Tired but Dont give up

Straight from the hidden heart and soul,
Emptiness inside and nothing to hold,
At times I also feel this blue,
Everything you've said is 100% true!

The one we always ask if you are there,
On this planet Earth if so where?
I've been waiting a long time just like you,
Why does it take so long to become two?

Some days you just want to give up,
Hit the bottles and strangers at pub,
We are never meant to be alone,
Still wistful thinking to find our own,

Dont think about this and that too much!!
There's no such thing as beginner's luck!
Dont nod your head like an arabic duck,
Or forever alone you'll be stuck.

Just Look straight at me,
What do you really see?
I may be the ugliest beast you'll ever meet,
But that's not going to stop this hunky meat!

Countless times I try,
To get attention of many girls,
And yet i'm not stopping now,
Till I find her to the end of this world.

What i'm trying to say my dear,
Dont give up without a fight,
Try,aim and hit your mark,
God is on our side ,just Dont give up.
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Posted: Nov 2012
About this poem:
Marialee been there done that too ..
Dont give up coz the body knows and soon start to fade rapidly .
This is for people like you and me ...
As much as for you and pray I do too.

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Comments (7)

Poetnumber1
Hi Morgen,you certainly spoke from your heart.

Countless times I try,
To get attention of many girls,
And yet i'm not stopping now,
Till I find her to the end of this world.


With positivety like that you are certain to find that special woman...cheers
orientalkoru
Beautiful fighting spirit there Danesh... ...awesome... you're the man! cheers thumbs up applause
marialee56
Nice Morgen thanks for letting me know i'm not alone!!
morgen90210
Thanks MasterJudge poetno.1
That's a title I made for u in my next poem...
morgen90210
Hey LadyKittyHawk kathy ...thanks my PoetKnight
Of Bard's Table ...this and more coming soon ...
morgen90210
Marialee you are welcome ...i should be thanking you...
Nuwahri61
Hey Morgen ....good onya mate........never say never .......great write
Regards Nucheers
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