FREEDOM

by niah9Auckland, New Zealand

Oct 2015 1,108 Views 14 comments

FREEDOM...

Author: niah9

Early morning, after first breath of light
Foggy mist drapes, before clouds flight
Wait warmth of sunshine, to lift and give
A spring days filled, with hope to live
Life as you desire, freedom your right
From breaking dawn, to the depth of night

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Posted: Oct 2015

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godsprincessOwego, New York USAOct 13, 2015

I can tell your spring is here - our Fall(autumn) is here. Leaves are colorful and blowing in the breeze. Today is rain and cold front coming in with colder air. Definitely not looking forward to winter. It was a bad one last winter. Continue to write about Spring and Summer as it will be some warmth into my world this winter!

niah9OPAuckland, New ZealandOct 13, 2015

I'm baking non stop at present for a friends mum's 100th birthday weekend...and have to get the main cooking done before the day turns too warm, usually after 1pm. The time comes after Christmas when it's hot from the start of day, but at present, a gradual rise in temps....and then a decrease.....I think spring and autumn has to be my favourite time of year....thanks for the comment Kathy

beautifulyouNew York, USAOct 13, 2015

Nice entrance into your poem Kathy

niah9OPAuckland, New ZealandOct 14, 2015

Thank you Beautifulyou....hope all is well in your life...

Kathy....

fjamesj9701DunkinDonuts, Florida USAOct 14, 2015

As lovely as ever... Cheers

niah9OPAuckland, New ZealandOct 16, 2015

thanks Jesse....hope all is going well for you.....

QuietStormFSouthern Ontario, Ontario CanadaOct 17, 2015

Beuatifull! How I wish it were the same here.. Spring again! Thanks for a lovely poem..

niah9OPAuckland, New ZealandOct 18, 2015

QuietStorm.....lovely to hear from you again, and the lovely dog.....thanks for reading the poem and leaving a comment...as we wait the weather to change for spring to summer....Kathy