Oval Octagons Square Circles Part 2

by candykidAshburn, Virginia, USA

Apr 2014 1,149 Views 19 comments

Oval Octagons ( Square Circles Part 2 )

Trapezoids trap me with lines intersected...
Radial diameters internally fall...
Injected polygons, purely perfected...
Sick shapes help to build this foul wall...

Hexagonal angles just mangled my soul...
Perpendicular pretexts, I lost all control...
Pointless pentagons...
Oval octagans...
Geometrical shapes without tips keep me whole....

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Posted: Apr 2014

About this poem:

Part two of my poem Square Circles.

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Comments (19)

Spartacus2012Biloxi, Mississippi USAApr 26, 2014

You're a Vitruvian man Christian..lol Nice write!

Ken

darkhorse555donegal, Donegal IrelandApr 26, 2014

beautifully penned as always christian dear friend excellent vision

Mizzy4Navan, Meath IrelandApr 26, 2014

Well penned Christian !
I'm wondering what would
Pythagoras think......
Mick.

Joseph1112Brampton, Ontario CanadaApr 26, 2014

Another great write Candy, so unique! Ur in your own lane bro!

candykidOPAshburn, Virginia USAApr 29, 2014

Thanks everyone for your kind and specific comments. They are always welcomed.

RedexNorthumberland, England UKApr 29, 2014

you have a brilliant write here I enjoyed very much suits me down to the ground

fjamesj9701DunkinDonuts, Florida USAApr 29, 2014

I concur brilliant Ck…Jesse

candykidOPAshburn, Virginia USASep 9, 2014

Thanks Jesse. ........Bringing this back for Wayne.

ImagineLoveVenus, Montana USASep 9, 2014

Loving geometry, this is just pure awesome!

candykidOPAshburn, Virginia USAFeb 21, 2015

Thank you Jade.....miss you and hope you are doing well.

candykidOPAshburn, Virginia USAMar 14, 2015

Thanks Red. ....where's my sloe-gin fizz? ....

1949jeeptruckLangley, British Columbia CanadaMar 15, 2015

Excellent poem definitely reminds me of the ancient Greek Mathematician Pythagoras too.

beautifulyouNew York, USAMar 19, 2015

hi candykid,
this sharing feels of wisdom
i've not yet read a poem here that seems to touch on the sacred of geometry.. how good for each of us to be aware of what shapes keep us grounded in wholeness.

Sabastian1stveghel, North Brabant NetherlandsMar 19, 2015

Very nice I enjoyed your use many polygonal properties. I will take a lesson on including more of my own wealth of technical knowledge.

Cool dude,
Sabastian.