Eternal Darkness

candykid

by candykidAshburn, Virginia, USA

Mar 2014 571 Views 5 comments

Eternal Darkness....

Author: candykid

A tempest of misery...
I know so well.
That frozen forest...
It's been my hell.
The veil is thin...
The ghosts await.
I can't resist...
This awful fate....

Broken glass,
The blood runs fast,
My God what have I done?
The pain won't end,
There is no sleep,
My hell has just begun....

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Posted: Mar 2014

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Comments (5)

Redex

RedexNorthumberland, England UKMar 16, 2014

I felt this hell good poem when someone feels the words.

darkhorse555

darkhorse555donegal, Donegal IrelandMar 30, 2014

touching in every sense beautifully crafted deep excellent piece of writing dear friend

Mizzy4

Mizzy4Navan, Meath IrelandMar 30, 2014

Strong lines of darkness.
Well penned Ck,..........Mick.

Girlygirl196349

Girlygirl196349Fullerton, California USAMar 30, 2014

So sad !many of us can relate to this.

Ahyra

AhyraAdelaide, South Australia AustraliaMar 30, 2014

I like the way you say it ck, I find it powerful. I reckon there are things we can't change but our attitude can make a difference

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