Reminds me of a "Human LifeForce Detector" for some reason. I don't know why but definitely a brain teaser. Good stuff, let ask the monkey to read it to me again
Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoOct 16, 2014
I thought this was cleverly done,entertaining, and flowed effortlessly Christian. Its about time that you brought out your wonderful poetry to the forefront. I think I did comment on this piece already. Have a great day ahead.
Comments (27)
Wonderfully verbose,Phil.
Ken
made me smile,
I love your "wordplay"
and you rhyme...
Great piece!
~SAS~
Super write Christian,
Don't ever press the ejector !
Mick
I might connect
Tis a poem me thinks
I must respect.
Great job!
Cafe
A clever and entertaining write.
Kudos
Bill
This is a mesmerizingly perfect wordplay. ????