I LOVE YOU ALL

Apr 2011 1,444 Views 35 comments

^_^ I-LOVE-YOU-ALL ^_^

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I wish I could write a sonnet tonight.
I wish I could make it sweet for you.
I wish I could make it rhyme and right.
I wish I could though I don’t know how to.
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I know I can never write a sonnet.
I know a sonnet is so hard for me.
I know that I am not a good poet.
I know I’m only ‘the sun and the sea’
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So, how could I let you know that I care?
How could I show you what I feel inside?
I'd love to take away all your nightmare.
I’d love to shed every tear when you cried.
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I wish the angels could give me more time,
So that, I’d say “I LOVE YOU ALL” in rhyme.

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Posted: Apr 2011

About this poem:

I would like to say, I LOVE YOU ALL, really!!! I don't know why I really do. Most of ppl here love me like I am one of your family. I really am happy.

I wish I had more time tonight so that I could write a better poem.

Now I can only write this one for tonight. Have a Good Night ALL))) i LOVE yoU)))) i DO!

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Comments (35)

gvmeu2springfield, Massachusetts USAApr 12, 2011

this what life is about, simply love. you got it. let it live within freely. you got it. and you are loved. gvmeu2

marikiaTbilisi, GeorgiaApr 12, 2011

Your sonnets are coming, Sunny, you will learn the trade, just wait. It is much more difficult to learn how to love - and you have mastered this trade when you were born. Thank you, dear, for your love, I feel the same towards you.

FellsmanLake District, Cumbria, England UKApr 12, 2011

Dear SaS

You have attempted and SUCCEEDED in writing one of the most disciplined poetry forms of all....

This is super.... take a bow

Bill x

thesunandtheseaOPTampa, Florida USAApr 12, 2011

gvmeu2

aww----I am loved)))

You are loved too))

THank yOU))) I would like to say,'I love you all', but I dont really know where to start so I was trying to think and think until I fell asleep

.. lol and then I woke up again! and now is 11.30 pm.

so I think i'd better drop something ...before I go to bed.... lol and finally.... I wrote this simple poem for every special ones here.

: )

A simply love from a simply me, S&S ^_____^ to simply you!

Thank you VEry Much again & Have Sweeeeet Dream (4me) lol

marzena777bay shore, New York USAApr 12, 2011

God Night to you

dreamwolf5264francestown, New Hampshire USAApr 12, 2011

wake up sleepy head...its morning now

i was never a poet either,until i caught her with another guy....and the rest became poetry!!!

cafetwo2010Harford county, Maryland USAApr 12, 2011

Love you whether you
write or not
Your words always
hit the spot
And whether you
think your
a poet or not
A sonnet you
are
Sweet and hot!

gnj4uBoston, Massachusetts USAApr 12, 2011

Hi, thesunandthesea,
Having never attempted a sonnet, I say, "Kudos to you!" Lovely sentiment from a lovely poet - and, in sonnet form! Well done!

Macduff5Newcastle, New South Wales AustraliaApr 12, 2011

Sassy, for one who can't write sonnets this is a pretty good attempt...you've even got the metre pretty well spot on. You are a clever girl and I think everyone on here loves you too.

QuietStormFSouthern Ontario, Ontario CanadaApr 12, 2011

Very nicely written.. and of course you are a poet.. and a very good one at that!

tstone61brayton, Iowa USAApr 12, 2011

sweet

oldman70Other, Nicosia CyprusApr 13, 2011

Thanks.. you are Love Goddess.

niah9Auckland, New ZealandApr 13, 2011

In poetry...we grow....and the style we start with, usually changes....as we develope....and to attempt a new style, a form of growth that we push our own boundary...I have see you S & S pushing yourself...and as others have said, you are a poet...and with serious artisitic talents...

Niah

thesunandtheseaOPTampa, Florida USAJun 13, 2011

( : Dear Marina,

Thank you very much for your kind comment. And thank you for loving me.

I love you too. ^_^

thesunandtheseaOPTampa, Florida USAJun 13, 2011

Dear Billy,

Thank you very much. I still don't know how to write a sonnet anyway. Lol but if you think this one is ok then THANK YOU. ^___^

Love you too.

jazzy75Houston, Texas USAJun 13, 2011

Love is such an inspiration....as is you

Freckles123Liverpool, Merseyside, England UKJun 13, 2011

Your poetry and your sweetness make it hard not to love you Sas... keep it up as you always manage to make me (and lots of others I imagine) smile, even at times when we feel a little blue.. Thank you for that SaS..
Freckles

thesunandtheseaOPTampa, Florida USAApr 15, 2012

Dear >> Profile Deleted, Profile Deleted, Mr. Lion (café2), Gnj4u (my always angel), My baby (Macduff5) haha, QuietStorm, tstone, Profile deleted, ^_^ My lovely Niah, my super cute Jazzieeeee, ^_^ and my sweet Freckles ^_*

THANK YOU ALL OF YOU SO SO SO VERY MUCH!!!! ^_^ I’ll give you one hug each!!! with a kiss/each too… My special promotion… one hug and one kiss!!!!^___^ Queue pleaseeeeeee ^___^ Thank you for taking time to read and even left me lovely comments. ^__^ I love you all.

