marvelous lady

by salamunaDeventer, Overijssel, Netherlands

Mar 2021 539 Views 9 comments

marvelous lady

Madam! Keep your back straight.
Throwing the past on the altar,
Burn it silently,
Without regrets.
Pass to tomorrow
From yesterday..
Pass over the ashes of fire!
Does it still hurt ?!
Cannot be…
The fire is almost extinguished.
Smile please!
Look at yourself-
You are marvelous,
Aren't you?
Madam! Keep your back straight

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Posted: Mar 2021

About this poem:

To all our wonderful poet s corner ladies

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southmiami4321Tampa, Florida USAMar 8, 2021

Thank you Salamuna for your outlifting stimulus words, cause we have not receive our stimulus check yet as offered recently...We ladies have to stand up!! For those suffering from COVID at home don't lay on your back of relax back on your recliner not good for lungs I was told. Sleep on tummy and walk around every certain time as possible.
There are many ladies here with so much talents as there are too gentlemen. Thanks for sharing. SM

LaceyQueen21Norwich, Norfolk, England UKMar 8, 2021

Hi salamuna
Thanks for sharing this for us

all unique and marvellous in their special way

Mizzy4Navan, Meath IrelandMar 8, 2021

Hi there Lily,

Maybe male poets shouldn't comment

You have a very unique writing style and are up there with the best poets here.
Very thoughtful to pen this dedication for the C/S ladies.

Regards Mick.

salamunaOPDeventer, Overijssel NetherlandsMar 8, 2021

Thank you ladies SM and Lacey for you kind comments . Much appreciated. Lily

Mick, your comments are always welcome.
thank you for your appreciation of my poems, but I think you are exaggerating..there is a group of poets here of a very high level..i am as far away from them as getting to the moon. Lily

Mizzy4Navan, Meath IrelandMar 9, 2021

Hi Lily,

I was expressing my honest opinion,
So we'll agree to disagree on your poetic skills.
Stay safe and keep writing..

Regards Mick.

godsprincessOwego, New York USAMar 9, 2021

You are the Queen of the Peacemakers in poetry corner Lily. Words to live by as the past for me is sometimes hard to throw on the fire. Take care dear poet. I agree with Mick.

Kathy

salamunaOPDeventer, Overijssel NetherlandsMar 9, 2021

Hi dear Kathy! thank you so much for reading and leaving comment.. Peacemaker? is it really so? stay well. Btw ive sent you a private message on bacebook.. Lily

Mick thank you one more time..very much appreciated . Lily

Sommai2Hanoi, Red River Delta VietnamAug 27, 2021

You are so beautiful in thoughts, Lily!! As women, we should do it, and always:))

salamunaOPDeventer, Overijssel NetherlandsAug 27, 2021

Sommai, many thanks for stopping by. Glad you like my thoughts. Lily