The people i may never know, have touched my life completely, so.. The connection's that are formed, radiate with so much warmth. It's a gift from above. Appreciated with sincere love. A kind and written word. Although our voices may never be heard. There's nothing like reading a poem, its just as beautiful, as the sweetest song!! In the debts of every soul, theres a magical possession that unfolds, a message connecting us Interpretations a constant must, of the things in life we all share!! Our dreams & hopes even when dispared. Our disappointment's & triump's wrapped inside a few paragraph's. No matter what our social status, or where we are from, on this planet. A tranquil voice, unheard echo's in the myth's, is worth more than a thousand words...
Many thanks!!!! Naim, windy, niah....much appreciated thank you!!!
Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoJun 16, 2012
You weave your thoughts so fine and indeed ''theres nothing like reading a poem,its just as beautiful,as the sweetest song''...much thanks for those winsome words
windyweatherlySan Francisco, California USAJun 21, 2012
Cherry
this is so powerful cherry, "our dissappointments and triumps wrapped inside a few pharagraphs."
I kind of feel like this has been what was happening in my life... I keep wrapping up my whole emotion on black and white and I don't know anymore if I shouldn't.
Phyllis
windyweatherlySan Francisco, California USAJun 21, 2012
Cherry
this is so powerful cherry, "our dissappointments and triumps wrapped inside a few pharagraphs."
I kind of feel like this has been what was happening in my life... I keep wrapping up my whole emotion on black and white and I don't know anymore if I shouldn't.
Phyllis
windyweatherlySan Francisco, California USAJun 21, 2012
Cherry
this is so powerful cherry, "our dissappointments and triumps wrapped inside a few pharagraphs."
I kind of feel like this has been what was happening in my life... I keep wrapping up my whole emotion on black and white and I don't know anymore if I shouldn't.
Phyllis
windyweatherlySan Francisco, California USAJun 21, 2012
Cherry
this is so powerful cherry, "our dissappointments and triumps wrapped inside a few pharagraphs."
I kind of feel like this has been what was happening in my life... I keep wrapping up my whole emotion on black and white and I don't know anymore if I shouldn't.
I think it's not easy being an emotionally deep person phyliss, like " we are" It's who you are as a person, and to change would mean compromise. Especially when you have gone through a life changing or traumatic experience!!! That's what ppl are drawn to..that energy and spark that radiates from within. It's not physical it's your spirit thats what attracts us to 1 another "the spirit", stay as you are cause that freedom you posess is powerful!!! and filled with emotion and love!!! Your friend Cherie
windyweatherlySan Francisco, California USAJun 22, 2012
cherry you just made me so elevatrd in my new life with your response. i don't really know what happened there but i believe the emphais of what you touched me on your precious words. thank you so very much Cherry
What a lovely poem. There is an old country song that has the words you had me at hello and that would describe this poem. You caught me with the opening line " The people i may never know, have touched my life completely, so.." I at first was not sure of the subject matter and I instantly thought big picture. The many I have passed in life. Have met just at a glance that have changed me. But yes poetry is a way of showing sides of ourselfs.
Thanks so much happy go Lucky, & yes so true it does show different sides of us, thats the beauty of poetry and your so right luv what you wrote..its a fleeting moment that ppl often come in and out of our lives like reasons seasons and lifetimes. Thankyou for sharing that with me
I can appreciate this poem greatly for the sincerity you've expressed so well the meaning of a message maybe even encrypted in a poem.....beautiful.....
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Thanks for sharing
this is so powerful cherry, "our dissappointments and triumps wrapped inside a few pharagraphs."
I kind of feel like this has been what was happening in my life... I keep wrapping up my whole emotion on black and white and I don't know anymore if I shouldn't.
Phyllis
this is so powerful cherry, "our dissappointments and triumps wrapped inside a few pharagraphs."
I kind of feel like this has been what was happening in my life... I keep wrapping up my whole emotion on black and white and I don't know anymore if I shouldn't.
Phyllis
this is so powerful cherry, "our dissappointments and triumps wrapped inside a few pharagraphs."
I kind of feel like this has been what was happening in my life... I keep wrapping up my whole emotion on black and white and I don't know anymore if I shouldn't.
Phyllis
this is so powerful cherry, "our dissappointments and triumps wrapped inside a few pharagraphs."
I kind of feel like this has been what was happening in my life... I keep wrapping up my whole emotion on black and white and I don't know anymore if I shouldn't.
Phyllis
Phyllis
I concur.
What can I say...feelings I can relate too on every level...amazing as always.
Enjoyed very much with thanks