Love You ALL

thesunandtheseaOPTampa, Florida USAApr 15, 2012

Dear All,

I wrote this sonnet last year (April 2011), I still feel the same to all people on the poetry board!!! ^_^ Love you all….

And hey my sonnet is improved!!!! I mean I can write a better sonnet now… ^0^ heehe Just to let you know!! And share you all some of my happiness… lol

And you all should/must be happy to me.. heehee

or when I am happy you should be happy too okay?!!

MY command!!!

lol

^_*

So now plssss SMILE!!! like this >>> ^____________^ XXXXX

^___^ Love,

SaS

andrew149Southbourne, nr.Bournemouth, Dorset, England UKApr 15, 2012

Thankyou SaS.....Very well written. A sonnet though it looks easy, is a very hard thing to write and get everything right....Bill is the better one at it here that I have seen and so if he says you have it right then take it as so.....I am happy just doing my own thing, in my own style, and you too will find yours, as does everyone that sticks with the writing.....You have come on so far in the last year...Well done and very HAPPY NEW YEAR for you.....Andrew...xxx

gnj4uBoston, Massachusetts USAApr 15, 2012

Hi, thesunandthesea,
As April rolls around again, without a doubt, I am happy for you in your happiness, pure and simple!

Macduff5Newcastle, New South Wales AustraliaApr 15, 2012

Hi Sas,

Good to read my old comment after so long. I know that all one needs to do with you is point you in the right direction and you'll come up with the goods...sonnets included. I missed all those lovely visual effects and cute comments.

Now you are one year older and "wiser", but I hope you haven't lost that Thai charm.

Cheers

thesunandtheseaOPTampa, Florida USAApr 15, 2012

Dear Macduff, (again) lol I just noticed that you wrote “Good to read my old comment after so long” LOL So it’s good to see and read your old comment??? How about my old poem?? my old sonnet??? You feel bad to see it?? LOL How about my old face?? lol

Odette67Penrith, Cumbria, England UKApr 15, 2012

Hi Jib,

I think this is a very good sonnet... Your English is excellent too. The picture of the dog is the image of my Molly... Only thing is... Molly does not have plaits.

LadyMorgana60Norwich, Norfolk, England UKApr 15, 2012

Such a sweet sonnet Thesunandthesea, and your written English is great!
Adore the cute dog picture, & must try this with my cat!

Though she wont need the Beauty mask treatment

Keep those sonnets coming

hedistuffLayopolis, West Virginia USAApr 15, 2012

I just love you....thank you for all the fuzzy. It keeps me so warm!

OndosSydney, New South Wales AustraliaApr 15, 2012

Sooooo Much Looooove Here.

SAS. You must be a Love magnet.

thesunandtheseaOPTampa, Florida USAApr 20, 2015

Thank you everyone again for every warm comments you gave me. It's been 4 yrs since I wrote this poem, now I feel old. lol
Guess what, I don't know how to write a sonnet now... and the person I missed most is Bill aka Fellsman, if anyone sees him, pls send my warm regards to him too.

Happy April to everyone! ^_^

rusticbinkmooseYaw, Saskatchewan CanadaApr 20, 2015

It's a treat,
A poem so sweet.
The words just flow,
When the heart's aglow.

Now don't be shy,
To get too high.
For it nice to hear,
From one so dear.

No fear to make ,
Any mistake.
For all is good,
In the land of could.

All I want to say
Is Don't give up.
For there's a day,
You'll be at the top.

lindsyjonesunknown, California USAApr 24, 2015

So nice to see you dear SAS. How are you?

I hope you remember me? The old Windy Weatherly.

thesunandtheseaOPTampa, Florida USAApr 26, 2015

Rusticbink: Thank you! You're sweet! ^_^

thesunandtheseaOPTampa, Florida USAApr 26, 2015

Windy: Of course I remember you!!! Soooo glad you're still here. How have you been doing? Hope everything's good. Miss u. :")

lindsyjonesunknown, California USAApr 26, 2015

I'm so glad to see you, too my dear old friend.
Yes, I can say mourning is over and new life begin.

I should write about that.

Sorry I haven't seen our old Fellsman for the last year.

Let me know if you see him.

How are you, married yet?