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RE: How do you post pictures?
all i can suggest is email a person that can do it like thesunandthesea. but i for one do not know.
How do you post pictures?
I see many have posted pictures to their poetry and I have tried what fjames suggest but it didn't work.. any other suggestions???Thank you
Shelia
RE: "normal" people scare me, lol.
Hi canoock,Have been rifling through this site looking for something that interests me and saw your comment. Posted almost a year ago and no one has commented. Can't believe it. Yes, you are right. The world is insane. It's global and local.
I'm 64 and living in an over 62 community. Feel like all these people are my parents or some of them my grandparents. They live to gossip. And my younger neighbors; drama, drama, drama.
Try going for a nice hike. I have found that the people there are not too happy with the world either. Still not much drama in the woods. Or a nice kayak ride on a beautiful lake often takes my mind back to where I like it to be.
Good luck with your search
hi
Hi everyone I'm just looking for a nice sweet caring girl :-) I don't know how to upload photos but messege me if you have any questions
hurricane irene
lady, our home is two mountain ranges and over a hundred miles west of the storm's range. it was sunny here, little wind, with temps in the 80's. however, I have three sisters and their families that were threatened somewhat (all are fine). one lives about a mile from the west shore of the chesapeake bay in maryland. one in maryland, thirty miles west of the first, on the border of pennsylvania. the third lives in maryland between baltimore and district of columbia. good for robert and good for you!
RE: hurricane irene
Roberts garden is littered with fallen trees, but being on a hill he didn't suffer from flooding and no damage to the house as the wind was buffered by trees on the side of the worst winds. I hope you are ok hedi too, though I was on skype and was able to follow much of it as it swept through New England I know some people were killed by power lines/fires and I believe some people caught in a boat or on a shoreline too. RE: Archilochos,oldest lyric poet in Europe, born on the island of Paros, wrote at approximately 690 BC.
That's lovely euripides, I googled a line and got the entire translation, it's a very beautiful poem.
tio
hello there ? :)
RE: Does Syntax Matter?
For those who take poetry seriously this is a great idea: just think about it - having a workshop of our own to learn to write poetry in a proper way - what could be better?! I am all for learning, cause I have no idea about the rules I must abide by when writing a poem. Rhythm particularly eludes me - I can't grasp the gist of it. And all the other components are likewise elusive to tell the truth. If I can catch up with grammar, for which there are textbooks, poetry is in fact a virgin land for me: even if I had textbooks at my disposal it would still be an insurmountable problem. Hope others will join and we could start learning as soon as possible. Thank you, Bill, it was very nice of you to make such a suggestion. Wish all your plans came true!The 12 Universal Laws
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Archilochos,oldest lyric poet in Europe, born on the island of Paros, wrote at approximately 690 BC.
A slender, lovely, graceful girl,Just budding into supple line,
And you scare her and make her shy.
Laid her down in a thousand flowers,
And put my soft wool cloak around her.
I slid my arm under her neck
To still the fear in her eyes,
For she was trembling like a fawn,
I caressed the beauty of all her body
And the desire of love wringed my heart
Like a huge cloud cloaked my eyes
And stole the sweetest breath from my chest
RE: hurricane irene
Don't feel that you are out there all alone.Even though we cannot call on the telephone.
You are here in our hearts.
Please post when the hurricane parts.
So we will know all is okay.
Sending best wishes your way
Hobbies of consciously evolving people
Just wondering what sort of hobbies do consciously evolving people have ! what are your hobbies ? How do you like to spend your time and to socialize ! what changes would you like take place in your immediate community and culture or in the wider world. Just curious. I ll be so grateful if you took time to reply. Thanks.RE: hurricane irene
My sincere wishes that Providence minimises the effects of Hurricane Irene, and that everyone comes through the ordeal unscathed.A very humanitarian write Hedi...
Regards
Bill
RE: hurricane irene
Our thoughts are with you here in England Hedi, I have been watching the news most of the day, I too was thinking about Dave.Stay safe.
