I watched a ball of cotton wool as white as drifting snow, sail effortlessly across the sky like it had nowhere to go. I once was like that floating cloud my life was like a dream, sailing endlessly through time, like a ripple on a stream. Now I've found a path through life, so simple and unhurried. My mind is clear and troubled not, no more will I be worried. You see my friends the answer was here, within my beating heart. For when we draw our final breath, this world we'll soon depart and take our place in the school of truth there all will be revealed. You'll know then what I say is true, 'til then my lips are sealed.
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Posted: Jan 2011
About this poem:
About 30 years ago I had a revelation and I tried to explain it with this, at the same time without giving too much away.
Comments (6)
Your poetry scans very well, top class rhyme and rhythm. I like the narrative in this as well.
Regards
Bill
Now I've found a path through life, so simple and unhurried. The spoken truths will get us through. Thank you for sharing.
Peter.