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Memories (Lucy's challenge)

The hilltops covered in pristine white snow
Sunlight glistening off silver tipped peaks
And yet nature’s beauty does not show
As much elegance as your body speaks

The corners of your mouth rise up to smile
A light in your eyes brighter than the sun
All the time spent in your arms so worthwhile
A magical feeling compared to none

I capture moments in my heart to save
To hold me through times when you are not there
For your loving touch is all that I crave
When life’s priorities leave none to spare

So now I sit with memories in mind
Waiting to create more of the same kind
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Posted: Jul 2012
About this poem:
I have always struggled with the sonnet, but can't resist a good challenge.

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morgen90210
I Dont know what is a sonnet,but the way you put is great..hmm never had the chance to learn the different type of poem writing .good and lasting one .
Fellsman
Hi Cloudy

If this has been a struggle, then you've coped with it amazingly well! A really fine sonnet both in content and on a technical level.

Regards

Bill gift wine
Nuwahri61
I'm with morgen on this one lucy .........but this is a very enjoyable read .........regards n61cheers peace yay grin cool
Nuwahri61
OOOOps you now i meant cloudysky ..........regards n61
lucy1777
I think you did a wonderful job with this sonnet cloudy! I struggle with them also.teddybear
windyweatherly
Memories (Lucy's challenge)
by: CloudySky

Cloudy this is so beautiful. Very enjoyable reading it..Thanks for sharing.

I capture moments in my heart to save
To hold me through times when you are not there
For your loving touch is all that I crave
When life’s priorities leave none to spare

So now I sit with memories in mind
Waiting to create more of the same kind
Poetnumber1
Dont worry im not a seasoned sonnet writer either,for some reason its only two i have ever written laugh But you have written a beautiful piece that i find most appealing though i gather sadness along the way within this write.wine M.M
swade777
Cloudy.... you're a natural!!! Your Sonnet is absolutely PUBLISHABLE!!!! Awesome write!!! applause
cherryreggae
Wow!!! Gorgeous write cloudy sky.......simply beautiful!!! Ty for sharingapplause cheering applause cheering handshake
adjhe
Cloudysky i loved this it was beautiful. I have been trying to write one myself but just can not get that sonnet swing. Maybe i will give it one more try you encouraged me.
studecar
Excellent poem, I like, I believe your vacation was a shot in the arm . studecar
Yankee4youonline now!
This is really great stuff....i truly admire your effort....applause applause applause
gnj4u
Hi, CloudySky,
Now that you have risen to the sonnet challenge, we will be Waiting for you to create more of the same kind. Nicely done.
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