~Haiku~ Oceanic

Moon lit tide rolls in
Cresting beached sand, drifts back in place
To depth where it began


~Bentlee~
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Posted: Nov 2010
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Comments (9)

amahlala
I can hear the ocean and smell the intoxicating scent of the water! Great write Jon!bouquet
Bentlee
hi you, how was thanks giving, good I hope. Ty Ama wine hug
WillyJustin
i like the beach..cheers
jeddah12
very nice imagery you painted about the beautiful beach bentlee.
lovely haikucheers teddybear
Bentlee
thanks Jeddah, I'm glad you see what I wrote in the words. Kind comment ty. wine hug
agoodguy2have
a sea of feeling here bentlee...you've captured the form and the foam. ;-)
Bentlee
cheers ty good guy, I appreciate your kind words to my write wine
Ladybee42
laugh i like the beach too...nice write bentlee.
bouquet bouquet
Bentlee
Thanks Ladybee, it's a great place to be, by any kind of water seems to sooth the soul wine hug
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