SWAN)))) Yeah I'm fine! lol ((Why you laughed ->(lol) <- like you think I lied? LOL)) heeheee
Thank you for your comment! MAUHXXXX my lil princess, you are sweeet and awwwww How many guys you kill today? lol Your smile can kill guys! I dont like 'guys' much lately, so keep smiling my angel! LOL
Hi, thesunandthesea, I am your 'Angel' But she is your 'God' captures the feelings of the heart when one is not first in the heart of another. Well done!
gnj4u :Thank yOOOOU))))) ^___^ you always read my mind and understand me.. ^________^ I really want to express the feelings like that... I think some ppl might have feel this way, too.
^__^ sometimes it's just torture or torment between 2 loving adorable ppl! Heeheehe
But not for me 'cus I am always the 1 and the only 1 for that 1... LOL
"Jib, for someone who self proclaimed they knew nothing of writing poetry... you've sure come along way in a short time!!" This, so far.... is your MASTERPIECE!! Good job young lady!!!
grandadKilmorna, Kerry IrelandFeb 21, 2011
A love that cannot be shared carries the heaviest burden ones heart must endure. A sad but beautiful poem Jib and I'm happy that you are 100%
FellsmanLake District, Cumbria, England UKFeb 21, 2011
Dear Jib
The dreaded "other woman" syndrome: I was happy to read your footnote assuring us that you are not the hapless "bit on the side" in this poem. I am sure you deserve much better than that.
This is nevertheless an acutely observed and perceptive write on an all too common state of affairs these days.
Now I still know only a lil bit of writing poetry, sweetie SWADE… lol and I know a lil bit of you too... lol
I love poems and I enjoyed reading more than writing… ^_^ I know you love writing more… ^__* ok you write I read! deal? :-D ( but sometimes I don’t comment.. >_< not that am lazy but cus I didn’t get the poem.. lol) My brain likes to stop working sometimes.. lol ((still allergic English letters)) lololol
^___^ Thank you Grandad, yeahh I was a lil bit sad when I wrote it…. Me was saddddddd … lol someone like me? sad? Y__Y well, I don’t lie, sometimes I am sad too… but 99.99% I am happy…. and now I’m 100% happy …. indeed… lol
Don’t wanna be sad for a long time, it’s not good for my mental health… lol
^__________^ <<< you are one of this smile… I meant I can smile like this ^__________^ cus I have everyone here, and you are one of them that makes me smile, always. ^____^
However, I mostly smile like this in real >> ^____^ my boss called me crazieeeeee lol …welll I am …. I’m crazie in love with you and all popets here…. weeeeeeeeeeeewwwwwww
jeddah12singapore, Central Singapore SingaporeApr 11, 2011
beautifuly crafted actualy deary,very nicely written and wise words,"KUDOS" for this poem,i love this master piece from you,,keep them coming and thanks..
niah9Auckland, New ZealandApr 11, 2011
Oh....it may not be real to you, but we all suffer as second hand rose at times...and it hurts...well written S & S...enjoyed it heaps...Niah
Mr. Dreamwolf, I love poems like this too!! No, I didn’t copy your words ok! I always love it!! lol --- OK, I’ll tell you something…. come here!! c’mon over here…come a lil bit closer closer closer pls….. .. .. .. ..
(((It’s NOT ONLY THIS ONE BUT EVERY POEMS I WROTE COME STRIGHT FROM MY HEART, YOU KNOW))) .. .. hahaaha SORRY I’m noise... actually I am a very shy and neat girl…
Thank you for your comment, teddy and kisses!! ( oh-o I’ve never known before that you wear a lipstick! it’s left on my cheek! LoL… next time wash it off before kissing a girl okay! lol )
Dear Mr. mcradloff, lol seem you like teddy & rabbit/bunny, I see it most of time on your comment!
(First I thought the rabbit is doing knitting lol but it’s not knitting but painting lol so you like painting or something? why rabbit? not -> I thought you loved super-heroes.. )
comment + teddy + rabbit = mcradloff lol <<< It’s really your original pattern ..lol I loved it.
