HIS PERFECT CUT

spnglish

by spnglishBrookhaven, Mississippi, USA

Nov 2010 456 Views 5 comments

HIS PERFECT CUT

Author: spnglish

Your cut is deep like a knife
You take deep cuts on the side
Angling up toward the heart, your cut is deep
Cutting away all ties, your cut is deep
Cutting me was your thrill
You cut so deep, it killed…
You must be thrilled!

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Posted: Nov 2010

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Comments (5)

stillframe

stillframeoklahoma city, Oklahoma USANov 27, 2010

wow i can feel the pain in this one my friend

spnglish

spnglishOPBrookhaven, Mississippi USANov 27, 2010

To feel the pain is hard, very hard. Sometimes I ask myself, why didn't you just leave, could't you see he was never going to change? Tks for your support, you must know what it feels like.

stillframe

stillframeoklahoma city, Oklahoma USANov 27, 2010

i do you must of read some of my poems

agoodguy2have

agoodguy2havesuffolk, Virginia USANov 27, 2010

spnglish, the soul laid bare with the cutting words. ;-(

Ladybee42

Ladybee42East Liverpool, Ohio USANov 27, 2010

nice poem spnglish

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