No space anymore

by salamunaDeventer, Overijssel, Netherlands

Nov 7 1,062 Views 22 comments

No space anymore

People are coming
And leaving our life
Just like trains...
Hypocritical ones and real,
For a moment , like playing games...
Some will go deep
Into your soul
Whilst the others
Are like a going away smoke...
Coming... leaving...
Both leave a mark
In your heart.
But one day
When some of them
Will knock into your door
You will quietly say-
Sorry, there is no space
For you anymore.....

~ ~ ~ ~ ~

Posted: Nov 7

About this poem:

I ve just met a lot of bad people for the last month... but also a few of the good ones.....anyway it s a kind of overflowing for my hart

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godsprincessOwego, New York USANov 7

Sending hugs Lily!! I know things are hard for you right now! Your in my thoughts and prayers every day!

Kathy

salamunaOPDeventer, Overijssel NetherlandsNov 7

Thank you dear Kathy. You are my greatest supporter. I hope all will be good again . A big hug from Netherlands. Lily

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southmiami4321Tampa, Florida USANov 7

Salamuna, be with you, my Dear Poet. Hardship in life really tackles us in unrepresented ways; yet someone will give you a supporting hand. Don't know your situation but we that post here most of us share and support. Any time, email me if that can be of any help. Sending many virtual hugs...

Mizzy4Navan, Meath IrelandNov 7

Very powerful writing Lily,
It's upsetting to experience good and evil side by side. Hypocrisy should not be afforded any space in our lives.

Best wishes Lily,
I'll write soon.
Mick.

salamunaOPDeventer, Overijssel NetherlandsNov 8

Thank you dear SM and Mick for your kind words. I do appreciate it a lot. Lily

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carlameePlano, Texas USANov 8

Reading your poem gives the feeling of frustration.
It seems people don't develop genuine bonds anymore.
Take care of yourself and your heart.
Let them earn that friendship.

salamunaOPDeventer, Overijssel NetherlandsNov 8

Many thanks Carlamee

ladyjewelDurban, KwaZulu-Natal South AfricaNov 13

This made me think of a picture I saw once,
An old field with remains of a war, but growing through the broken gun's and smashed buildings were the most beautiful rose's.
Nature finds a way to make even the worst situation turn into something worthwhile.

All those people who appeared to break you, were there to show you what you do not need in your life, and show you what to expect in the person or people who are still going to be important in your life

life moulds us but it also shows us how precious we are

Abby1963California, USANov 14

Great write I could feel your words cling off the page

Abby1963California, USANov 14

Nice write. I could feel your words coming off the page

Abby1963California, USANov 14

Nice write. I could feel your words coming off the page

Abby1963California, USANov 14

Oops sorry about The duplicated comments

salamunaOPDeventer, Overijssel NetherlandsNov 14

Ladyjewel..thank you for your warm words

Many thanks Laura for the multiple comments. I really appreciate it.

ZoharstriusGrand Rapids, MI, Michigan USANov 25

to the OP: Salamuna,

Prayer bits upon the tongue as I release the breath unto the smoke
a Sip of Coffee and a vape, Its okay cause its a healthier toke
yet your poem No space anymore left me afixed on what I could be
if within my being I could be for you what might just set you free

Yet in the end of those precarious thoughts I rested upon a place
A place wherein memories grew, ones to be remembered and not replaced
And I thought perhaps just a hello might suffice to start your day
Than some misplaced smoke in a mind of resentment, for the heart at play

SO I will start and aloud I'll say it though I trudge ever-softly here
tis nice to unofficially meet you My idea of you is one without fear
The desire I would have for myself is the same id have for you
No matter the cost the battle to win no matter what to yourself be true

Hello

salamunaOPDeventer, Overijssel NetherlandsNov 26

Thank you Zoharstrius for stopping by and for your nice Hello.

Musa22Saudi Arabia, Ar Riyad Saudi ArabiaNov 26

I am an Arab and I want a girl to be his life partner. If there is a woman who does not mind marrying in an Arab, write to us privately

TrippleVanillaWashington, Michigan USANov 28

Sending a poem i hope you enjoy it, if thats not the case go ahead and destroy it…i hope you find someone wonderful and nice , and it doesn’t turn cold ,in time , just like ice.

The rose and the woman

What is the beautiful flower without the eye to behold its beauty i ask, or the nose to smell the fine aroma that cannot be matched by the unique beauty itself.
To be without the smile is to be without the rose??

Hopefully the dreams you have will fall into place and find the joy you need to bloom just as the beautiful rose shares its beauty .??

daradloffPlatteville, Wisconsin USADec 15

There are certainly a lot of people out there I wish I had never met, and knowing I have only four more hours this year with some of these at work , it is a happy feeling!

salamunaOPDeventer, Overijssel NetherlandsDec 15

Thank you Tripple vanilla for your nice comment and your poem

Daradloff, thanks for reading and leaving comment. You ve made your best choice I guess..enjoy your life and Merry Christmas to you

germanspitzingoldmells, Lincolnshire, England UKDec 16

All you meet will leave a mark
Some good ,some bad and some quite stark
How we as humans deal with strife
Depends on how we perceive life

As adults we should always stay
True to ourselves and rarely stray
A path well travelled is never straight
but always leads to Heaven's gate.

salamunaOPDeventer, Overijssel NetherlandsDec 17

GermanSpitz thanks for stopping bij . Appreciated