Just because macduff challenge

by morgen90210singapore, Central Singapore

Sep 2012 600 Views 12 comments

Just because (macduff challenge)

Just because I am from Singapore,
Does not mean I am Alien!
Just because I live with my mother,
Does not mean I am a mummy's boy,
Just because I am lonely,
Does not mean I am desperate!
(But I am)
Just because I am short ,
Does not mean I cant get taller girls,
Just because I am different,
Does not mean I am not human.
Just because I write poems,
Does not mean I am boring.
Just because I am obese,
Does not give you a right to ridicule me!
I am not tall,not smart,not even intellectual ,
But you will find ,a funny,friendly,caring,honest,sincere,faithful,romantic guy inside,
Trying to get out and be what I am and not just because you said
so...

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Posted: Sep 2012

About this poem:

This is the best I can think ..please forgive me if I said anything rude or sensitive .

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Comments (12)

adjhematteson, Illinois USASep 8, 2012

morgen i like this because it is sooooo true what you said. just because i am obese does not give you the right to ridicule me. That is so true. We are all humans with feelings. You said it all.

RedexNorthumberland, England UKSep 8, 2012

morgen friendly in blogs and fun poems too

you even have parti over here too

LadyMorgana60Norwich, Norfolk, England UKSep 8, 2012

Nice one Morgan

Love the truth & meaning in your words..

FellsmanLake District, Cumbria, England UKSep 8, 2012

Well said morgen

All of us are a mixture of good and not-so-good attributes, and as none of us are perfect ourselves, we have no right to expect perfection in others. A philosophical write...

Bill

Macduff5Newcastle, New South Wales AustraliaSep 8, 2012

Hi Morgan,

Nicely done. We all tend to stereotype people but with this poem you have shown a real individuality and uniqueness. Very impressive.

orientalkoruGlenella, Queensland AustraliaSep 8, 2012

I didn't know you Aliens in Singapore...lol! Enjoyed reading your honest take on Macduff's challenge my friend...

Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoSep 8, 2012

When one pours out their heart for all to see you've got to respect them for that.As i said before you've got soul...compliments

M.M

morgen90210OPsingapore, Central Singapore SingaporeSep 9, 2012

Thank you ..each and everyone that comment on my poem...
I'm not bitter or sad ,just mighty glad to get it off the chest ..Special thanks to Macdoff .. He didnt spill a can of worms but got us understanding each other better ..Cheers to you mate.

particolorInverell, New South Wales AustraliaSep 9, 2012

G'Day Morgan!! Had to wait till this THING stopped crashing I wanted to enter your McDuff Just because I like Vegemite on Toast!!! But its too late now!!