If you wanna fly I'd give you my wings I'd pray you find love And kiss you with pain I'll cry so very slowly To keep the tears For a long , long way Of Memories ...
And if you wanna leave now Just leave .. I wont say anything to you.. Cuz I don't wanna make you feel .. What my heart's beatin' .. As it's raining inside of me ..
And while My Breath is Taken And the words still unspoken Remember My love That Wing I gave Is Broken ..
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Posted: Oct 2010
About this poem:
Aaahhh .. Some memories just hunts you down .. this is an old poem which i wrote for my ex..
Hi, Swan87, And the words still unspoken do flow forth to capture Love's departure, its loss and, in the leaving, the wing broken. A very heartfelt poem!
ginger1959Kingston, Ontario CanadaOct 19, 2010
Hi Swan,
great writing you got it girl!!!!! The last two line..PERFECT
Truly,
Ginger
Swan87OPSyria, QatarOct 19, 2010
Long time no see Sweet gnj4u Im so glad you liked it ..
Swan
Swan87OPSyria, QatarOct 19, 2010
ginger sista
Thanks a lot honey .. yah ..im proud of the last 2 lines too .. my wing was broken .. now it's all fine :)
Swan
cafetwo2010Harford county, Maryland USAOct 22, 2010
swan..Your wing might be broken, but your poem soars like an eagle! cafe
PinkpoetressClarksburg, West Virginia USAOct 23, 2010
Swan, So sweet, yet sad. I can feel your pain. Take care dear. It will get better.
Comments (14)
Swan
And the words still unspoken do flow forth to capture Love's departure, its loss and, in the leaving, the wing broken. A very heartfelt poem!
great writing you got it girl!!!!!
The last two line..PERFECT
Truly,
Ginger
Im so glad you liked it ..
Swan
Thanks a lot honey .. yah ..im proud of the last 2 lines too ..
my wing was broken .. now it's all fine :)
Swan
So sweet, yet sad. I can feel your pain. Take care dear. It will get better.
Swan
Swan
Swan