I am your 'Angel' -- ( She is your 'God')

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I am the one for you
When she is not with you
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You like me so much
When she is out of touch
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You tell me you will stay
When she is far away
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You wanna be with me all the time
When she is not in your arms
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You will not make me blue
When she comes I can’t reach you
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You can walk on the fire for me
When you give her your life for free
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I am the one you adore
When she doesn't love you anymore
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You promise you will not disappear
But not when she is near
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You tell me not to cry
When her every tear you will dry
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You said I am special
But she is more than special
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You said I am the best
But she is better than the best
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You love me with all your heart
But your leave your heart with her
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You said you will love me forever
Only when you no longer love her
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I am your everything
But you can give her your everything
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I am your 'Angel'
She is your 'God'
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~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Feb 2011
About this poem:
Just a poem... I am fine 100% ... lol

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bourne1987
Nicely done kiss
bourne1987
Nicely done kiss
thesunandthesea
BOURNE1987 : ^______________^

LOL double Thanks for your comments... heehe ^__^ flirty
Swan87
Loved it !! Loved it !! Loved it !!!
cheering cheering cheering

So cute and nicly done ! you keep on goin gurl !
and im glad you're fine lol hug

Swan
thesunandthesea
SWAN)))) Yeah I'm fine! lol grin ((Why you laughed ->(lol) <- like you think I lied? LOL)) giggle heeheee

Thank you for your comment! lips MAUHXXXX my lil princess, you are sweeet and awwwww How many guys you kill today? confused lol Your smile can kill guys! I dont like 'guys' much lately, so keep smiling my angel! LOL grin
gnj4u
Hi, thesunandthesea,
I am your 'Angel' But she is your 'God' captures the feelings of the heart when one is not first in the heart of another. Well done!
thesunandthesea
gnj4u :Thank yOOOOU))))) hug ^___^ you always read my mind and understand me.. ^________^ I really want to express the feelings like that... flower I think some ppl might have feel this way, too.

^__^ sometimes it's just torture or torment between 2 loving adorable ppl! Heeheehe giggle

But not for me talk to hand 'cus I am always the 1 and the only 1 blushing for that 1... LOL rolling on the floor laughing
Ladybee42
this is lovely! applause applause

as gnj4u says, i too agree thumbs up

teddybear teddybear teddybear
swade777
"Jib, for someone who self proclaimed they knew nothing of writing poetry... you've sure come along way in a short time!!" This, so far.... is your MASTERPIECE!! Good job young lady!!!
grandad
A love that cannot be shared carries the heaviest burden ones heart must endure.
A sad but beautiful poem Jib and I'm happy that you are 100%

bouquet
Fellsman
Dear Jib

The dreaded "other woman" syndrome: I was happy to read your footnote assuring us that you are not the hapless "bit on the side" in this poem. I am sure you deserve much better than that.

This is nevertheless an acutely observed and perceptive write on an all too common state of affairs these days.

A very well penned vignette...

Kindest regards

Bill x hug
RayfromUSA
My dear you do not understand
how hard it is to be a man

a sacrifice it is, indeed
to service womens' carnal need

And when we've spent our strength on one
another calls and wants it done

we'd love to hang around you know
but duty calls and off we
Macduff5
Hi Sassy,
A change of tone from your usual self depracating style. Sincere, heartfelt...I really enjoyed this one. hug
thesunandthesea
THANK YOU SO MUCH MY SWEET ANGEL LADY OF ME, LADYBEE))))) teddybear WMUAHXXXXX sorry for replying late, I was kidnapped by a handsome guy... LOLblushing
thesunandthesea
Now I still know only a lil bit of writing poetry, sweetie SWADE… lol and I know a lil bit of you too... blushing lol

I love poems and I enjoyed reading more than writing… ^_^ I know you love writing more… ^__* ok you write I read! wink deal? :-D ( but sometimes I don’t comment.. >_< not that am lazy but cus I didn’t get the poem.. lol) My brain likes to stop working sometimes.. lol nerd ((still allergic English letters))sleep lololol

