It's good to hear your voice It's good to see you doin' fine And If you ever wonder Im lonely all of the nights I had to let you go I just can't have you by my side I'll never let you know How bad I wanted you to be mine But it's hard to keep a cheater You only make me weeker I should've over it since along time
I'm Sorry , Did my Back hurt your knife ? Or does it Hurt you to see me smile Should I let go of my life To die for you I'm sorry , But I can't have you back I've promised my heart that I'll never cry for you
cafetwo2010Harford county, Maryland USAOct 26, 2010
Wow swan! Your knife really stuck me good! lol cafe'
jeddah12singapore, Central Singapore SingaporeOct 27, 2010
very good one sis,hope youre well now,,nice poem say hallo to the baby,,ok aunty swan ,lol
Swan87OPSyria, QatarOct 27, 2010
Dearest Happygolucky4u & Cafe ,
Im so so so Glad you liked it Mwwwahh Thanx You're the best
Swan
Swan87OPSyria, QatarOct 27, 2010
jeddah12 .. Sweetttttyyyyy Thanx honey ..and will kiss the baby for you .. mwwahh
Swan
SCatlynBrecon, South Glamorgan, Wales UKOct 27, 2010
Love this. Sad, strong, very eloquent. Wonderful, perfect title; and love the promise to your heart. Best wishes (also makes me think back on the video "Cool" by Gwen Stefani)
SCatlynBrecon, South Glamorgan, Wales UKOct 27, 2010
P.S.I don't mean the words in "Cool"...just the feel of the video itself. What you've written is uniquely & wonderfully written
Swan87OPSyria, QatarOct 27, 2010
Nice to Meet ya Sweet SCatlyn Thanks alot for such nice comment ..so kind of you
Swan
Swan87OPSyria, QatarOct 27, 2010
Sure Sweet I did understand it .. That " Cool " song & Video is really cute and nice .. Thanx alot again sugar
Comments (14)
Glad you liked it hun.
Swan
I'm pleased you are moving on with your life. Your poem is proof of that. I like the title too. Take care of yourself.
1+1 = 2
Thanks alot for being so kind
Swan
Im glad you enjoyed readin' my poem ..
And yes sista ..we all should be strong for this
Thanks again
Swan
Im so so so Glad you liked it
Mwwwahh Thanx
You're the best
Swan
Swan
(also makes me think back on the video "Cool" by Gwen Stefani)
Thanks alot for such nice comment ..so kind of you
Swan
That " Cool " song & Video is really cute and nice ..
Thanx alot again sugar
Swan