RE: Does Syntax Matter?
I think it's a great idea mister fellsman, I still use a dictionary printed in the 20's it's the most brilliant dictionary in the world and I love it! Don't go telling me it's out of date now, that would be like saying that mr Shakespeare was out of date. I think if people want to learn about grammer etc.. this is a great place to do it. If you don't know it's wrong you can't fix it, and if you truly don't know the rules then you can't break them properly.
Am I making myself clear here or what. Sometimes people think that because a well known poet can break the rules that anyone can, but this is not so. All well known poets learned the rules first the same as the best artists did. Both Picasso and Dali look like they broke the rules in their most famous paintings, but their first works were based on the tried and trusted rules of composition etc.. they even still applied these rules in their later works. My point is, that rules are there because they work and as you say - only people interested in learning need take part.
RE: hurricane irene
Robert and I visited the outer banks NC last year and it is a very exposed landscape hedi, I hope the residents there will be alright. Robert lives in CT and is right in the path, he's told me he's picking up some supplies on his way home from work today - we keep joking about me having my first live broadcast from inside a hurricane - but we are both concerned for all those affected in this way. Let's just hope that people heeded the warnings and that nothing too awful happens from Irene's visit. RE: Heartfelt thanks to all
Your one of the clan now, as you do, I come to read poems here they brighten up my day at times. Also as Ladybee has said, to write can help one see through the fog sometime. Dead or Alive
Hi,does anyone know who the lead male dancer in the Dead or Alive video Your sweetness is your weekness is?He has a ponytail.l think they are a latin dance groupDoes Syntax Matter?
SorryWhen I wrote the above post, I had no idea what a load of garbage it sounded, it wasn't my intention for it to read like a lecture.
The answer to the question posed in the title is that it is up to the individual to decide whether the rules of grammar are relevant, in any event, those rules are constantly evolving and what was correct yesterday isn't necessarily correct today, and my opinions are firmly stuck in the 1950's.
These forums are a pain insofar as daft posts like mine cannot be modified or deleted.
Mea Culpa
Bill
RE: Heartfelt thanks to all
Best wishes Countrylady, you just keep writing your lovely poems.hurricane irene
I'm worried. this storm might really be bad, particularly because the speed in which it is traveling is relatively slow. so when it's atop an area it just continues to wreak havoc...I have concern for everyone threatened in this vast area, multi states from n. carolina in the south traveling northward along the east coast all the way up to maine and canada. keep an eye out for our friend dave(agoodguytoknow), as he lives and works in the possible path of said storm. also I'm sure that many of our other poet friends are in harms way, in apology I just don't recall their names. also, it would be remiss for me not to mention my concerns for our island friends in the carribean. bahamas is under the gun as I type...it is projected that Irene will hit mainland US at the outer banks NC tomorrow...I am reminded that there is no such thing as a small hurricane...Does Syntax Matter?
Hi Poets,We have all heard the old joke that that syntax is a charge levied on prostitutes.
There have been opinions expressed as to whether such things as grammar, spelling, punctuation and such like really matter when composing poetry, with spurious jibes of 'pedant' being chucked in the direction of those who see merit in decent grammar etc. etc.
Cutting to the chase I reckon there are two main types of poster to Poetry Corner, with a number of sub-types.
There are those who simply want to get off their chests whatever it is they have to say and who think grammar/syntax is a minor consideration, or not even a consideration at all. That's fine, it is their choice and I am not writing this in order to be judgemental.
There is a second group who's aim is to improve as a poet, and who strive to produce well written work. My own view is that a writer who pays attention to grammar, and who in addition also looks to improve in matters concerning rhyme, rhythm and structure will inevitably tend to produce more readable work.
I cannot emphasise too strongly that this is NOT an attack on people whose grip on spelling/grammar is tenuous - it is nothing of the sort. Quite the reverse, I can and do respond to requests advice from a number of poets on PC who write to me privately on these matters, and I am always prepared to help anyone who asks me.
