Autumn s love

by salamunaDeventer, Overijssel, Netherlands

Oct 28 479 Views 7 comments

Autumn"s love

The smell of sea foam,
The color of burning leaves
The sound of a flying wedge of cranes
It is autumn, my friend!
Only the boulevard lamp is in bloom ,
On cast iron branches
Illuminating the darkness.
It is autumn, my friend!
The trembling thoughts about
How to save all your loved ones
It is autumn, my friend!
And the tears of love
To everything that dies now
Without this love.
It is autumn, my friend!

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Posted: Oct 28

About this poem:

Many thanks,Mick for your challenge

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Comments (7)

Mizzy4Navan, Meath IrelandOct 28

Many thanks Lily for joining the challenge,
It's good to stir up some poetic activity...
I think your Autumnal poem is one of your best poems so far on the corner,

" It is autumn, my friend!
Only the boulevard lamp is in bloom ,
On cast iron branches
Illuminating the darkness."

This is beautiful imagery. I also know that there is deep meaning in your metaphors.
Take care Lily,
Mick.

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carlameePlano, Texas USAOct 28

I like this poem.
It's great to experience the changing of the seasons.

daradloffPlatteville, Wisconsin USAOct 29

The fall leaves are still holding on, lots of orange and yellow out there yet.

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Happychatty1unknown, Lancashire, England UKDec 6

Very interesting and thought provoking poem to read, thanks for sharing it

salamunaOPDeventer, Overijssel NetherlandsDec 6

Thank you guys, Mick, Carlamee,Mcradloff, Happychatty for your lovely comments. Wish all of you Merry Christmas soon, greetings from rainy Netherlands,Lily

godsprincessOwego, New York USADec 6

Still sending hugs and prayers Lily - love wins over for eternity. Prayers for your loved ones in danger. Prayers for peace and the end of war.

Kathy

salamunaOPDeventer, Overijssel NetherlandsDec 7

Thank you my dear friend Kathy. I hope all will be over very soon. Tonight starts Hanukkah.. Then Christmas.. Let the light come into our houses. Lily