Becareful of what you're wishing for You may end up loving me And i would be only closing that door Life goes in such mysterious way You hurt me once And I can hurt You even more ! Cuz you never know When your luck is right by your side Or is it just your sweetest enemy Hopefully this lesson will tell you I am who I am .. I raise up when the rain fall down I hold on to so many scars in this heart But i'll always wear my crown I'm someone , you can't take back Im proud .. I am who I am
andrew149Southbourne, nr.Bournemouth, Dorset, England UKJun 20, 2011
Thankyou Swan, I like this one...well written and confident too, I believe you are who you are, and proud of it....
Swan87OPSyria, QatarJun 20, 2011
NO , Thank You andrew ! You're such a sweetheart im glad you liked it ..
Bless u
Swan
FellsmanLake District, Cumbria, England UKJun 20, 2011
Dear Swan
You are at that wonderful time in your life when you can look into the mirror at your reflection and say "Thank you God". Alas, at my age one is much more likely to look into the mirror and say "OMG".
This poem is so much more upbeat than than some of your more recent postings.
No less than I would expect from a beautiful young lady with her entire adult life ahead of her...
A bouncy optimistic read.
Kindest regards
Bill
Swan87OPSyria, QatarJun 20, 2011
Bill ,
Beleive me If i see you .. I would say OMG as well and hold you and THANK YOU for the great man you ARE !! You make me smile with your words !! I don't beleive in magic but this is magic what you do in few words ! I gotta say , im scared of the future ..but only cowards wont try to face their problems and move on !! so im moving on
With Love
Swan
vyoletaArkaroola, South Australia AustraliaJun 20, 2011
I raise up when the rain fall down...I am who I am ...nice and impressive. Thanks for sharing. Best luck!
simpleME32Limassol, CyprusJun 20, 2011
"Don't threat" no matter Who you are..The song of Love ..one of my writes..wasn't Me..i was expecting that someone could tell me who wrote..or who is.Marlon Brando starts GodFATHER..and i complete the sentence..Every Godfather has a Godfather..ex..DeNIRO,AL PACINO..Thank you Swan ..but personally..who you are??you speak for yourself or for your own comunity"..are your words or them?
stillbluerainRochelle, Illinois USAJun 20, 2011
nice my sweet habibi swan
Swan87OPSyria, QatarJun 20, 2011
@ Sweet vyoleta ! Nice meeting you here im happy that you liked it .. Thanks alot for ur comment
Swan
Swan87OPSyria, QatarJun 20, 2011
@ simpleME32 !! Hi it's not a threat at all ..IT'S SIMPLE ! I'm only presenting myself and all women who think they are better off single than to be in a bad relationship with a man who hurts her all the time !!! same goes to you and guys !! wouldn't you rather stay single and powerful without some lady who always puts you down ?
Think about it !
Swan87OPSyria, QatarJun 20, 2011
Jooohhhhhnnnn a BIG HUG FOR U THANKS HABIBI !!
Swan
RedexNorthumberland, England UKJun 20, 2011
y0u certainly are you Swan and I like your crown too
Swan87OPSyria, QatarJun 20, 2011
Redex ! You look Stunning with your new profile pic hun.
a million thanks to your sweet words .. so kind of u
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im glad you liked it ..
Bless u
Swan
You are at that wonderful time in your life when you can look into the mirror at your reflection and say "Thank you God". Alas, at my age one is much more likely to look into the mirror and say "OMG".
This poem is so much more upbeat than than some of your more recent postings.
No less than I would expect from a beautiful young lady with her entire adult life ahead of her...
A bouncy optimistic read.
Kindest regards
Bill
Beleive me If i see you .. I would say OMG as well and hold you and THANK YOU for the great man you ARE !!
You make me smile with your words !! I don't beleive in magic but this is magic what you do in few words !
I gotta say , im scared of the future ..but only cowards wont try to face their problems and move on !!
so im moving on
With Love
Swan
im happy that you liked it .. Thanks alot for ur comment
Swan
it's not a threat at all ..IT'S SIMPLE !
I'm only presenting myself and all women who think they are better off single than to be in a bad relationship with a man who hurts her all the time !!!
same goes to you and guys !! wouldn't you rather stay single and powerful without some lady who always puts you down ?
Think about it !
THANKS HABIBI !!
Swan
You look Stunning with your new profile pic hun.
a million thanks to your sweet words .. so kind of u
Swan
Great write my lil Swan! ^_____^
your words means alot to me for sure
Swan