Wasnt good

by Unknown

Nov 2010 408 Views 12 comments

Wasn't good

Author: Unknown

Come Near
Let me Hear
What You Thinking before..
You Disappear ..
But Far away
You're already so far away
From Reaching ..Me ..

Would you still go
If I remind you
Of how We were so Close
Picutres hangin' on the wall
Memories of me and you
But seams Like
You're already Gone
You've Moved on
Loving you was my Loss
And I know it's over
But Wasn't Good

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Posted: Nov 2010

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Thoughts !!

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Comments (12)

Ladybee42East Liverpool, Ohio USANov 24, 2010

sad lines swan..

Swan87OPSyria, QatarNov 24, 2010

It is Sad to see him walk away :(
Thanx for ur comment Lady

Swan

mike7375Castleblayney, Monaghan IrelandNov 24, 2010

We live and learn Swan, nice write.

freeatlast64847Lanagan, Missouri USANov 24, 2010

This brought a tear... Touching and heartfelt!

agoodguy2havesuffolk, Virginia USANov 24, 2010

so melancholy swan...great poem. ;-(

gnj4uBoston, Massachusetts USANov 24, 2010

Hi, Swan87,
Alhough it may not last forever and lost love hurts, at our best, loving is what we do; and we can only hope it will be good while it lasts, making the parting more painful. Nice heartfelt write.

Swan87OPSyria, QatarNov 25, 2010

Yes Indeed Sweet Mike .. Thanx

Swan

Swan87OPSyria, QatarNov 25, 2010

Hey freeatlast64847 .. Nice of you Thanx

Swan

Swan87OPSyria, QatarNov 25, 2010

Im sorry GoodGuy !! For the melancholy !! But Gotta let it out of my System !!

Thanx for liking it
Swan

Swan87OPSyria, QatarNov 25, 2010

Hey gnj4u ,
It's hard to lose the love of your life .. all though it's harder when you find out ..you were the only one who was IN LOVE
Thanx for your sweet comment ..God Bless u

Swan