If I were to paint a picture, the finest the world has seen. People would say I'd had a vision or reproduced a dream. It would take each viewers breath away, they'd gasp at every line. It's beauty would be as a miracle, that would stand the test of time. For colours I would use the rainbows that follow summer storms. The sunrise and sunsets, would outline its graceful form. I'd capture natures' wonders, for all to look upon and what would I call this masterpiece ? It would have to be Yvonne.
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Posted: Jan 2011
About this poem:
I have been sending and recieving messages from a Lady that has given me new life. It seemed most unlikely when I first came on here that I could ever find someone who would make me re-think my situation. I thank CS for this opportunity.
Niah I thank you for your warm and very kind words, I cannot even begin to make comments on your beautiful poems, I wish I were able to express my feelings as you do. Yes love is in the air but at my age, one rushes not into the unknown. For one never knows where true love hides, especially when it has caused sorrow before but you never know !!!
FellsmanLake District, Cumbria, England UKJan 16, 2011
Hi again GD
When I responded to your poem earlier - having only been on this forum for 6 weeks myself - I didn't realise that it was your first post on here.
So, welcome aboard a terrific, though very fast moving poetry forum. This is far and away the best poetry board I have been on.
Once again, congratulation on your debut poem, it was a very good start you made.
Best wishes
Bill (Fellsman)
grandadOPKilmorna, Kerry IrelandJan 16, 2011
S&S you are very sweet and thank you for reading my poem. As you may realise it is for someone very special who has just come into my life. If you're looking for that 'special someone' you may find them here in CS. I wish you good luck.
GD)) thanksssss))) I wish myself good luck too!! hahaha May God shoot someone down and hit me soon!!! .....but if am still hangin on here, my boss will shoot me out of space for sure, am gonna late for work again >_< // just wanna say 'thnks' & you are a Lucky Guy! **whisper to your gf >> 'you are a lucky girl!" ^__^
May your love last for eternity! ^____* s&S
grandadOPKilmorna, Kerry IrelandFeb 3, 2011
S&S eternity is for a long time with many lives to live, I hope you find your love in this one.
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Regards
Fellsman
Glad you have found love on CS....niah
Yes love is in the air but at my age, one rushes not into the unknown. For one never knows where true love hides, especially when it has caused sorrow before but you never know !!!
When I responded to your poem earlier - having only been on this forum for 6 weeks myself - I didn't realise that it was your first post on here.
So, welcome aboard a terrific, though very fast moving poetry forum. This is far and away the best poetry board I have been on.
Once again, congratulation on your debut poem, it was a very good start you made.
Best wishes
Bill (Fellsman)
**whisper to your gf >> 'you are a lucky girl!" ^__^
May your love last for eternity! ^____* s&S
Thank you to those who have given me inspiration.