BIG THANKS For your comment!
thesunandthesea
^___^ Thank you Grandad, yeahh I was a lil bit sad when I wrote it…. Me was saddddddd … lol someone like me? sad? Y__Y well, I don’t lie, sometimes I am sad too… but 99.99% I am happy…. and now I’m 100% happy …. indeed… teddybearlol

Don’t wanna be sad for a long time, it’s not good for my mental health…professor lol
thesunandthesea
Dearest Bill, Thank you very much. hug

^__________^ <<< you are one of this smile… I meant I can smile like this ^__________^ cus I have everyone here, and you are one of them that makes me smile, always. ^____^

However, I mostly smile like this in real >> ^____^ my boss called me crazieeeeee lol …welll I am …. I’m crazie in love with you and all popets here…. weeeeeeeeeeeewwwwwww heart wings
thesunandthesea
My dear I do not understand
How hard it is to be a man,
as I am not a man
and I am a woman

How about you hunny?
do you understand lady?
^__^ when we said Ok
it didn’t mean OK lol

when we said go a---head
it really meant please w---ait
but if we said I love you
it really meant I LOVE YOU

If you treat us right
we will call you ‘my knight’
if you treat us like angel
We will treat you like double XX

if you said I love you
but your love has a clue
and if we just knew
we will call you BOOOOOOOO

And now I want to tell you
Thank you for your comment, it's COOL!!! peace
thesunandthesea
Hi Robbieeeeeeee----

you should change your pic!! I believe you in real look nicer than the pic!!!!!!! LOLOLOL hmmm Hey! girls check this guy out!! He’s stunning!!!!! blushing

okie, Rob, now you gotta give me $50,000 for promotion!! LOL

oops almost forgot to Thank you for your commentblushing… yeah heartfelt…. I really enjoyed writing it too…. heeehee grin XXXXX
thesunandthesea
My dear RayfromUSA

I do not understand
How hard it is to be a man,
as I am not a man
and I am a woman

blah blah blah...

LOl the above reply is for you ... I forgot to mention ya name. :P LOL
dreamwolf5264
i love poems like this...they come straight from the heart,very good...and keep writing-you only get better.lips lips teddybear
mcradloff
Another great poem, I like the last line best.teddybear bunny
jeddah12
beautifuly crafted actualy deary,very nicely written and wise words,"KUDOS" for this poem,i love this master piece from you,,keep them coming and thanks..handshake bouquet hug
niah9
Oh....it may not be real to you, but we all suffer as second hand rose at times...and it hurts...well written S & S...enjoyed it heaps...Niahteddybear teddybear
thesunandthesea
Mr. Dreamwolf, I love poems like this too!! love No, I didn’t copy your words ok!roll eyes I always love it!! lol hmmm --- OK, I’ll tell you something…. come here!! c’mon over here…come a lil bit closer closer closer pls…..shimmy ..
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(((It’s NOT ONLY THIS ONE BUT EVERY POEMS I WROTE COME STRIGHT FROM MY HEART, YOU KNOW)))
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hahaaha SORRY I’m noise... giggle actually I am a very shy and neat girl… innocent

flower Thank you for your comment, teddy and kisses!! ( oh-o I’ve never known before that you wear a lipstick!lips it’s left on my cheek! lips LoL… next time wash it off before kissing a girl okay! lol )
professor
thesunandthesea
Dear Mr. mcradloff, lol seem you like teddy & rabbit/bunny,teddybear bunny I see it most of time on your comment! smile

(First I thought the rabbit is doing knitting bunny lol but it’s not knitting but painting lol blushing so you like painting or something? why rabbit? not -> super I thought you loved super-heroes..confused )

comment writing + teddyteddy + rabbit bunny = mcradloff lol <<< pointing It’s really your original pattern ..lol I loved it.

Big thanks teddy oops Mike for your rabbit oops Comment!! lol teddybear bunny
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