Big thanks teddy oops Mike for your rabbit oops Comment!! lol
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LOL double Thanks for your comments... heehe ^__^
So cute and nicly done ! you keep on goin gurl !
and im glad you're fine lol
Swan
Thank you for your comment! MAUHXXXX my lil princess, you are sweeet and awwwww How many guys you kill today? lol Your smile can kill guys! I dont like 'guys' much lately, so keep smiling my angel! LOL
I am your 'Angel' But she is your 'God' captures the feelings of the heart when one is not first in the heart of another. Well done!
^__^ sometimes it's just torture or torment between 2 loving adorable ppl! Heeheehe
But not for me 'cus I am always the 1 and the only 1 for that 1... LOL
as gnj4u says, i too agree
A sad but beautiful poem Jib and I'm happy that you are 100%
The dreaded "other woman" syndrome: I was happy to read your footnote assuring us that you are not the hapless "bit on the side" in this poem. I am sure you deserve much better than that.
This is nevertheless an acutely observed and perceptive write on an all too common state of affairs these days.
A very well penned vignette...
Kindest regards
Bill x
how hard it is to be a man
a sacrifice it is, indeed
to service womens' carnal need
And when we've spent our strength on one
another calls and wants it done
we'd love to hang around you know
but duty calls and off we
A change of tone from your usual self depracating style. Sincere, heartfelt...I really enjoyed this one.
I love poems and I enjoyed reading more than writing… ^_^ I know you love writing more… ^__* ok you write I read! deal? :-D ( but sometimes I don’t comment.. >_< not that am lazy but cus I didn’t get the poem.. lol) My brain likes to stop working sometimes.. lol ((still allergic English letters)) lololol
BIG THANKS For your comment!
Don’t wanna be sad for a long time, it’s not good for my mental health… lol
^__________^ <<< you are one of this smile… I meant I can smile like this ^__________^ cus I have everyone here, and you are one of them that makes me smile, always. ^____^
However, I mostly smile like this in real >> ^____^ my boss called me crazieeeeee lol …welll I am …. I’m crazie in love with you and all popets here…. weeeeeeeeeeeewwwwwww
How hard it is to be a man,
as I am not a man
and I am a woman
How about you hunny?
do you understand lady?
^__^ when we said Ok
it didn’t mean OK lol
when we said go a---head
it really meant please w---ait
but if we said I love you
it really meant I LOVE YOU
If you treat us right
we will call you ‘my knight’
if you treat us like angel
We will treat you like double XX
if you said I love you
but your love has a clue
and if we just knew
we will call you BOOOOOOOO
And now I want to tell you
Thank you for your comment, it's COOL!!!
you should change your pic!! I believe you in real look nicer than the pic!!!!!!! LOLOLOL Hey! girls check this guy out!! He’s stunning!!!!!
okie, Rob, now you gotta give me $50,000 for promotion!! LOL
oops almost forgot to Thank you for your comment… yeah heartfelt…. I really enjoyed writing it too…. heeehee XXXXX
I do not understand
How hard it is to be a man,
as I am not a man
and I am a woman
blah blah blah...
LOl the above reply is for you ... I forgot to mention ya name. :P LOL
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(((It’s NOT ONLY THIS ONE BUT EVERY POEMS I WROTE COME STRIGHT FROM MY HEART, YOU KNOW)))
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hahaaha SORRY I’m noise... actually I am a very shy and neat girl…
Thank you for your comment, teddy and kisses!! ( oh-o I’ve never known before that you wear a lipstick! it’s left on my cheek! LoL… next time wash it off before kissing a girl okay! lol )
(First I thought the rabbit is doing knitting lol but it’s not knitting but painting lol so you like painting or something? why rabbit? not -> I thought you loved super-heroes.. )
comment + teddy + rabbit = mcradloff lol <<< It’s really your original pattern ..lol I loved it.
Big thanks teddy oops Mike for your rabbit oops Comment!! lol