by thesunandtheseaTampa, Florida, USA
Apr 2011 715 Views 10 comments
Happy Birthday To You! (RemiX)
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Have you ever loved and lost someone before?
And you’ve been hurt by the one you adore
Perchance the dream you had has no more
Plenty of lies, you’ve chose to close the door
You have searched for love to carry on
But the love you found was false and untrue
It’s like a game that never can be won
Reaching for the dreams that turn so blue
There are no words that can describe your pain
Heartbreak is worse than the worst tragedy
Do not lose faith for we can start again
And when you’re ready, please run to me
You’ll never know how much I cherish you
Take my hand, I will love you endlessly
Our paths of love are many without clue
You will be mine for all eternity
One million years are not enough for me
Until the sky falls I’ll be with thee
+++++.....+++++.....+++++.....+++++.....+++++
Have you ever loved and lost someone before?
And you’ve been hurt by the one you adore
Perchance the dream you had has no more
Plenty of lies, you’ve chose to close the door
You have searched for love to carry on
But the love you found was false and untrue
It’s like a game that never can be won
Reaching for the dreams that turn so blue
There are no words that can describe your pain
Heartbreak is worse than the worst tragedy
Do not lose faith for we can start again
And when you’re ready, please run to me
You’ll never know how much I cherish you
Take my hand, I will love you endlessly
Our paths of love are many without clue
You will be mine for all eternity
One million years are not enough for me
Until the sky falls I’ll be with thee
+++++.....+++++.....+++++.....+++++.....+++++
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Posted: Apr 2011
About this poem:
LOL
If you wonder why the title is 'Happy Birthday To You', 
well....it's because I just tried to mix two poetry patterns between 'Acrostic' and "Sonnet" together, lol 
and then this it the result. LOL 
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Comments (10)
^__^ lol I'm so free today then I tried to do something new...
You are adorableeeeeeee)))))) MUAHXXXXXx
I really like the colours and format of your write sunandsea,
and the ending "One million years aren’t enough for me
Until the sky falls I’ll be with thee" speaks of how deeply
connected two people can be...
Ty for your sharing
You set the standard with the double acrostic and now it's double acrostic and sonnet form combined. We'll have to start calling you professor
NOOOOoooooo-----Not MUTUAL hug n Kisses!!!! NO wayyyyy---I mean ‘VISUAL’!!!! >_<
Sooo embarrassed!!!
Okay, Mr. Café, you know my English is bad,
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Ps.
Getting to grips with the sonnet form is difficult enough, to combine it with an acrostic is therefore quite an achievement. The final rhyming couplet is very romantic...
Best wishes
Bill
(((HUGS)))
^__^ I chose ‘sweeeeeeeeeeet colors’ cus I know “sweet” people will surely LOVE IT!!!
^____^ Thank you for your comment, I loved it.
VITUAL KISSES N HUGS (((XXOO)))