My atomic lover...

My atomic lover, chemically induces me.
Transforms me into substances and breaks
Down, my anatomy...
He starts with my mind, as complex as it may be.
Changes my compound structure. My neurons to
Transmitters, stop functioning naturally.
I no longer can process, the capability to reason
Freely...
He interrupts my thought pattern, and emotionally
Challenges me.
After my mind is stimulated, he advances to
My heart.
A vital organ, made up of 4 chambers, this is the
Crucial part...
My heart cannot transfer, what the mind is telling me.
It races out of control, in all urgencies...
All my senses then awaken, with one single touch.
My vital signs, are compromised, as a passionate
Persuasion erupts...
My heart skips a beat, at the thought of his loving ways.
So patient, kind, & understanding. Never ceases to amaze
An ignition starts, that revives the heart, I can never give
Enough praise...my atomic lover, I will love you till my departing days...
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Jan 2013

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rapturecapture
First of all,,,your choice of text..applause as I sooo wanted to know what you had to say?...
but found myself squinting:...laugh:
then "I ARRIVED TO COMMENT AND SO I READ IT AGAIN... "applause... My heart cannot transfer,what the mind is telling me.

what a wonderful mind you have...professor
Thank you for sharing "YOUR GIFT"teddybear heart wings

Your Fan from Ireland x Rapture
cherryreggae
Awhh rapture thanks so much for your lovely comment always sincerely appreciate it:) Thankyou for also pointing out txt size, I did that on iPad &.sometimes appears bigger than it is lol hopefully it is larger now...your a lovely soul!!! handshake bouquet :hug your friend Cherie..
rapturecapture
Well it made me wonder?...mistake or not?...you are a lovely soul with a heart in the RIGHT place, on equal par... with your wonderful mind...
Love from Ireland... Rapture heart wings
IvoryPetals
lol, this poem was like a hole, i fell right into it. i loved it, awesome write head banger
Ladybee42
I love this Cherry - I saw it the other day but wan't logging in at the time and had to go find it again! laugh It's even better than I remembered, very cool idea and nicely written poetry

thumbs up purple heart purple heart purple heart
rapturecapture
Spot on "Mylady"bee...
After my mind is stimulated he advances to my heart...

"In my eyes"
a well knitted poem... and the knots unravel as we read... Its amazing what you can design?... in the wool-mills of your mind.
Amazing Cherry...



A loyal Fan from Ireland x Raptureprofessor
cherryreggae
Thanks very much ivorypetals!! head banger grin glad you enjoyed it:)
cherryreggae
Always appreciate your comment ladybee...hug & thanks 4 feedback!!!peace bouquet
cherryreggae
Much thanks & appreciation, as always rapture....really love the comments tyteddybear teddybear
john17021984
Hi Cherie, You do write unusual and interesting poems, like my friend Lady Jewel you both have weird and beautiful ideas for poems, this one I thought was very different, you have a brilliant mind Cherie and you are going from strength to strength with your work. all the best. John bouquet heart wings kiss yay
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