RIPPLES OF CHANGE

May 2, 2012

Behind me, the echoes of days spent.
A lifetime of seconds, minutes...years.
I hold dear each moment of sweet joy,
paid for with struggles and countless tears.

Behind me, the failures and empty prayers,
which to me seemed to drift by unheard.
Yet answers came forth in other forms...
I learned to choose wisely every word.

Before me, a clean canvas awaits.
Colors, like paint, are choices we make.
The shape of desires unfolding;
manifesting with each breath I take.

Before me, the sum of all I am.
A face in the mirror I now CAN face.
The door is closed to the past, unlocked.
Forgiveness teaches the soul its grace.

Before you, a woman of passion,
holding love’s light as a sacred flame.
A bountiful heart calls through silence
and soon, I pray, I will know your name.

For you alone, a whispered promise;
win my heart, and my whole heart I’ll give,
that we may share this promise come true,
now, and through every day we both live.

Within us, the spark of endless joy,
that proves again love’s beautiful worth.
A bond untouched by ripple or change,
leaving us to our heaven on earth.
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Posted: May 2012
About this poem:
I started this a couple of days ago and just finished it today, May 4th. This poem is definitely a reflection of all the things that have been on my mind the past few weeks. As we get older, we can't help looking back over our lives. Being forgiven becomes as much a part of being able to forgive in the course of healing. Looking outside ourselves, yet deeply inward, past the stuff we would rather not look at. I feel that all the work I've done on myself in recovery the past 22 years, has made me a better person, sure. But only now do I feel I am truly ready to love that one special man for the rest of my life. I just don't know his name yet. THANK YOU for taking the time to have a read.

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Comments (23)

Poetnumber1
This is an awesome piece,i really like this one also. Every stanza is just beautifuljaw drop wow Spot onhug M.M
CelticPoet12
Thank you SO much Poet#1. I am honored by your response and delighted too I must say. I just posted a LONG two part piece and is a medival story poem. I would very much like your comments on that one. Thank you again and have a super weekend!~ The little guy with the dropping jaw just tickled the heck out of me and I wanted you to know, that was really something. LOL.cheers applause
CelticPoet12
Dang, I swear some days I can't spell, type or get my head on right. Oh well. LOL. No big!~doh
elo69
lot of wisdom in these words,a lot of growth and a lot of freedom,the kind that builds from a lifetime...elo... wave
CelticPoet12
Something went crazy with the number count. No way over 300 people viewed this poem in two minutes of posted. Interesting. Thanks for stopping by fellow poets. dancing
CelticPoet12
Oh, Hi ELO, I was posting my silly comment as you were posting yours. Thank you for the delightful comment. Everyone here is inspiring me deeply and that's where this latest poem came from. Thank you for your words. It means a lot!~ Have a great weekend. cheers
lucy1777
nice work celtic,,,,,teddybear Thanks for sharing
CelticPoet12
Aw, thanks Lucy. I so appreciate that. I hope you get to do something wonderful this weekend. Enjoy!~popcorn
Maxeen_1
Hi Celticpoet Thankyou for sharing with me.
I feel and sense such growth within your poem and your lifes journeying is unfolding & clarifying before your very eyes. Hugs Livy x. hug purple heart bouquet
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Before me, a clean canvas awaits
Colors,
like paint, are choices we make
The shape of desires unfolding;
manifesting with each breath I take.
Before me, the sum of all I am.
A face in the mirror I now CAN face.
The door is closed to the past, unlocked.
Forgiveness teaches the soul its grace.
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CelticPoet12
Thank you Maxeen. It HAS been quite a journey and I feel pretty solid in my life anymore. I've been on my own for 5 years, so there will be a series of changes to adapt to when I meet someone. But I think it will all be fine. The biggest part of my growth came from learning to accept responsibility for myself and what other people thought of me was none of my business. That was a hard one. Thank you for you comment and have a good one!~writing
poppyred
Such is the journey of life and its lessons CelticPoet.Its funny how as we get older revisiting events we recognise the lesson.We holtis poultis along without heed and then all of a sudden we are in the reflection and we see.A beautiful poem. Greatly appreciated.teddybear teddybear teddybear
CelticPoet12
Thanks Poppy for the love and the hugs. I am so happy to have met you here. All of you are an inspiration and this poem is one that has come to life because being here on Poet's Corner. So see, being here is a good thing!~ hug
LadyMorgana60
Wonderful Poem Celticlady..
a profound journey with much reward gained from within, inspirational dear lady..thank you for sharing yay bouquet
soulgoddess
Quote: Colors, like paint, are choices we make.
True! If you choose light colors, your world will be light, vice versa. Lovely poem!
CelticPoet12
Thank you Morgana and Goddess. Your comments leave me speechless. I am so pleased you enjoyed this one. The feedback is always helpful and rewarding. wave
windyweatherly
Celtic this is an acceptance of who we have become

Enlightened and live with our aspirations and hopes whether achieved or still working on it

Great write Celtic this

love his

phyllis
CelticPoet12
Thank you very much Windy. I enjoy your work as well. I need to get in there and read more of them. Have an amazing weekend. applause
swade777
Well young 'Lady', I must also put in my .02 worth of opinion here after so many wonderful, encouraging comments...
Personally, I was quite impressed with the manner in which you presented the changing of characters and the developing relationship that occurred throughout those changes.
The way you started out with 'You' looking back, then 'You' looking ahead. Then, it changed to a second 'Someone' standing in the presence of the 'New You'... then... an implied 'commitment' to that special 'Someone', ending in a framework of a successful union between the two of you to love one another in 'Heavenly Bliss'.... You're a true craftsperson of the written word!!!! AWESOME!!! It's nothing less than a MASTERPIECE!!! applause applause applause
CelticPoet12
Swade, I am so pleased you came by to read this one. I thank you for taking the time to share how the poem spoke to you and for the details. That means alot. I hope you have a great weekend. Chat with you soon. Blessings, Celtic!~daisy thanks
Ladybee42
Dearest Celtic Poet, this is such a lovely deep and thoughtful write and a beautifully written piece of poetry. Beauty is completely wasted on the young - yet our compensation is wisdom.

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CelticPoet12
Oh thank you LadyBee. How sweet are you? What a grand compliment. You made my day and I hope yours is amazing!~ Hugs my dear.hug
Celtic
cafetwo2010
This is ripples of great beauty so greatly written..What can I say to do this justice? I'm a fan. professor wine kiss
CelticPoet12
Aye, thank thee kindly good sir. I appreciate your comments and say I am blessed and honored, yet these words do not fit what I feel. Tis not enough. Good day!~ Hugshug
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