Dear Diary... The Message
"Dear diary, today I met Prince Silent at the church; we talked and laughed together. Nice chatted. But when Prince Charming and Prince Honesty came...""Let me guess Princess Viona, he run away like a chicken?"
"Diary! Please don't say like that about him! He is a real knight, romantic and he is different."
"Hhmmm..."
"Hey, what do you mean with your "hhmmm"? What were you thinking when he put a bunch of roses on my window? Another days he put a cute bunny, a kitten... This castle is too high from the ground!"
"Maybe he can fly like a bug or mosquito...?"
"Diary!"
"Okay, how about a flying dragon or an unicorn? Ha..ha..ha.. now you're blushing, my princess!"
"Diary, you're such... ah, I love you!"
"Ha..ha..ha..! Now we talk about a serious thing, okay princess? Have you ever thought why he always run away from you when he knew that there are another prince who also like you and want you? What did he expect? No one loves you? Impossible! If he really likes you and loves you, he should fight to win your heart; no matter how many prince around you!"
"Yeah,I also think about this. Maybe he doesn't like me or want me..."
"Non sense!"
"So what should I do? I don't want to chase him! You know, I will never chase any man!"
"Oh, don't do that, my princess! You've already given him chances to know you, that's enough! And you also still have choices; Prince Charming, Prince Honesty, Prince Cheerful, Prince Happiness..."
"Hhmmm... how about Prince Charming? I think he is a real gentleman, the real knight! Hey princess, princess... wake up! Hey...ooppss! Forgive me I have pushed you from your chair!"
Boomm!!!
"Aawww!"
"Viona! What happen? How could you fall from your chair? Come on, take my hand!"
Viona still feel a little hurt at her head. "Gee, I was dreaming when I'm in office, omg! But a very nice dreaming he..he..he.." Said Viona in her mind and she smiled by herself.
"Viona?"
"Yes thanks..., Ben..." Oh! Viona realized that Ben is Prince Silent in her dream!
Less than 5 minutes, Viona's desk was surrounded by her friends. Slowly, Ben was leaving from her. Only his eyes that talked.
"B-Ben..." Viona whispered weakly.
PS: This is a part of my first adult short story that I wrote a week ago. Usually I wrote short stories about teenagers life for some magazines. And I'm still thinking about the good ending. MAYBE any suggestion?
The message: Just fight for everything you want in your life. Maybe you will get it and to be the winner. Don't give up!
God bless you all and I love you all
Comments (25)
LOVE LOVE LOVE
She will talk with prince silent in real and now, she will say her dream to him and they will laugh together, yeaaaaaah
Then prince silent will invite her for coffee and la la la, they will start their date, easy easy,...........,........, joy laugh joy and marriage, youhooooooooooo please invite me, i can dance very well, believe me
Love u Rosy how are uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
par par party, give me a kiss on ur cheeks
Rosy two kisses
and for all a rain of kiss, love u all
Today is kiss day
and u all have a kissy day
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Partyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy calling uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
I was shopping today, Half chicken, fry chicken but fresh
smoky salmon fish
Grappes, Apples, bananas
Black Berries yogurt
Milk and %3,50 fat
and nothing more nothing else
youhooooooooooooooooooo
Love u all
YEAAAAAAAAAAAAAH
happy banana
And happy Goody like happy Party
me too, i mean me 2 nice to meet u, amybe 3, no a little bit more, me 3000,000
Love uuuuuuuuuuu MURT
Be happy big boy
Parti.....be sure you don't get bug squished!!!!!!!
I'm sorry, I was not sleeping. After wrote my blog and replied 2 emails, my boss called me to pack up because we would be out of town for work. Thankyou foor all the "stuff" that you put
Thanks for have come to my blog and bring cheers. You're always welcome (everyone always welcome).
But Marina, I prefer Parti being the Unicorn than bug. It's more beautiful for him. For sure, I'd like to carres his head...ooppss! I meant princess Viona did
Yes, he talks and laughs because he is not Prince Dumb
In the original story, in my own language, I called him "Pangeran Sunyi" (in English like "Prince Silent"). But "sunyi" in Indonesia means there's no sound but we still can hear the sound of cricket in the garden, a lizard after its friend on the wall, for example.
So although his name is Prince Silent, he still can talk and even laugh. But maybe I should replace "laugh" with "smile" : We talked and he smiled many times" I think it's better due to the "silent".
Thanks Prof.for your "
He..he..he..so maybe someday you just try to "fight",ok? Or you will always lose your "princess"
Confucius say, "He who not tell lover, not get result."