JACK'S NOT NIMBLE

Jack wasn't so nimble
And definitely not quick,
When he jumped over
The candlestick.

He tripped on the candle
Setting fire to the floor,
It also burned the house,
The one that's next door.

The man who lived there
Was the local church Parson
Jack's now serving time
Convicted of arson.
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Apr 2013
About this poem:
another nursery poem trashed

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Comments (7)

darkhorse555
nice take on a nursery rhyme i done one myself bang tidy a mad take with romance i liked the wording a credit to the penthumbs up grin
shadow1950
good take Larry I like the twist well penned
lucy1777
rolling on the floor laughing I guess he wasn't nimble!
Odette67
I love it Larry, I knew you would come up with a goodun.laugh purple heart
studecar
I thank all of you for reading my quirky poem, and as always I appreciate your comments, you make me happy. Larry applause wave hug
Jyonnah
another nursery poem trashedrolling on the floor laughing

Not trashed, Studecar! That was funny as heck - arson!! laugh thumbs up hug
rapturecapture
Hi Studecar
laugh rolling on the floor laughing
applause Nice one enjoyed your lovely thoughts on this one
Thanks for sharinghug angel wave
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