All we need is love

by salamunaDeventer, Overijssel, Netherlands

Dec 2021 621 Views 20 comments

All we need is love)))

Do you want me to give you my love?
Yes. Give it to me...
First I would like to ask ...
Any question.
Suppose I knock on your door
I'll let you in.
And if I will cheat on you?
I will forgive .
And if I tell you: die! ..
I will die.
And if there will be a pain?
I will accept it
And if there appears a wall between us?
I will break it.
Still want me to give you my love?
Yes, give it to me
This will never happen!
Why?!
Because I do not need a slave))))

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Posted: Dec 2021

About this poem:

Just wanted to wish Happy 2022 to all our poets! stay safe, healthy, loving and loved ones))

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Comments (20)

salamunaOPDeventer, Overijssel NetherlandsDec 28, 2021

Hi Mick! absulutely right.. but however i d not like to get a broken hart even from Santa )) Have a wonderfull 2022 ! Lily

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godsprincessOwego, New York USADec 28, 2021

Have a Healthy, Happy and Blessed New Year Lily!!

Kathy

OceanzestHamilton, Waikato New ZealandDec 29, 2021

Ah guys, broken hearts are for people who equate love with business, you gotta find the right way to love..

Best for 2022!!

salamunaOPDeventer, Overijssel NetherlandsDec 29, 2021

Many thanks dear Kathy. have a great and blessed 2022! Lily

salamunaOPDeventer, Overijssel NetherlandsDec 29, 2021

Hi ocean. thank you for stopping by. would you share your experience of the right way to love..? ))
Happy 2022 ! Lily

lovecanberealSydney, New South Wales AustraliaDec 29, 2021

Hi, salamuna

Take care during the festive season, best wishes for 2022....long live poet's corner!

lovecanberealSydney, New South Wales AustraliaDec 29, 2021

long live Poet's Corner!

hey....were writers!....punctuation matters!...

salamunaOPDeventer, Overijssel NetherlandsDec 29, 2021

thank you lovecanbereal! you too take care and just be happy and healthy in 2022! Lily

mcradloffPlatteville, Wisconsin USADec 29, 2021

You have a happy and healthy 2022 too!

Mizzy4Navan, Meath IrelandDec 30, 2021

Hi Lily,

I'm holding my breath waiting for Ocean's
answer...
I hope he has a good explanation.

Best wishes...
Mick.

salamunaOPDeventer, Overijssel NetherlandsDec 30, 2021

Me too Mick. Maybe he is too busy now.let s hope he will answer . Lily

OceanzestHamilton, Waikato New ZealandDec 31, 2021

Sure Lily, love without any expectation of return, love what's best for your lover, simple.
I'm still practicing

optimisticmeathlone, Westmeath IrelandJan 2, 2022

An interesting poem, a view on life that I have not thought of, and to be honest, I'm glad I didn't.

optimisticmeathlone, Westmeath IrelandJan 2, 2022

Either you are heartless, or someone did this to you,,,I just find it heartless, horrible feeling.

optimisticmeathlone, Westmeath IrelandJan 2, 2022

hmmm, ok,,, I got it! had to read it a while!

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southmiami4321Tampa, Florida USAJan 3, 2022

Love opens almost everyone's door but has different entrances. Nice poem. Happy 2022...Salamuna. SM

salamunaOPDeventer, Overijssel NetherlandsJan 3, 2022

Hi ocean. Thank you for your answer. I ve got what you mean.. for me love is smth more than just having a lover...i would more say-a partner , a friend.. but ok...the main topic is uncoditional love..totally agree. have a great year! Lily

Hi optimisticme. thank you for stopping by.
This was a kind of humorous poem, with a desire to support our poets who were not lucky in love. Lily

SM, many thanks for reading and leaving comment. I hope you are doing better now. have a wonderful year. Lily