Did My Back Hurt Your Knife ?

It's good to hear your voice
It's good to see you doin' fine
And If you ever wonder
Im lonely all of the nights
I had to let you go
I just can't have you by my side
I'll never let you know
How bad I wanted you to be mine
But it's hard to keep a cheater
You only make me weeker
I should've over it since along time

I'm Sorry , Did my Back hurt your knife ?
Or does it Hurt you to see me smile
Should I let go of my life
To die for you
I'm sorry , But I can't have you back
I've promised my heart that
I'll never cry for you
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Posted: Oct 2010

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Redex
The heading grabbed mewow and the unfaltering way you have dealt with the subject, outward show strengthens inside. loved your verse Swanwine
Swan87
Thanx Redex .. That was the point ..Show the power inside ..cuz us women ..we sometimes don't do it ..
Glad you liked it hun. hug

Swan
Pinkpoetress
Swan,
I'm pleased you are moving on with your life. Your poem is proof of that. I like the title too. Take care of yourself.
Swan87
P!NK ..Honey hug We Reach a stage of knowing that even we move on with the one we love ..or to move on alone !
1+1 = 2
Thanks alot for being so kind

Swan
Swan87
Thanx Alot Dear gnj4u wave
Im glad you enjoyed readin' my poem ..
And yes sista ..we all should be strong for this teddybear

Thanks again
Swan
Happygolucky4uonline today!
Wow you had me with the title.bouquet
cafetwo2010
Wow swan! Your knife really stuck me good! lol cafe'laugh
jeddah12
very good one sis,hope youre well now,,nice poem hugsay hallo to the baby,,ok aunty swan ,lol bouquet
Swan87
Dearest Happygolucky4u & Cafe ,

Im so so so Glad you liked it grin
Mwwwahh Thanx
You're the best


teddybear
Swan
Swan87
jeddah12 .. Sweetttttyyyyy hug Thanx honey ..and will kiss the baby for you .. mwwahh

Swan
SCatlyn
Love this. Sad, strong, very eloquent. Wonderful, perfect title; and love the promise to your heart. Best wishes thumbs upteddybear
(also makes me think back on the video "Cool" by Gwen Stefani)
SCatlyn
P.S.I don't mean the words in "Cool"...just the feel of the video itself. What you've written is uniquely & wonderfully written rose
Swan87
Nice to Meet ya Sweet SCatlyn handshake
Thanks alot for such nice comment ..so kind of you


Swan
Swan87
bouquet Sure Sweet I did understand it ..
That " Cool " song & Video is really cute and nice ..
Thanx alot again sugar hug

Swan
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