my response to you. I wanted it to be better.....
candykid
Reuben. ........missing you bro......
orientalkoru
CK...I'd love too but it seems not many took on the challenge...
anyway will consider...because of the dismal number of takers I myself held back and did not post my very own entry to my very own challenge ha ha ha! Cheers mate... angel
candykid
Re-post the original challenge.....I will submit a part two....and others will probably too.......
orientalkoru
There you go my friend....thanks a lot for your suggestion...let's hope others will join this time...I will have to go hunt for the poem I wrote last time ha ha ha...I hope I saved it...laugh laugh thumbs up
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