Free Soul

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May 2011 465 Views 10 comments

Free Soul

Author: Unknown

Don't Try to Catch me
Im a bird
That needs to go back home
I Can be your Love
But I'm a Free Soul
Don't Try to make me Cry
I won't even show you
The Weakness inside
Nor My Broken Heart
Sometimes it's seams hard
To let you go
But Facts live longer than we do..
That there's no me & you ..
I may have a broken wing
But I am Leaving you
I'm goin' back home !!

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Posted: May 2011

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FellsmanLake District, Cumbria, England UKMay 22, 2011

Dear Swan

A bird with a broken wing? A misdiagnosis perhaps... I am sure that wing is merely bruised - and you, Dear Swan, will one day soon be flying high, and may well alight on a far more agreeable perch than the one you have just vacated.

Best wishes

Bill x

Swan87OPSyria, QatarMay 22, 2011

Bill , you're the sweetest !!! yes you are !
Thanks alot for your wishes and kind comment ..

Swan

SUMMIT09DALLAS, Texas USAMay 22, 2011

YES EVEN IN PAIN WE SHOULD TRY TO MOVE FORWARD. TO A PLACE THAT BRINGS US COMFORT, HOME!

boyshchrm6barrie, Ontario CanadaMay 22, 2011

Always solace in home.
A clean break is oft
preferred to lingering pain.

Macduff5Newcastle, New South Wales AustraliaMay 23, 2011

Hi Swan,
I suspect you have been a free soul for some time. Believe in yourself and your own free will...you'll get by.

mcradloffPlatteville, Wisconsin USAMay 23, 2011

This poem makes me sad, there are some mean people out there who arn't interested in going to heaven or doing good, they just want to see the world burn. It takes a lot of courage to leave someone, I hope you find peace and love with someone who treats you right.