Rain and Pain

Easy on the spirit
It brings more bruises than healing
Drowning your miseries is not a good move
Just because you come here everyday
Doesn't mean her odd of showing up is greater
But yes, you will forget
how you shortchanged yourself
Of your love
But you will always remember
How she never could earn your trust
Of course, you now know
How wrong that was.

What you don't know
That day when you stood her up
The rain was incessant and non stop?
She tried so hard not to cry
She rushed outside to feel the rain
And drowned her pain
I wanted to offer my heart
But I just knew hers belongs to you.

Now you may play your life inside that glass
And suppress that sorrow inside your heart
But the truth is: she's gone and alone
In her cold and lonely tomb.

And you will never know
How much she has really loved you.
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Posted: Nov 2013
About this poem:
just remembering

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darkhorse555
heartfelt beautifully penned pieceangel
sundayrose1
Thank you Liam, my appreciation for your comments.

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mimzy333
this one is sure hitting home tonight my friens as i ponder on my own history
sundayrose1
Thanks my friend. Happy thanksgiving my friend

SR
orientalkoru
Very deep write SR...It is sad how sometimes we can love one but the one can never love us as much. It seems to me there is always one in a relationship that loves more, loves deeper... truer... it's their loss anyway. Choices...good or bad...how greatly they affect our lives... thumbs up teddybear
Poetnumber1
Moving reflective write. I enjoyed how you developed it throughout. hug
sundayrose1
My friend M...such nice of you to visit.. thanksbouquet SR
Spartacus2012
Hi S.R.,
Awesome introspective write..Thanks for sharing..

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sundayrose1
Thanks Ken, I am so glad you enjoyed it..

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Stephenmcnulty
I feel for this poem is sound like a real life event and it chills me. I feel shes crying in the ran and no one can see her tears . she knows the rain cover the pain. I send her love and care and healing strength. heart wings teddybear
sundayrose1
Stephen. I'm at awe eith your perceptiveness
Thanks. SR

My first time to see you at pc and welcome

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madtat29
Lots of raw realness...good write Phylliswine
Ravensgold
Wow, that's a powerful piece S.R...a sad but really enjoyable read..regards Anthony bouquet handshake
enigma2
I don't know what was story behind this beautiful poetry but I tell you what movie pictures went true my mind while reading it. Two people who loved each other dearly but where separated by distant continents and man had an affare with other women, due to lonliness and missing physical sutisfactions so the affer come in open althrough following regrat for consequences to lose real love of women that he adored but betrayal can't be undone and she's wondering could she forgive it, give understanding and overcome disapointments that her love was strong to fight all challenges while with all his love he couldn't overcome physical needs ...Sorry dear friend, I just have rich imagination. Great poem !thumbs up
ladyjewel
my sweet friend, a heart that has been hurt and bruised will always take so much longer to trust and sometimes will never know the heart that offers love is always hurt when they can't see.

One door has to close so you can see the one opening that is right for you, time heals and the bruises fade, and one day you understand why your path was here.teddybear teddybear bouquet
Serenity4two
Very deep and moving poem Phyllis ..
How wasteful and silly some are to throw away such a loving person sigh
Some people realise only when it's too late what they have truly lost .
A sorrowful yet beautifully touching poem indeed my friend -F hug bouquet
sundayrose1
Thanks so much Tony, now we finally have the rain. North Bay is little wet, what about you guys there?

thanks again.

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sundayrose1
Thanks tony. I appreciate.

SR
sundayrose1
I meant Anthony. Your visit always bring delight in my rather dark world.

thanks again.

SR
sundayrose1
Enigma my friend. I am always happy to see you on my write.

Thanks.

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beautifulyou
how you remind us that there are times if and when we leave another, we just may very well be leaving ourselves

ty, sundayrose rose
sundayrose1
Fiona how are you. Been praying. Love you dear friend

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enigma2
Sundayrose1; you are so beautiful in every way that person who could turn the back on you must be in deep pain to let you go sad flower
sundayrose1
how you remind us that there are times if and when we leave another, we just may very well be leaving ourselves


Beautiful you, your intuitiveness is so exacting and I can't thank you enough on this beautiful and inspiring comment. thank you as always.

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sundayrose1
Enigma my dear friend of mine. Thank you so much and I do appreciate all your comments on my poems and blogs.

Take care dear.

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sundayrose1
Mike your detailed comments are so delightful to read.

Thanks as always
Phyllis
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