Hey ! What's happening to me ?

The pain of loss,
A sudden tear at the heart,
Hard hit on my head,
I move sideway with pain!
Ouch! That's hurts,
Throbbing pulse running through my veins,
My god ,my shaken hand,
Trembling wildly like a vicious snake.
A jerk and a twist,
Body and mind battling over total control,
What's happening to me,
Mind and soul contradicting one another !
Silence and still,
No movement or feel ,
Am I dead or am I living,
Confuse I am,
Flashes of moments,
Are these real or my imagination?
Lost of words,
Mind is blank,
And now I write, of what I felt...
Can you feel it too?
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Posted: Sep 2012
About this poem:
Was feeling sleepy then ...Bang got this inspiration just now with juice flowing thru my head ...not orange juice. .but creative juice..i write now quickly ...

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bard76
intense! when control leaves, its scary.
morgen90210
Intense indeed !
Now i'm sleepy again ..soon to be midnight here...
So I bid everyone good night ...
Sheep counting ...1...2...3...4...5...Yawn...9...6...15...something ...m...
niah9
oh I have these moments, when i wake up and walk to the laptop...in a daze I swear......Kathygrin
orientalkoru
Can I feel it too? Definitely and I feel good to know I am not abnormal after all...rolling on the floor laughing peace gift
morgen90210
Thanks mighty westernstar ,
Nice words ..my great friend.heart wings
morgen90210
Kathy i'm laughing thinking you zombie sleepwalking to your laptop ! Thanks heart wings j
morgen90210
Hey koru san . Was head banging with sleepiness ...when writing it ...thanks heart wings
LadyMorgana60
Know that feeling..Creative juice is always great! keep it coming..and enjoyed dancing wine
adjhe
Morgen there are days i can not sleep. I have been up for 30 hours now had insomnia last night. Military trained me to be up for days. I can feel this poem from my head to my toes. I like this poem it one of your that makes me laugh and then think.rolling on the floor laughing confused dancing yay wave yawn
morgen90210
Thank yu lady morgana ...peace
morgen90210
Adeline thank you so much
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