WARNING - be honest on CS

Why have so many secrets
what do you have to hide
is it just your regrets
or is it that you lied

You talk so long and often
and plan a rendezvous.
Hearts begin to soften,
thoughts of what could ensue.

When things are left unsaid
and closets not unsealed
the folly when misled
soon will be revealed

The problem when you’re lying
is remembering all you said.
Soon to be sent flying,
caught out and left for dead

The moral of this poem is
it’s as easy as it seems
the reward for being honest is
the fulfilment of your dreams
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Posted: Mar 2011

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agoodguy2have
0rpheus, ok...let's be honest here...this is one great group of quatrains. very well penned, very wise, well done! ;-)
marikia
Very wisely stated. But I am afraid much more is needed, besides being truthful, for the fulfillment of dreams - a good, sound, wholesome luck will come handy.
Macduff5
Hello Orpheus...nice to meet you and what a clever sobriquet. What you have said in your poem is too true. Too many people hide behind masks through fear or whatever. I'm a great believer in the motto of what you see is what you get. Thanks for your honest poem. handshake
hedistuff
interesting....lying, to lie down, lie is spelled l-i-e...should I speak a lie, lie is spelled l-i-e. however, when used in writing, when in repose, spelling is lying. is it the same for fabrication, spelled lying, or lieing, or either? just wondering. thanks for the warning, I shan't tell a ly...(watch those cherrie trees!)
schawalski
so true morpheus , but becareful though
Hekamaat
Words of wisdom- well worth remembering...
0rpheus
Thanks for the kind words.
thesunandthesea
I 1000000% agree with Odette ^___^

"Honesty is the best policy"
And you can find one in me!!! ^___^ lolpeace

I'm 99.99999 % honest... lol devil

A-very-honest write! Nice!!! thumbs up
0rpheus
Hi Hedistuff,
Not sure I follow what you are trying say, the word lying is actually spelled correctly and although it can have a double meaning I used it as the verb of 'to lie'
hedistuff
I was just playing with words...a bad habit. love your poems. keep writing...
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