That is not to say my own grammar/syntax is a model for others to follow, I know what my imperfections are and strive to improve, in particular I am grateful to stalwarts such as Robbie (Macduff) who has given me much advice over these last few months.
I would be willing to take part in a workshop if it becomes evident that there is a demand from poets seeking to improve, and to look at various poetic structures in order to produce better writing.
I will check out this thread from time-to-time to see if there are poets looking to develop as writers and poets.
Regards
Bill
RE: Which poem of your OWN do you like most?
I wrote one years ago called ANNIVERSARY, I change it a little each year, as maybe my poetry improves, or the acceptance of my sister taking her own life, improves. Its been a long haul, I'm ashamed to say of this acceptance. Does prove to me though writing can help.
RE: Which poem of your OWN do you like most?
"Instinct" is my favorite and was written as an observation of man and animals behavior and how they are similar.
RE: comments on poetry corner pet peeve...
you could be on to something there ROS
<---- haven't crossed paths with you for ages! There is also a poetry thread on the forums, but I suspect it is used more for random political threads - perhaps the braver poets could reclaim it and shoo out the plebs However, having said that, I suspect some of the newer posters may not stick around that long - it seems to go in waves and troughs regarding the number of regular posters.Hope all is well with you and the bear
RE: comments on poetry corner pet peeve...
I agree with hedi, poems tend to get lost in the crowd with so many new posters as of late. Despite my work schedule, I do try to comment as often as possible and thank everyone.
I'm beginning to contemplate posting my work here so that it doesn't get lost.
RE: I feel alone with my Mind
What we see in the world is a perfect reflection of our consciousness. sometimes I forget this but the signs are everywhere, We are a spark of divine inspiration. It our lack of understanding this that creates pain and suffering. There is such abundance in creation. All that we need is provided. It is only when we are not at peace with ourselves that we reject this abundance for the superficial. To quell our insecurities. But even then there is nothing to fear about that. There are consequences yes but in the end all paths lead to the one place. We are already there. The most important thing is to fear not, be at peace with ourselves and those around us and know that everything going to be alright....stay here now in the present. Joyfully expressing your godself despite all that you see around you. It is all a part of the whole accept it. It is beautiful.I feel alone with my Mind
It is hard to live in a World that the most of the people dont understand what you talking about.the answers are sooo easy. the univers is giving us every single day a sign.
I already connect everything from the past to the future...from the deepest to the highest.
Im waiting for the Evolution...
It hurts to see a lot of pain, hate, fight and selfishness...
To know everything and understand everything...also to accept and love it, is a gift at the same time a curse...
Our History, is our NOW ...
but to many people just Forget...Or try to use the power in a wrong way...
the power is something big...what is not for using Games
What about you? What do you think about? What do you feel?
RE: Which poem of your OWN do you like most?
yes........RE: Heartfelt thanks to all
shelia...you have a terrific sense of humor. love your little digs...
Patrick Kavanagh.
Does anyone like the poem.RAGLAN ROAD?Tis a sample.
RAGLAND ROAD.
on RAGLAND ROAD on an Autumn day,
I saw her first & knew. That her dark hair would weave a snare That i may one day rue.I saw the danger, yet I walked Along the enchanted way, And i said let grief be a falling leaf. at dawning of the day.
RE: Heartfelt thanks to all
It can be a lonely road without companions - you'll find plenty here CL. I think this is usually a good place to make friendships because most of the poetic types tend to be shy, humble and not here for any glory. It's just a really good way to express anger, hurt and the other million emotions that broken relationships and lives can make us feel. I was lucky enough to find the love of my life here and can only wish that everyone else could do the same.There are of course some real jokers here to brighten the days - hedistuff and goodguy2have are a hoot
You will make friends, the rest - well that may or may not happen, who knows?
RE: Which poem of your OWN do you like most?
heart bornbeloved
the wind through
my soul
your wings
my all time favorite of my own little things....elo...