Broken Wing

If you wanna fly
I'd give you my wings
I'd pray you find love
And kiss you with pain
I'll cry so very slowly
To keep the tears
For a long , long way
Of Memories ...

And if you wanna leave now
Just leave ..
I wont say anything to you..
Cuz I don't wanna make you feel ..
What my heart's beatin' ..
As it's raining inside of me ..

And while My Breath is Taken
And the words still unspoken
Remember My love
That Wing I gave
Is Broken ..
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Oct 2010
About this poem:
Aaahhh .. Some memories just hunts you down ..
this is an old poem which i wrote for my ex..

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jeddah12
nice swan deary,keep moving forward okhug bouquet
johntheraven1
very touching princess swan nice
hugh1
bouquet nice! applause
Swan87
Jeddah , John & hugh MY ANGELS .. THANKS ALOT ..mwwah
bouquet bouquet bouquet bouquet

Swan
gnj4u
Hi, Swan87,
And the words still unspoken do flow forth to capture Love's departure, its loss and, in the leaving, the wing broken. A very heartfelt poem!
ginger1959
Hi Swan,

great writing you got it girl!!!!!cheering
The last two line..PERFECTbouquet

Truly,

Gingerangel
Swan87
Long time no see Sweet gnj4u hug
Im so glad you liked it ..bouquet

Swan
Swan87
ginger sista kiss

Thanks a lot honey .. yah ..im proud of the last 2 lines too ..
my wing was broken .. now it's all fine :)

Swan
cafetwo2010
swan..Your wing might be broken, but your poem soars like an eagle! cafe heart wings
Pinkpoetress
Swan,
So sweet, yet sad. I can feel your pain. Take care dear. It will get better.
Swan87
Thanks Alot Cafe ! Kind of you hug

Swan
Swan87
Beautiful Pink ! Sweet of you ..Glad you liked it
teddybear
Swan
mike7375
Really beautiful expression and great imagery applause
Swan87
Awww Sweet Mike .. Thats sweet of you ..Glad you liked it teddybear

Swan
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